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Great Unexpectations Chapter 6
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"Oh, that’s nice T. First you mark me up and then you laugh about it", Bette teased.
"Sorry babe. Just admiring my handiwork." Tina smiled before continuing with the baby kisses. Bette closed her eyes again and enjoyed the exquisite rapture that Tina’s tongue and lips produced. "God, Tina. If you don’t stop I’m gonna be ready to go again."
"What’s wrong with that?", Tina breathed heavily.
Bette pondered that for a moment. "Good point", she muttered weakly, trying to contain a small moan.
The milk chocolatey skin flinched slightly as Tina kissed Bette’s navel, letting her tongue drop in to explore it softly. Continuing on her journey she wandered to the side to suck gently on Bette’s hip, undeterred by Bette’s writhing. "Tina, I swear to god, you are trying to kill me", Bette moaned.
"There are worse ways to go, Babe", Tina replied not stopping her relentless assault on all of Bette’s senses.
Tina kept her course steady as she made her way to Bette’s moist, hot entry. Bette, knees bent and up, spread her legs wider, allowing Tina all the access she could ever need. Placing her hands under Bette’s firm cheeks and pulling her close, Tina licked the secretions that were in evidence and began searching for those that were not. Her investigation soon led her into Bette’s warm folds. Her tongue licked at the inner walls as the hips began to buck slowly. "Ooohhh ffuucckkkk, Tiiiiina", Bette cried out. Tina probed further, letting her nose stimulate the opening. The bucking of Bette’s hips quickened, as did the deep stroking and probing of Tina’s tongue. Bette reached down and gently guided Tina’s head at the final moment before the love spasm took hold. The waves washed over Bette as she helplessly tried to ride them out. Tina, feeling the shaking both in and out, continued licking, slowing the pace slightly. She brought her hands from around Bette’s bottom to her hips, rubbing them softly. Bette loosened her grip on Tina’s head, but only because all of the strength had left her limbs. Her arms and legs collapsed feebly as she struggled to catch her breath.
Tina, needing to catch her breath herself, drew back from Bette’s sweet spot. She laid her head on Bette’s tight waist as they shared a tender moment of blissful silence, interrupted only by the occasional deep breath or half-restrained giggle of joy.
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I think I am firs t, but, alas I am really tring to get some work done so I will have to come back to this as a special treat when I get a few things finished… I hate to admit this but I am really new to this site…would someone be kind enough to explain the ratings.the how to part…thanks
i hope tina will bring a lot of her things…it might be too soon but they need to deal with that together, and angie seems happier too :)
Uh oh da gossip monger’s there! LOL Loving ur story Red !!! :) Amazingly Fantastically Beautifully Adorably lovely just so niceee ahh..Thanks for writing it :) Keep going u r doing a gr8 job and i hope to see the award on ur page the next time !!! :Dokay back to work…
You have excellent writing ability. Your English teacher was correct, you do have a wy with words even if it is to write lesbian soft porn. *smirk* It’s a tough job (seriously) to write NC-17s well. Please continue w/the s/l b/c it is very interesting. PPS.
I am so happy to read this chapter Ms. Red. Wonderful . PPS
Tina needs to go get the U-HAUL and drag Alice’s nosy ass to help her move back into Porter-Kennard kingdom. Nuf said! LUV’d THIS POST!
You deserve more than just a nomination! You write beautifully.
They are lucky Alice didn’t show up before now! Talk about hell on wheels! LOL! I wonder if Alice was waiting for Tina to leave or if it just seemed that way with her showing up just afterwards. What a great post Red! Your writing is absolutely brilliant. It was beautiful the way you had Bette telling Tina how much her C-Section scar means to her. Their talk of the past was hard but they need to do that…and it’s good they are doing it in spurts. Thanks for writing Red and please post soon!
Loving your story – just got back into town and on line for the first time in weeks and your story was a wonderful thing to find. You really capture the loving tone that makes me care about these two characters – thanks so much for your humor and sweetness in your storytelling. You definitely deserve to be nominated.
What a great ending!! Loving this story, PPS
That was awesome!
You made my morning. I was unable to continue with my own sleep so I read this story. Now I know that today will be a good day.
Busted!!! was Al next door, I forget…pps
Adoring this story :) Beautiful expressiv writing. :) I’m looking forward to the next addition.
Firstly, you deserve those noms, red–your writing is excellent. Secondly, the “lesbian soft porn” remark is pretty funny, but I think this chapter’s a good bit better than that phrase suggests. Thirdly, the pacing of the story is spot-on. Keep it up. Fourthly, I knew the peace couldn’t last for long, and now that Ms. “Rude Awakening” Pieszecki is on the scene, well… And lastly, I’ll have to repeat myself and say that this chap was awesome. So, post soon, red. Thanks
I second all five of jp22’s points. That four-star rating must have been a technical glitch because there is simply no logical explanation for it. You are one of the best writers on this site and I would have been shocked if you hadn’t been nominated. I especially admire how you ground your writing in the concrete, Angie’s inner “thoughts” (pears vs. squash) being a prime example: exquisite. As for the lesbian soft porn, let’s just say page 3 of this instalment is assuming pride of place in my archives file.
Great chapter!! Love the B&T lovin. PPS!!
LOL@chickenshit! One of my favorite terms. I’ll have to remember “bitch on wheels” as well. Definitely a hot chapter!