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Get The Girl—Chapter 1: The Ring
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“Shit…I have Physics in 5 minutes”
I look at my phone “Yeah I have Chemistry”
Bette smirks “With Alyssa. Maybe if you get a chance you won’t have to wait for tutoring to ask about her ring”
I smile
“Give me your phone?” She’s asks and I push it over to her. She picks it up
“What are you doing?”
“I’m putting me in your contacts when you are ready for your next tip” she says cockily
“What if it doesn’t work hotshot?”
She smirks “Oh it will” she says giving me my phone back. She gets up with her tray.
“Will you be ok. I hate to run off but I have to go clear across campus to get to Mr Weathersby’s room”
I wave her off “I’m good. I’m about to head out in the other direction anyway”
She nods and is about to leave but I stand up and grab her arm
“Wait” I say and loosen my grip when she turns around “Thank you..Seriously..You didn’t have to do this..So thank you”
She nods and smiles without saying another word and I watch her walk away just as the bell rang signaling the end of class and lunch
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O….M…..G. I’m going to die right now as I just got paired with Alyssa for a Chemistry lab experiment. This is fate right..It has to be and one good thing about being in Chemistry is there is no Holly. I’m sure she would probably melt being around the bunsen burners anyway
“Hey” Alyssa says shyly as I meet her at our assigned station
“Hey” I reply timidly. I feel like I’m going to be sick. I’m so nervous as I stare at the lab assignment sheet
“So what all equipment do we need?” She asks and brushes her arm against mine as she looks down at the list
“A beaker, 3 tubes,…” she begins reading off the list and I can help but feel my heart beat fast. Having her this close to me is making me lightheaded. I shake my head to focus
“Ok it says we need to pour all three solutions in the beaker and watch for the reactions and record the color and temperature” I instruct and Alyssa takes the lead in doing the experiment.
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Camz19,
This story is compelling. Two chapters in and I can’t get enough. I’m loving: Bette & Tina developing these feelings and thoughts of each other; the soulmates ring! (I believe in these things, lol). And then ending this chapter with this part of Bette’s story – wow. “Just maybe…In the process I can help myself.” A great line.
I love the way you write. So looking forward to more.
Just when I was wondering how Bette was gonna have ANY chance of being Bette’s soulmate after Tina touched the ring given to her for inspection, and the stone glowed yellow, U had Tina do the calculus and realize that Bette had ALSO held the ring.
Excellent writing!
Hmmmm the info on the accident that Bette’s diabolical step-dog Dad inflicted that left Bette in what had to be an absolutely terrifying state, was really unexpected turn for me. Burned over 50% of her body??? HORRIFIC and soooo sad . . . I’m thankful that was given psychiatric treatment.
So was that “he-devil” trying to show his objection to her sexuality? or trying to use Bette as a replacement for his dearly departed wife???
Anyway, wonder how Alyssa and Tina will respond to Bette’s scarring from the accident.
Your humor is sweet:
Tina: “Still silence … shit…I’m gonna kill Porter”
“My ring?” She finally asks surprised.
“Well it took her long enough to answer but thank goodness she finally did… The KILLING of Porter is temporarily ON HOLD”.
Great story so far!
I feel so sorry for Bette, a stepfather who wanted her dead, lied about her absence but finally got what he deserved. But people who knew people and that he got what he deserved? I’m concerned that Bette might still be in trouble if it turns out that she’s involved.
The glimpses of what Bette went through breaks my heart, as painful as it will be to read what happened, I want to know and I want to know what she means by her last comment:
“My instinct says I can trust her and I also have this overwhelming need to help her get her girl…..And maybe…Just maybe…In the process I can help myself.”
Help herself in what way???
Love this story so far!
I want to thank those that have commented so far on this story and for reading…..I really appreciate it
As for Bette’s story…It will unfold throughout and as for Bibi28’s question. When Bette talks about helping herself in the last line she is talking about healing and moving forward. And no she will not be in trouble in this story. You will find out what happened with her stepfather that also revolves around her mothers death and Bette was not directly responsible for her step fathers death. And nothing of any trouble regarding that will take place. You will find out everything as the story goes along but this is what the following story is focused on.
1. Bette helping Tina with her crush Alyssa
2. Tina being instrumental in repairing Alyssa and Bette’s friendship
3. Tina being emotional support once what happened to Bette is revealed to her. (Hence they grow closer.)
4. Bette’s feelings growing for Tina and finding it hard to suppress them. Tina dismisses her growing feelings and pull towards Bette because she is so focused on getting her crush Alyssa.
So there you have it. It’s going to be a bumpy rollercoaster but have faith for the end my Tibetters
Hola me gusta esta historia la verdad es que veremos una montaña rusa de emociones con
todo lo que va a pasar me dejaste con ganas de
leer más espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo, gracias.
Hooked on your Tibette story. Looking forward to your bumpy rollercoaster ride.