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    Get The Girl—Chapter 1: The Ring

    “Porter!..What about the ring?” She asked in an annoyed tone

    Porter?…Damn….No one has called me that besides Alyssa

    “It’s personal to her.  You have seen it right?”

    Tina looks less annoyed now.  Thank God

    “Yeah.  The one on her right ring finger.  I notice everything about her” she sighs

    I roll my eyes a little.

    “Of course you do” I chuckle which earned a glare from the blonde “Anyway.  The ring is sentimental.  Ask her about it”

    “How?”  She asks seriously

    Really?…This girl here I swear

    “Kennard..Do you not know how to start a conversation?”

    She rolls her eyes “Kennard huh.” Her lips curling into a slight smile. “And yes I know how…I meant what would be the best way to bring it up?”

    “I’m leaving that up to you.  I give you the tips and you take care of the rest..Simple” I say nonchalantly

    “Oh yeah sure..So simple” she says sarcastically and stabs at her salad

    I sigh

    “Ok look.  Is she still tutoring you?”

    She nods and I continue

    “Alyssa is oblivious most of the time. So when she is explaining whatever problem to you just ask.  I swear you won’t go wrong however you decide.  Just act Interested and she will talk about it”

    “Oh I certainly won’t have any problem with that because I’m interested in anything Alyssa has to say” she says happily and I know if the idiot would give Tina a chance she would treat her like a queen.

    I nod “Well then you are good to go”

    There was silence as we ate until Tina spoke

    “I still don’t see how that is going to get Alyssa interested in me…I mean I would ask her things about her basketball and soccer to get her to talk and she would.  I really thought we were getting closer” she said sounding sad and it kind of bothered me

    “What made you think you were getting closer?..Did she do something?” I asked curiously

    Tina shrugs her shoulders

    “Kind of… It was like one day we were at the park and we had set a blanket down with our books…It was a nice day so we didn’t want to meet in the library. We were both on our stomachs side by side working our problems and she just stopped put her pencil down and turned to me… I noticed this and looked at her and she just said “I’m really enjoying spending time with you” and she smiles picked up her pencil and started working the problems again..I just smiled and said “Me too”…she turned and smiled at me for a second and I was feeling all these butterflies”

    Comments

    1. Camz19,

      This story is compelling. Two chapters in and I can’t get enough. I’m loving: Bette & Tina developing these feelings and thoughts of each other; the soulmates ring! (I believe in these things, lol). And then ending this chapter with this part of Bette’s story – wow. “Just maybe…In the process I can help myself.” A great line.

      I love the way you write. So looking forward to more.

    2. Just when I was wondering how Bette was gonna have ANY chance of being Bette’s soulmate after Tina touched the ring given to her for inspection, and the stone glowed yellow, U had Tina do the calculus and realize that Bette had ALSO held the ring.

      Excellent writing!

      Hmmmm the info on the accident that Bette’s diabolical step-dog Dad inflicted that left Bette in what had to be an absolutely terrifying state, was really unexpected turn for me. Burned over 50% of her body??? HORRIFIC and soooo sad . . . I’m thankful that was given psychiatric treatment.

      So was that “he-devil” trying to show his objection to her sexuality? or trying to use Bette as a replacement for his dearly departed wife???

      Anyway, wonder how Alyssa and Tina will respond to Bette’s scarring from the accident.

    3. Your humor is sweet:

      Tina: “Still silence … shit…I’m gonna kill Porter”
      “My ring?” She finally asks surprised.

      “Well it took her long enough to answer but thank goodness she finally did… The KILLING of Porter is temporarily ON HOLD”.

    4. Great story so far!

      I feel so sorry for Bette, a stepfather who wanted her dead, lied about her absence but finally got what he deserved. But people who knew people and that he got what he deserved? I’m concerned that Bette might still be in trouble if it turns out that she’s involved.
      The glimpses of what Bette went through breaks my heart, as painful as it will be to read what happened, I want to know and I want to know what she means by her last comment:

      “My instinct says I can trust her and I also have this overwhelming need to help her get her girl…..And maybe…Just maybe…In the process I can help myself.”

      Help herself in what way???

      Love this story so far!

    5. I want to thank those that have commented so far on this story and for reading…..I really appreciate it

      As for Bette’s story…It will unfold throughout and as for Bibi28’s question. When Bette talks about helping herself in the last line she is talking about healing and moving forward. And no she will not be in trouble in this story. You will find out what happened with her stepfather that also revolves around her mothers death and Bette was not directly responsible for her step fathers death. And nothing of any trouble regarding that will take place. You will find out everything as the story goes along but this is what the following story is focused on.

      1. Bette helping Tina with her crush Alyssa
      2. Tina being instrumental in repairing Alyssa and Bette’s friendship
      3. Tina being emotional support once what happened to Bette is revealed to her. (Hence they grow closer.)
      4. Bette’s feelings growing for Tina and finding it hard to suppress them. Tina dismisses her growing feelings and pull towards Bette because she is so focused on getting her crush Alyssa.

      So there you have it. It’s going to be a bumpy rollercoaster but have faith for the end my Tibetters

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