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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter five
“I am…” Tina finally murmured lifting her watery eyes and through blurry tears tried to scrutinise the tanned face which looked worryingly back at her. “I am attracted to you… is that so bad?” she confessed.
The hand which was still running along her arm stopped its action for a few seconds, as if deliberating the words which Tina had just admitted to. It resumed its slow movement however this time breaking its course to continue up her shoulder and up her neck until it tenderly cupped her cheek. She felt Bette and her own body get closer together as if it were the most natural progression. Her heart beat wildly so much so that it pulsed through her fingertips as she tentatively touched the arm of the woman in front of her. Surely if Bette didn’t hear her heart beating she would feel the beat trying to escape through the tips of her fingers.
But the next thing she knew, Bette’s mouth was hovering over hers, her breath warming her cold skin. Tina’s eyes filtered shut as their lips met.
Warm, soft and tender.
Tina was taken aback at first and stiffened at the contact; more stunned that she and Bette were actually kissing, that this was actually a reality more than anything. But it only took an instant for her to respond just as hungrily and affectionately.
She felt Bette’s other hand snake along her upper back, pulling her flush against her. Her tongue gently skimmed along her lower lip and Tina eagerly met her, caressing the sensitive muscle and causing a low moan to escape from her throat.
That sound seemed to urge Bette and Tina suddenly felt the hard surface of a nearby wall hit her back. They hadn’t spoken as yet or halted their kissing frenzy.
Tina felt like she had never felt before. The simple act of kissing Bette made her feel like she was burning from the inside out and she was determined to let this fire consume her.
Luscious raven black locks of hair were all Tina could see and the hands on her body were all she could feel.
All this was moving so fast that Tina did not have time to think. Hell, she did not want to think.
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Sorry to hear about your computer problems. Glad you got to resort to plan D.
It was a absolutely 10 stars update.
I only didn’t see Tina’s first time with Bette like that coming, against a wall, but it shouldn’t be so surprising considering how Bette can be. Her second time was filled with tenderness.
I wonder how you are going to preceed with Tina returning to London and Bette staying behind.
I think Tina should mature and make something from her life, less partying, more working and less a daddy’s girl., before their is a healthy chance for a relationship between them.
oke, enough rambling, thanks for a great update!
….and that folks is how you write an NC17
Great chapter Kins my dear friend…Full of passion and desire for one another..A Tibette coming together..I bet
Tina wont be in any great hurry to return to London
So looking forward to the next chapter and possibly some more getting to know one another even better.
Loved it sweetie….PPS…C xx
That is how you do it!! Now, that my dear friends is love at its best! I’m having computer issues too. PPS
First the Dallas Cowboys win and now this..I am having a lucky day..gosh I love this story…now im waiting for their reaction afterwards
A lots of butterflies inside my stomach now…. Thank you for a great update. Pps
Absolutely beautifully written. I too was as dizzy as Tina as I read. It’s so good to have you back, Kins.
Just amazing! Bette devoured Tina. Your writing is simply sublime. And your NC-17s are passionate but not tawdry.
Wow!!! Tina has finally had her curiosity sated and questions answered in a magnificent way by the one and only Bette Porter. She can now say, “damn, so that’s what it is all about and how I’m supposed to feel after. My curiosity has been peaked regarding Bette since Tina first stumbled upon her and the chalet. What in the world is she doing in such an isolated area or is it really isolated, what does she do for a living and what has she been saying to Tina’s father to give him peace of mind about Tina being hurt and lost in such an isolated area. So many questions about our one and only. Fantastic story as always Kins. So happy to have you back with us. Thanks for posting and have a great week.
Wonderful to have you back posting Kins! You are a talented storyteller and writer with no need to resort to bad language to produce a truly passionate post. Thank you.
Sorry for your computer problems but good that you have enough reserve Plans to post!
Hoping the various Plan Options enable a follow up Chapter asap!
WOW! What chapter. I loved it, absolutely loved it.
although I still love the love of Tibette.
It was passionate, hot, and very gentle and loving. I love the way you write.
I wonder what will happen next. maybe it is a turning point in their relationship? or an eternal reminder?
I hope Tina stays for a while, and she realizes that this is what was missing in her life so far!
It was great and I look forward to the next chapter.
Great test drive! I bet this was more than Tina was hoping for! And now what? Hope your pc feels better. Wonderful to have you back!
The snow around the house should have melted all
! because it was too hot inside.
Love that NC 17 was of great quality.
Let’s see how they will look from now.
10 stars.
I have no doubt that you are simply one of the greatest here. I so love this story. I know that you have a lot of surprises for us regarding Bette’s background and I’m so excited for it.
I love you. Haha! Please post soon!
Scribe
Oh.My.God. It’s been a long time since I’ve read one of these NC-17. Yikes and holy smokes…all in a good way.
I wonder if Bette works for Tina’s father….hmm. I can’t wait to read more.
T
wow! That was HOT Kins!
Keep it coming dear friend! Amazing as always.
Oh damn that was hot and beautiful