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Get The Girl—Chapter 1: The Ring
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“Ok well that doesn’t sound bad. I mean Alyssa wouldn’t have said that if she didn’t like spending time with you”
“Yeah but I wasn’t finished telling the rest” she chuckled and I mouthed ‘sorry’ as she continued “So I got the nerve to ask her if she would like to come over to my house and she said she would love too….”
Ok now I’m confused but I keep my mouth shut for her to continue
“……..I said great how about tomorrow after school and she said ok. I was planning on telling her how I felt. But guess what. She texted me that night and said she couldn’t come over now and showed up the next day with Holly on her arm….I was crushed”
“So this just happened. Like a week ago?” I asked feeling very angry at my best friend and watched Tina sadly nod her head
“Yeah and now she just completely ignores me. I try to talk to her and it’s quick like she can’t wait to get away from me. I haven’t had any tutoring with her since then but next week we are supposed to once Ms Roberts gives us another assignment..I have three other classes besides Calculus with her I’m kind of worried that this isn’t going to work Bette”
Tina
And I honestly didn’t because Alyssa has totally been ignoring me. I don’t really know if she will continue tutoring me. I turn my head when I feel a hand on my shoulder and see it belongs to Bette.
“Hey…I know you are discouraged but try. I know Alyssa…I mean granted we have kind of drifted apart but a zebra doesn’t change his stripes. Or her stripes…I feel confident that you will get what you want” she says so sweetly it instantly makes feel better. And she’s looking at me with such concern like she really cares and she doesn’t even know me but yet I feel comfortable with her.
She removes her hand and smiles at me and I instantly miss the contact. I’m not sure why. I guess I’m just anxious about this whole thing
“Just try Tina..Ok?”
I nod my head “Thanks”
“Don’t mention it” she says looking at her watch
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Camz19,
This story is compelling. Two chapters in and I can’t get enough. I’m loving: Bette & Tina developing these feelings and thoughts of each other; the soulmates ring! (I believe in these things, lol). And then ending this chapter with this part of Bette’s story – wow. “Just maybe…In the process I can help myself.” A great line.
I love the way you write. So looking forward to more.
Just when I was wondering how Bette was gonna have ANY chance of being Bette’s soulmate after Tina touched the ring given to her for inspection, and the stone glowed yellow, U had Tina do the calculus and realize that Bette had ALSO held the ring.
Excellent writing!
Hmmmm the info on the accident that Bette’s diabolical step-dog Dad inflicted that left Bette in what had to be an absolutely terrifying state, was really unexpected turn for me. Burned over 50% of her body??? HORRIFIC and soooo sad . . . I’m thankful that was given psychiatric treatment.
So was that “he-devil” trying to show his objection to her sexuality? or trying to use Bette as a replacement for his dearly departed wife???
Anyway, wonder how Alyssa and Tina will respond to Bette’s scarring from the accident.
Your humor is sweet:
Tina: “Still silence … shit…I’m gonna kill Porter”
“My ring?” She finally asks surprised.
“Well it took her long enough to answer but thank goodness she finally did… The KILLING of Porter is temporarily ON HOLD”.
Great story so far!
I feel so sorry for Bette, a stepfather who wanted her dead, lied about her absence but finally got what he deserved. But people who knew people and that he got what he deserved? I’m concerned that Bette might still be in trouble if it turns out that she’s involved.
The glimpses of what Bette went through breaks my heart, as painful as it will be to read what happened, I want to know and I want to know what she means by her last comment:
“My instinct says I can trust her and I also have this overwhelming need to help her get her girl…..And maybe…Just maybe…In the process I can help myself.”
Help herself in what way???
Love this story so far!
I want to thank those that have commented so far on this story and for reading…..I really appreciate it
As for Bette’s story…It will unfold throughout and as for Bibi28’s question. When Bette talks about helping herself in the last line she is talking about healing and moving forward. And no she will not be in trouble in this story. You will find out what happened with her stepfather that also revolves around her mothers death and Bette was not directly responsible for her step fathers death. And nothing of any trouble regarding that will take place. You will find out everything as the story goes along but this is what the following story is focused on.
1. Bette helping Tina with her crush Alyssa
2. Tina being instrumental in repairing Alyssa and Bette’s friendship
3. Tina being emotional support once what happened to Bette is revealed to her. (Hence they grow closer.)
4. Bette’s feelings growing for Tina and finding it hard to suppress them. Tina dismisses her growing feelings and pull towards Bette because she is so focused on getting her crush Alyssa.
So there you have it. It’s going to be a bumpy rollercoaster but have faith for the end my Tibetters
Hola me gusta esta historia la verdad es que veremos una montaña rusa de emociones con
todo lo que va a pasar me dejaste con ganas de
leer más espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo, gracias.
Hooked on your Tibette story. Looking forward to your bumpy rollercoaster ride.