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Great Unexpectations Chapter 6
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"I’m up here babe", Tina grinned.
Bette looked up to Tina’s eyes, blushing as she acknowledged that she had been caught. Tina coyly forgave the sweet transgression as she pulled Bette closer to her and commenced with a kiss. Bette’s lips parted slightly at first, and then gradually wider as she accepted Tina’s fervent tongue. She offered her own in return which was likewise accepted. Bette’s hands traveled slowly from Tina’s breasts to her back, trailing steadily downward. Tina broke the kiss gasping as Bette’s hands found their way inside of her shorts, caressing and gently squeezing Tina’s firm ass. Tina, realizing she was behind in points, quickly began undressing Bette. She pulled Bette’s shirt over her head and tossed it hastily to the side as her eyes remained on the beautiful breasts that were now revealed. She leaned forward and gently ran her tongue around one nipple while caressing the other with her hand. The response from Bette was immediate. She hardened at once, bringing a smile to Tina’s face.
"Tina. Please don’t stop", Bette begged. Tina ,having no intention of stopping, continued caressing the nipple with her tongue before finally taking the breast into her mouth, sucking voraciously. This caused such pleasure in Bette that she involuntarily squeezed Tina’s tush even harder. Tina moaned as her center began to throb and dampen. Remembering that they had an appointment with the tile, Tina pulled Bette down harshly on top of her.
"Jesus, Tina. What has gotten into you?" grinned Bette.
"You have", panted Tina as she looked up deeply into Bette’s dark eyes. Bette lowered her head and kissed Tina’s neck tenderly. "I love you so much T. God, you don’t even know how much." Her kisses slowly made their way down to Tina’s shoulders and further still until she found the soft supple breasts that were waiting for her. She kissed them softly, circling around the nipples. Tina moaned with thrills of pleasure and pain as she waited hungrily for Bette to devour her fully. She did not have to wait long as Bette ran her tongue in smaller and smaller circles around her nipple until she lowered her mouth over the center of her breast, sucking tenderly. Tina’s core screamed for attention as her hips began grinding into Bette. Her breathing was now halting as she begged, "Oh God, Bette. Please. I need you."
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I think I am firs t, but, alas I am really tring to get some work done so I will have to come back to this as a special treat when I get a few things finished… I hate to admit this but I am really new to this site…would someone be kind enough to explain the ratings.the how to part…thanks
i hope tina will bring a lot of her things…it might be too soon but they need to deal with that together, and angie seems happier too :)
Uh oh da gossip monger’s there! LOL Loving ur story Red !!! :) Amazingly Fantastically Beautifully Adorably lovely just so niceee ahh..Thanks for writing it :) Keep going u r doing a gr8 job and i hope to see the award on ur page the next time !!! :Dokay back to work…
You have excellent writing ability. Your English teacher was correct, you do have a wy with words even if it is to write lesbian soft porn. *smirk* It’s a tough job (seriously) to write NC-17s well. Please continue w/the s/l b/c it is very interesting. PPS.
I am so happy to read this chapter Ms. Red. Wonderful . PPS
Tina needs to go get the U-HAUL and drag Alice’s nosy ass to help her move back into Porter-Kennard kingdom. Nuf said! LUV’d THIS POST!
You deserve more than just a nomination! You write beautifully.
They are lucky Alice didn’t show up before now! Talk about hell on wheels! LOL! I wonder if Alice was waiting for Tina to leave or if it just seemed that way with her showing up just afterwards. What a great post Red! Your writing is absolutely brilliant. It was beautiful the way you had Bette telling Tina how much her C-Section scar means to her. Their talk of the past was hard but they need to do that…and it’s good they are doing it in spurts. Thanks for writing Red and please post soon!
Loving your story – just got back into town and on line for the first time in weeks and your story was a wonderful thing to find. You really capture the loving tone that makes me care about these two characters – thanks so much for your humor and sweetness in your storytelling. You definitely deserve to be nominated.
What a great ending!! Loving this story, PPS
That was awesome!
You made my morning. I was unable to continue with my own sleep so I read this story. Now I know that today will be a good day.
Busted!!! was Al next door, I forget…pps
Adoring this story :) Beautiful expressiv writing. :) I’m looking forward to the next addition.
Firstly, you deserve those noms, red–your writing is excellent. Secondly, the “lesbian soft porn” remark is pretty funny, but I think this chapter’s a good bit better than that phrase suggests. Thirdly, the pacing of the story is spot-on. Keep it up. Fourthly, I knew the peace couldn’t last for long, and now that Ms. “Rude Awakening” Pieszecki is on the scene, well… And lastly, I’ll have to repeat myself and say that this chap was awesome. So, post soon, red. Thanks
I second all five of jp22’s points. That four-star rating must have been a technical glitch because there is simply no logical explanation for it. You are one of the best writers on this site and I would have been shocked if you hadn’t been nominated. I especially admire how you ground your writing in the concrete, Angie’s inner “thoughts” (pears vs. squash) being a prime example: exquisite. As for the lesbian soft porn, let’s just say page 3 of this instalment is assuming pride of place in my archives file.
Great chapter!! Love the B&T lovin. PPS!!
LOL@chickenshit! One of my favorite terms. I’ll have to remember “bitch on wheels” as well. Definitely a hot chapter!