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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 68

    Story written on July 26, 2005 by OCD.
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    Someone is kidnapped.

     

    Detectives arrived after the Patrol Officers.  They took the picture and carefully placed it in a plastic bag to be fingerprinted ASAP.  Cruz worked with Amy trying to get more information from her about what the man looked like.  Josh kept saying Boo car, but no one understood him.  Amy said it was a tall big white man with short dark hair and he was very nice, thanks to Cruz playing 20 questions with her. 

     

    Bette wasn’t able to calm down enough to call Tina, so Shane took the phone.  But instead of calling Tina she called Alice.  Explaining what had happened and not to tell Tina just yet.  Shane told Alice to get everyone home now. 

     

    Detective Clements’s worked with Whit trying to get her to  remember anyone matching that description that she had arrested or sent to prison.  With all the alcohol Whit had consumed she was having a hard time thinking clearly.

     

    Alice finally got the girls home and once they drove up Tina, Stacey and Dana ran into the house in a panic seeing all of the police cars.  Lara stopped Dana as soon as she entered and whispered what had happened.  Whit was still talking to Detective Clements outside so Kit asked Charles what was going on.  They all sat down in Dana’s family room where Tina found Bette crying uncontrollably.  Cruz sat Tina down and explained what had happened since Bette still could not speak.  Tina became just as hysterical now with Stacey and Dana trying to calm her down. 

    Amy broke loose from Shane in the bedroom once she heard her mother’s voice.  Running into the family room Josh followed Amy.  Amy climbed into Tina and Bette’s arms as Josh ran to Stacey.

     

    “Boo car mommy.”  Josh repeated. 

     

    “Blue car baby?”  Stacey said.

     

    “Yes, boo car.  Man boo car, mommy.”  Josh said again.

     

    “Cruz, it’s a blue car.  That’s what Josh has been saying, blue car”  Stacey said running towards Whit and Cruz and the crowd of police officers. 

     

    “Blue car?  Garage?  Puppy?”  Cruz said heading for Detective Clements’s.  “Where’s the picture Kelly?  I think I recognize something.”  Cruz said.

     

    Kelly handed Cruz the photo and she studied it carefully.  “OH GOD!  I know this garage.  I know where this is  WHIT!  It’s the guy we arrested for the Meth lab 2 years ago.  I remember this garage.  Look see, there’s that stupid sticker on the glass over the door that was so out of place.”  Cruz said showing Whit the photo.

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    2. My thoughts and prayers are with you and Petluvr. You need to take care of yourself, too. Here’s my crime solving thoughts, I think that Jennifer’s parents are behind the kidnapping!!!

    3. TK,
      You and Petlvr are in my thoughts and prayers. Wishing you both all good things and a full recovery.
      I am humbled by the brilliance of your storytelling especially in these difficult times.
      If you need anything then just let me know and I will endeavor to help you however I can.
      You have yet again set up a very intriguing plot line. I am equally puzzled and enthralled by this turn of events. Who is this mysterious woman and is she behind the re-emergence of Jennifer’s parents? Is this all a bit of subterfuge to cover up her true plan?
      I hope you can share the answers with us all real soon.
      Baited breathe until then.
      Thank you for this marvelous mystery,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    7. Hey, girl. Just hang in there. Be strong. We all root for you and wish you the best.

      When you look into an abyss, the abyss also looks into you.—Friedrich Nietzsche

      So, um… how about looking towards the horizon and seeing forever?

    11. OCD I’m sorry to hear about Petlvr and hope she will go through and get well soon! Good chapter. Damn who the hell is that and why that crazy basterd have to kidnap Bette’s son, and glad Jordon is ok. Please post soon, thanks!

    12. OCD, I am sorry about Petlvr. I know how hard it is to live through what you are experiencing now. Try not to ignore your health during this. She will need you later, also.

    15. Im so sorry abpout Petlvr. I hope you both get well and I will keep u in my prayers. That was crazy shit. I loved it!!!Great update as usual.

    16. OCD I am sorry to hear about Petlvr’s stroke. As you have researched this topic you know she is going to make it. It will take some time but with your Love, therapy and plenty of prayers she will get better. Now don’t neglect your own health issues during this crisis. We can wait for the next chapter under these circumstances.

    19. OMG!! Excellent as always and I am so sorry to hear about Petlvr I hope she makes a speedy recovery and you take care of yourself I haope you are feeling better..We are saying our prayers for you both…

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