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Get The Girl—Chapter 1: The Ring
This is it. I adjust my goggles as Alyssa pours the solutions in the beaker.. I take a deep breath. ‘Hear goes nothing” I mumble and stare at her ring.
“Alyssa?”
“Hmmm?” She answers as she is concentrating being careful not to spill any of the solutions.
“I have been meaning to ask you about your beautiful ring. It’s amazing. Where did you get it?” I ask and wait for her to respond but she doesn’t as she finishes pouring all the solutions in the beaker.
Still silence..Shit…I’m gonna kill Porter
“My ring?” She finally asks surprised
Well it took her long enough to answer but thank goodness she finally did..The killing of Porter is temporarily on hold
“Yes” I confirm
She turns to me and smiles as she fiddles with the ring on her finger
“This was my grandmothers ring. She left it to me after she passed away several years ago. We were very close”. She trails of. Her voice filled with sadness
“Oh I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to upset you” I say as she shakes her head
“No it’s fine. I was just surprised you asked me because no one has ever asked me about my ring”
“You mean Holly has never asked?”
I thought I saw her wince slightly when I mentioned Holly’s name. That’s weird. Maybe I imagined it
“Uh..No…But uh…Would you like to hear the story of how my grandmother got it?” She asks and her beautiful blue eyes light up in front of me.
Thank you Porter! I would kiss you right now if you were in front of me……Wait…Why did I just think that. Ughhhh
“Yes I would love to hear” I say smiling genuinely interested because I am interested in learning anything about Alyssa and her family
“Ok let’s check this first?”
Alyssa smiles at me before turning her attention to the experiment. And it’s the way she smiled at me at the park. She checks the liquid and adjusts the Bunsen burner as I write down the color the mixture had change to and the temperature. She turns her attention back to me
“When my grandmother Myrtis was 17 she was approached by a gypsy woman on the street traveling through town with her family and asked her if she knew if a place they could rest for the night. My grandmother told them they could park their caravan on her and my great grandparents property. Of course my great grandparents weren’t to thrilled she had brought strangers home but the family actually did chores in exchange for food and using the water well for drinking and bathing. The gypsy lady pulled my grandmother aside and took her into her tent and handed her this ring” Alyssa paused and took the ring off handing it to me. It was a beautiful antique silver band oval shaped blue topaz ring. I gasp as I see the stone flash a hint of yellow for a second and then disappear….That’s so cool
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Westy20 says
Camz19,
This story is compelling. Two chapters in and I can’t get enough. I’m loving: Bette & Tina developing these feelings and thoughts of each other; the soulmates ring! (I believe in these things, lol). And then ending this chapter with this part of Bette’s story – wow. “Just maybe…In the process I can help myself.” A great line.
I love the way you write. So looking forward to more.
DumplinT says
Just when I was wondering how Bette was gonna have ANY chance of being Bette’s soulmate after Tina touched the ring given to her for inspection, and the stone glowed yellow, U had Tina do the calculus and realize that Bette had ALSO held the ring.
Excellent writing!
Hmmmm the info on the accident that Bette’s diabolical step-dog Dad inflicted that left Bette in what had to be an absolutely terrifying state, was really unexpected turn for me. Burned over 50% of her body??? HORRIFIC and soooo sad . . . I’m thankful that was given psychiatric treatment.
So was that “he-devil” trying to show his objection to her sexuality? or trying to use Bette as a replacement for his dearly departed wife???
Anyway, wonder how Alyssa and Tina will respond to Bette’s scarring from the accident.
DumplinT says
Your humor is sweet:
Tina: “Still silence … shit…I’m gonna kill Porter”
“My ring?” She finally asks surprised.
“Well it took her long enough to answer but thank goodness she finally did… The KILLING of Porter is temporarily ON HOLD”.
Bibi28 says
Great story so far!
I feel so sorry for Bette, a stepfather who wanted her dead, lied about her absence but finally got what he deserved. But people who knew people and that he got what he deserved? I’m concerned that Bette might still be in trouble if it turns out that she’s involved.
The glimpses of what Bette went through breaks my heart, as painful as it will be to read what happened, I want to know and I want to know what she means by her last comment:
“My instinct says I can trust her and I also have this overwhelming need to help her get her girl…..And maybe…Just maybe…In the process I can help myself.”
Help herself in what way???
Love this story so far!
Camz19 says
I want to thank those that have commented so far on this story and for reading…..I really appreciate it
As for Bette’s story…It will unfold throughout and as for Bibi28’s question. When Bette talks about helping herself in the last line she is talking about healing and moving forward. And no she will not be in trouble in this story. You will find out what happened with her stepfather that also revolves around her mothers death and Bette was not directly responsible for her step fathers death. And nothing of any trouble regarding that will take place. You will find out everything as the story goes along but this is what the following story is focused on.
1. Bette helping Tina with her crush Alyssa
2. Tina being instrumental in repairing Alyssa and Bette’s friendship
3. Tina being emotional support once what happened to Bette is revealed to her. (Hence they grow closer.)
4. Bette’s feelings growing for Tina and finding it hard to suppress them. Tina dismisses her growing feelings and pull towards Bette because she is so focused on getting her crush Alyssa.
So there you have it. It’s going to be a bumpy rollercoaster but have faith for the end my Tibetters
Escorpion2494 says
Hola me gusta esta historia la verdad es que veremos una montaña rusa de emociones con
todo lo que va a pasar me dejaste con ganas de
leer más espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo, gracias.
Cathy says
Hooked on your Tibette story. Looking forward to your bumpy rollercoaster ride.