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Great Unexpectations Chapter 6
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Tina gently slipped a finger into the warm, moist folds and slowly stroked in and out. "More. Oh fuck, more T." Tina slowly brought back her finger so that she could add another. Now both fingers were stroking, not quite as gently as before. The pace quickened and Bette raised her hips to meet Tina. They rocked and rocked as Tina kept the pace. Feeling the inner muscles begin to contract Tina inserted a third finger and sought out that special spot.. "Is that enough, babe? Can you feel that?" she whispered huskily. Bette, unable to form words, only nodded as her throat let forth high pitched, halted breathing while her hips bucked wildly. Bette wrapped her legs around Tina and squeezed. This was the final action needed to bring her to complete orgasm. Tina felt the strong contractions around her fingers and slowed her movements slightly. The contractions continued as Tina smiled at her accomplishment. "It’s ok baby. Come for me. Let me hear it."
Bette continued to buck her hips, letting the love spasm take its full course as cries of exhilaration left Bette’s throat. The waves of gratification spread throughout her entire body as Tina was caught in the vice-like grip of her legs. After Bette’s movements quieted Tina began to remove her fingers . Slowly retracting they hit a tender spot that was still sensitive, sending Bette into yet another round of hitching breath and hips. It surprised both of the lovers, but Bette’s shy embarrassment was no match for Tina’s loving pride. As the second explosion faded into the night, Bette blushed. "Sorry about that. I didn’t know that was going to happen."
"Yeah, don’t ever do that again" Tina scolded teasingly, with a giggle.
Bette joined the laughter with her own as she held Tina’s face in her hands admiring the glint in her lover’s eyes. Tina lowered herself to kiss Bette’s neck and shoulder lovingly. "Oh god, you taste so good. You smell so good." Bette laid back, exhausted, letting Tina have her way with her. Tina continued her ravishment of Bette’s body with soft, slow baby kisses. First the shoulders, and then barely lower to that spot just above the clavicle. Over to the sternum. Down between the breasts. Down to her abdomen. She snickered as she eyed Bette’s Sharpie-laden torso.
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I think I am firs t, but, alas I am really tring to get some work done so I will have to come back to this as a special treat when I get a few things finished… I hate to admit this but I am really new to this site…would someone be kind enough to explain the ratings.the how to part…thanks
i hope tina will bring a lot of her things…it might be too soon but they need to deal with that together, and angie seems happier too :)
Uh oh da gossip monger’s there! LOL Loving ur story Red !!! :) Amazingly Fantastically Beautifully Adorably lovely just so niceee ahh..Thanks for writing it :) Keep going u r doing a gr8 job and i hope to see the award on ur page the next time !!! :Dokay back to work…
You have excellent writing ability. Your English teacher was correct, you do have a wy with words even if it is to write lesbian soft porn. *smirk* It’s a tough job (seriously) to write NC-17s well. Please continue w/the s/l b/c it is very interesting. PPS.
I am so happy to read this chapter Ms. Red. Wonderful . PPS
Tina needs to go get the U-HAUL and drag Alice’s nosy ass to help her move back into Porter-Kennard kingdom. Nuf said! LUV’d THIS POST!
You deserve more than just a nomination! You write beautifully.
They are lucky Alice didn’t show up before now! Talk about hell on wheels! LOL! I wonder if Alice was waiting for Tina to leave or if it just seemed that way with her showing up just afterwards. What a great post Red! Your writing is absolutely brilliant. It was beautiful the way you had Bette telling Tina how much her C-Section scar means to her. Their talk of the past was hard but they need to do that…and it’s good they are doing it in spurts. Thanks for writing Red and please post soon!
Loving your story – just got back into town and on line for the first time in weeks and your story was a wonderful thing to find. You really capture the loving tone that makes me care about these two characters – thanks so much for your humor and sweetness in your storytelling. You definitely deserve to be nominated.
What a great ending!! Loving this story, PPS
That was awesome!
You made my morning. I was unable to continue with my own sleep so I read this story. Now I know that today will be a good day.
Busted!!! was Al next door, I forget…pps
Adoring this story :) Beautiful expressiv writing. :) I’m looking forward to the next addition.
Firstly, you deserve those noms, red–your writing is excellent. Secondly, the “lesbian soft porn” remark is pretty funny, but I think this chapter’s a good bit better than that phrase suggests. Thirdly, the pacing of the story is spot-on. Keep it up. Fourthly, I knew the peace couldn’t last for long, and now that Ms. “Rude Awakening” Pieszecki is on the scene, well… And lastly, I’ll have to repeat myself and say that this chap was awesome. So, post soon, red. Thanks
I second all five of jp22’s points. That four-star rating must have been a technical glitch because there is simply no logical explanation for it. You are one of the best writers on this site and I would have been shocked if you hadn’t been nominated. I especially admire how you ground your writing in the concrete, Angie’s inner “thoughts” (pears vs. squash) being a prime example: exquisite. As for the lesbian soft porn, let’s just say page 3 of this instalment is assuming pride of place in my archives file.
Great chapter!! Love the B&T lovin. PPS!!
LOL@chickenshit! One of my favorite terms. I’ll have to remember “bitch on wheels” as well. Definitely a hot chapter!