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Great Unexpectations Chapter 6
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The marathon continued most of the night. They eventually made the journey from the kitchen floor to the comfort of Bette’s bed, but not without a stop or two on the way.
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The morning light found the lovers sleeping soundly. Bette was spooning Tina, her hand on Tina’s breast. The birds outside began warbling sweetly, rousing Bette from her sleep. She smiled as she eyed Tina’s smooth back, and gently kissed her shoulder blade. "Morning T."
"Mmph", was all Tina could manage. Bette kissed her again. "You stay here, I’ll go check on Angie", she whispered into Tina’s ear. Bette lazily walked into the bathroom grabbing a pair of pajama bottoms and a t-shirt on her way. Tina tried to wait for her to return but helplessly returned to her half-sleep state. A short time later, Bette climbed back into bed and resumed her hold on Tina, whispering "she’s still asleep."
Tina smiled, eyes closed. "Oh thank god", she yawned. " I love her, but I am soooo tired."
Bette closed her eyes, agreeing with that sentiment. "Mhmm", she mumbled.
"Oh god", grumbled Tina. "I’m gonna have to go home in a little while."
"Home? But you are…", Bette paused before making the sad realization. "Oh, right. Home. Your apartment."
They had locked themselves away from the world for almost two days, discreetly turning off their cell phones, unplugging the house phone and not even thinking about e-mail. It would soon be time to rejoin the land of the living, not a happy thought.
"Maybe you could stay one more night", Bette hoped.
"I’d love to, babe. But I still have to go home. I don’t have any clothes here."
"I’m not seeing the problem, T", Bette smirked.
"I’m sure you’re not", Tina smiled, before continuing. "I have to check my mail. I have to pick up my dry-cleaning. I’m sure the studio has called. They must be pretty pissed at me by now. Plus", she paused. "I think I may have left a yogurt on the counter", she laughed turning around to face Bette.
Bette leaned in for a gentle peck. "I was going to offer to help you with all of those things. Right up until that yogurt part. That’s where you lost me. I don’t think I need to be there for that."
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I think I am firs t, but, alas I am really tring to get some work done so I will have to come back to this as a special treat when I get a few things finished… I hate to admit this but I am really new to this site…would someone be kind enough to explain the ratings.the how to part…thanks
i hope tina will bring a lot of her things…it might be too soon but they need to deal with that together, and angie seems happier too :)
Uh oh da gossip monger’s there! LOL Loving ur story Red !!! :) Amazingly Fantastically Beautifully Adorably lovely just so niceee ahh..Thanks for writing it :) Keep going u r doing a gr8 job and i hope to see the award on ur page the next time !!! :Dokay back to work…
You have excellent writing ability. Your English teacher was correct, you do have a wy with words even if it is to write lesbian soft porn. *smirk* It’s a tough job (seriously) to write NC-17s well. Please continue w/the s/l b/c it is very interesting. PPS.
I am so happy to read this chapter Ms. Red. Wonderful . PPS
Tina needs to go get the U-HAUL and drag Alice’s nosy ass to help her move back into Porter-Kennard kingdom. Nuf said! LUV’d THIS POST!
You deserve more than just a nomination! You write beautifully.
They are lucky Alice didn’t show up before now! Talk about hell on wheels! LOL! I wonder if Alice was waiting for Tina to leave or if it just seemed that way with her showing up just afterwards. What a great post Red! Your writing is absolutely brilliant. It was beautiful the way you had Bette telling Tina how much her C-Section scar means to her. Their talk of the past was hard but they need to do that…and it’s good they are doing it in spurts. Thanks for writing Red and please post soon!
Loving your story – just got back into town and on line for the first time in weeks and your story was a wonderful thing to find. You really capture the loving tone that makes me care about these two characters – thanks so much for your humor and sweetness in your storytelling. You definitely deserve to be nominated.
What a great ending!! Loving this story, PPS
That was awesome!
You made my morning. I was unable to continue with my own sleep so I read this story. Now I know that today will be a good day.
Busted!!! was Al next door, I forget…pps
Adoring this story :) Beautiful expressiv writing. :) I’m looking forward to the next addition.
Firstly, you deserve those noms, red–your writing is excellent. Secondly, the “lesbian soft porn” remark is pretty funny, but I think this chapter’s a good bit better than that phrase suggests. Thirdly, the pacing of the story is spot-on. Keep it up. Fourthly, I knew the peace couldn’t last for long, and now that Ms. “Rude Awakening” Pieszecki is on the scene, well… And lastly, I’ll have to repeat myself and say that this chap was awesome. So, post soon, red. Thanks
I second all five of jp22’s points. That four-star rating must have been a technical glitch because there is simply no logical explanation for it. You are one of the best writers on this site and I would have been shocked if you hadn’t been nominated. I especially admire how you ground your writing in the concrete, Angie’s inner “thoughts” (pears vs. squash) being a prime example: exquisite. As for the lesbian soft porn, let’s just say page 3 of this instalment is assuming pride of place in my archives file.
Great chapter!! Love the B&T lovin. PPS!!
LOL@chickenshit! One of my favorite terms. I’ll have to remember “bitch on wheels” as well. Definitely a hot chapter!