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Get The Girl—Chapter 1: The Ring
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“It’s so beautiful Alyssa. It compliments your eyes”. I say handing it back to her and watch her slip it back on her finger
“Thanks” she says and I see a hint of red on her cheeks…Wait?….Is she blushing?..I quickly shake it off as she continues. “Anyway. The gypsy said because my grandmother showed her so much kindness that she wanted her to have this ring. The ring according to the gypsy woman brings soulmates together. They both have to touch the ring though and once that happens the ring will flash yellow. My grandmother said when my grandfather touched the ring it turned yellow”
Wait wait wait…I saw yellow. Could this mean…
“Tina?…Are you ok?” Alyssa asks snapping me out of my trance
“Uhm…uh..yeah..uh that’s so fascinating. Did you ever see it change colors?”
Alyssa shook her head
“When I got it Bette was with me and we both touched it. Nothing happened. We were relieved we weren’t because that would have ruined our friendship” She chuckles “But you know that’s an old tale you know…it’s not like that is real or anything but it’s special to think this ring brought together soulmates like my grandparents. That’s why I was really surprised you asked about it.” She pauses for a moment…”Uh…You..Uhmm didn’t see any color changes did you?” She asks almost hesitantly
I didn’t know what to say. I mean I swear it turned yellow but it could have been a reflection of the light. It’s silly to think that sort of thing could be real anyway.
“No. It didn’t.” I lied
Alyssa let’s out a breath
“You are the only other person who has touched this ring besides me and Bette since I have had it”
Wait what? Bette? ….Could that mean….Stop Tina..This is ridiculous
I chuckle
“What’s so funny?” Alyssa asks looking at me curiously
“Oh nothing..I was just laughing at how crazy these folklore tales are. But I have a question? Did your grandmother ever say what happens after the two soulmates touch the ring. I mean if they touch it again would it turn the color again”
Alyssa shakes her head
“No. According to my grandmother it only flashes once after the soulmates have both touched it”
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Camz19,
This story is compelling. Two chapters in and I can’t get enough. I’m loving: Bette & Tina developing these feelings and thoughts of each other; the soulmates ring! (I believe in these things, lol). And then ending this chapter with this part of Bette’s story – wow. “Just maybe…In the process I can help myself.” A great line.
I love the way you write. So looking forward to more.
Just when I was wondering how Bette was gonna have ANY chance of being Bette’s soulmate after Tina touched the ring given to her for inspection, and the stone glowed yellow, U had Tina do the calculus and realize that Bette had ALSO held the ring.
Excellent writing!
Hmmmm the info on the accident that Bette’s diabolical step-dog Dad inflicted that left Bette in what had to be an absolutely terrifying state, was really unexpected turn for me. Burned over 50% of her body??? HORRIFIC and soooo sad . . . I’m thankful that was given psychiatric treatment.
So was that “he-devil” trying to show his objection to her sexuality? or trying to use Bette as a replacement for his dearly departed wife???
Anyway, wonder how Alyssa and Tina will respond to Bette’s scarring from the accident.
Your humor is sweet:
Tina: “Still silence … shit…I’m gonna kill Porter”
“My ring?” She finally asks surprised.
“Well it took her long enough to answer but thank goodness she finally did… The KILLING of Porter is temporarily ON HOLD”.
Great story so far!
I feel so sorry for Bette, a stepfather who wanted her dead, lied about her absence but finally got what he deserved. But people who knew people and that he got what he deserved? I’m concerned that Bette might still be in trouble if it turns out that she’s involved.
The glimpses of what Bette went through breaks my heart, as painful as it will be to read what happened, I want to know and I want to know what she means by her last comment:
“My instinct says I can trust her and I also have this overwhelming need to help her get her girl…..And maybe…Just maybe…In the process I can help myself.”
Help herself in what way???
Love this story so far!
I want to thank those that have commented so far on this story and for reading…..I really appreciate it
As for Bette’s story…It will unfold throughout and as for Bibi28’s question. When Bette talks about helping herself in the last line she is talking about healing and moving forward. And no she will not be in trouble in this story. You will find out what happened with her stepfather that also revolves around her mothers death and Bette was not directly responsible for her step fathers death. And nothing of any trouble regarding that will take place. You will find out everything as the story goes along but this is what the following story is focused on.
1. Bette helping Tina with her crush Alyssa
2. Tina being instrumental in repairing Alyssa and Bette’s friendship
3. Tina being emotional support once what happened to Bette is revealed to her. (Hence they grow closer.)
4. Bette’s feelings growing for Tina and finding it hard to suppress them. Tina dismisses her growing feelings and pull towards Bette because she is so focused on getting her crush Alyssa.
So there you have it. It’s going to be a bumpy rollercoaster but have faith for the end my Tibetters
Hola me gusta esta historia la verdad es que veremos una montaña rusa de emociones con
todo lo que va a pasar me dejaste con ganas de
leer más espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo, gracias.
Hooked on your Tibette story. Looking forward to your bumpy rollercoaster ride.