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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 68

    Story written on July 26, 2005 by OCD.
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    Someone is kidnapped.

     

    It was starting to get dark outside as the crew sat down to admire their work.  The room was finished except for the last coat of paint.  Dana would surely be pleased with how the room turned out.  Everyone had just sat down when they heard Amy and Josh running into the house screaming.

     

    “Mommy!!!!!”  They both screamed at the top of their lungs running in the back door. 

     

    “What’s wrong?”  Whit said as Josh ran into her arms crying.

     

    “Mommy, stranger..”  Josh said.

     

    “Amy where Jordan?”  Bette said as Amy cried so hard she couldn’t understand her.  “Where is Jordan, Amy?”  Bette asked again as she grabbed Amy up into her arms.

     

    Charles and Shane ran out the back door as everyone followed.  Jordan was no where to be found.  Trying desperately to calm Amy down and find out where Jordan was, Bette knelt down and held Amy in front of her.

     

    “Amy, calm down baby.  Where is your brother?  Where is Jordan, Amy?”  Bette softly spoke.

     

    “Mommy a man.”  Amy said crying again.

     

    “A man what?!”  Whit said.

     

    “Calm down Whit.  You know you can’t get answers like that.”  Cruz said turning on her cop senses. 

     

    “A man talked to us from the fence.  He told Jordan he lost his puppy.  I told Jordan not to go near the fence but he did anyway.  Mommy, I told him not to.  I did.”  Amy said.

     

    “What happened next, honey?”  Cruz asked as she kneeled down to Amy’s level.

     

    “Jordan walked closer to see the picture of the man’s puppy and he grabbed Jordan from over the fence.”  Amy cried.

     

    “HE WHAT?!!!”  Bette yelled starting to cry and shake with worry.

     

    “Mommy, He dwopped this.”  Josh said. 

     

    “Oh my god.”  Whit said handing the picture by the corner to Cruz.  “Bette.  We’ll find him, I swear.  I am so sorry Bette.”  Whit said trying to console her. 

     

    “I am calling the police and we will find him Bette, I promise.”  Cruz said as she glanced at the picture before putting it down on the table telling them not to touch it.

     

    Cruz set up a perimeter so no one would walk in the area where the man had been when  he took Jordan from over the fence.  Looking for foot prints and clues, Whit and Cruz could see that it appeared to be a very big man maybe. 

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    2. My thoughts and prayers are with you and Petluvr. You need to take care of yourself, too. Here’s my crime solving thoughts, I think that Jennifer’s parents are behind the kidnapping!!!

    3. TK,
      You and Petlvr are in my thoughts and prayers. Wishing you both all good things and a full recovery.
      I am humbled by the brilliance of your storytelling especially in these difficult times.
      If you need anything then just let me know and I will endeavor to help you however I can.
      You have yet again set up a very intriguing plot line. I am equally puzzled and enthralled by this turn of events. Who is this mysterious woman and is she behind the re-emergence of Jennifer’s parents? Is this all a bit of subterfuge to cover up her true plan?
      I hope you can share the answers with us all real soon.
      Baited breathe until then.
      Thank you for this marvelous mystery,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    7. Hey, girl. Just hang in there. Be strong. We all root for you and wish you the best.

      When you look into an abyss, the abyss also looks into you.—Friedrich Nietzsche

      So, um… how about looking towards the horizon and seeing forever?

    11. OCD I’m sorry to hear about Petlvr and hope she will go through and get well soon! Good chapter. Damn who the hell is that and why that crazy basterd have to kidnap Bette’s son, and glad Jordon is ok. Please post soon, thanks!

    12. OCD, I am sorry about Petlvr. I know how hard it is to live through what you are experiencing now. Try not to ignore your health during this. She will need you later, also.

    15. Im so sorry abpout Petlvr. I hope you both get well and I will keep u in my prayers. That was crazy shit. I loved it!!!Great update as usual.

    16. OCD I am sorry to hear about Petlvr’s stroke. As you have researched this topic you know she is going to make it. It will take some time but with your Love, therapy and plenty of prayers she will get better. Now don’t neglect your own health issues during this crisis. We can wait for the next chapter under these circumstances.

    19. OMG!! Excellent as always and I am so sorry to hear about Petlvr I hope she makes a speedy recovery and you take care of yourself I haope you are feeling better..We are saying our prayers for you both…

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