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I Will Not Let You Fall
When she lifted her head, her eyes fell on Karen. Just like Steve, her sister was observing her intently, but she also had a vicious, meaningful smirk playing on her lips, a smirk that was confirmation enough Karen knew something. Tina stared blankly for a moment, confused. She then shook her head, trying to clear the fog from her brain. She looked around the table to see if anyone had noticed her ascendant state of being spaced out. Brenda was still talking, so the blonde drew a conclusion her little trip had been overlooked.
Taking a gulp of her wine, Tina looked at the glass, growing somewhat perplexed. She realized mixing depressants with alcohol had been a bad idea, which was probably the reason she felt a little out of it. She swallowed and put the glass back on the table carefully. Turning to look at Brenda, she found her still talking and talking and talking. All of sudden Tina wanted to scream. She pushed her chair back and got up, slightly unsteady on her legs. Brenda finally ceased talking, to which Tina let out a laugh before she could’ve stopped herself. Everyone raised a brow at her.
”Baby, are you alright?” Brenda asked, looking worried.
”Yeah. I’ll be right back,” the blonde announced and headed straight to the bathroom.
Turning the water on, Tina gripped the edge of the sink and began studying herself in the mirror. Reflected under the unforgiving light, her skin looked pale and drawn. Light gray circles under her once vibrant hazel eyes attested to some lost sleep and were undoubtedly a product of a work-related stress. Her current state of mental and emotional tension had been going on for a while already and it only seemed to worsen day by day, causing her to feel as if she was losing control over herself.
She sat down on top of the closed toilet lid and held her head as she hoped that Brenda or anyone else would give her a moment to herself and wouldn’t follow her. She knew that coming to a social gathering today, even though there were only her family members, had been unwise. She sensed her headache returning gradually and contemplated on taking a Xanax again, but quickly decided not to. Lately, the drug had only been leaving her feeling low after its effects wore off.
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Great to see another chapter from you, thanks!
Ok, so Tina has long-term girl (thanks god she’s not Helena), but she’s not in love in her. It’s good. What’s not so good that her parents obviously like her girlfriend. And what’s bad – how Bette was cold during their meeting and how quickly she left. I just hope Bette will agree for next meeting with Tina.
So, waiting for the next!
Hi Valerie
Thank you for this wonderful chapter.
Wow, it was very easy to vanish the ten years of separation between them; after trying to move on and make their lives with other people, just one encounter and their hidden feelings came back, it couldn’t be different, their love was very intense, a love forever.
But if their love and life together ten years ago was hard due to Bette’s criminal life, and Tina’s fears and family situation; to pick up the pieces and glue them together now, won’t be easy.
Thanks, Valerie for this wonderful and interesting story and please post soon.
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Thanks for post.ing another chapter. I really enjoy this story. Looking forward to your next update.
WOW…
caught me by surprise seeing the update of my fav story….
but frankly 13 pages is not enough…lol… please update really soon.. can’t wait to see what will tina do to get back to bette’s life once again.. :-D
by the way…thank you so much for keeping the story.. :-)
I wonder why Bette is so hesistant to pick up where she and Tina left off. This story is so good. PPVS
Thank goodness, Helena is gone. I’m glad Sam is just friends with Tina. I don’t think I would have been able to stomach them together. LOL. Bette seems a lot more sexier, with her more bruting and mysterious self. I’m siding with Bette right now. Thank you so much for the update. I’ve been looking multiple times a day, since your last update.
Geez so heart wrenching. Tina seems on the out side to have moved on with her life but on the inside she’s a mess..Shes still living the next day ten years back when Bette told her to never come back…nothing has changed for her. Bette was in a bad place when she said it but she really didn’t mean it. She just didn’t want to hurt Tina or bring shame to her by being in that place. She loved her enough to let her go. The love is still there now if they can just get out of their own way and talk., they will find their love again. Thank you very much enjoying your story.
Thank you Valerie for the update, I just love this story. My heart aches for them both and hope they find away back to each other.
Wow, what a meeting! The tension is palpable from the page. I”m glad Tina kept in touch with Mrs. Carol and kept the property taxes paid. Now, how do they reconnect? Brenda is doomed to lose Tina. What an emotional ride? Keep posting and we will keep reading !
Oh wow Valerie, what a incredible good chapter!
Most of the others already comment and said it all.
Poor Tina, still so in love with Bette and then receiving such a coldness from Bette. But Bette is protecting her heart.
Let their journey back together begin!
Thanks for the update!
Thanks for the update.
Tina’s life seems to be lacking a lot. Hopefully the two of them can see a way to find each other again.
Enjoyed it a lot.
Thanks for the update.
Love this story and am longing for Tibette to be back together. Look forward to you achieving my wish!
PPS
SG
Am I too greedy to longing for your other story while I am so attracted with this one? You are a fantastic writer, I am thrilled wtih either story you would serve us, thanks for the awsome chapter!
My dear readers, thank you for all the wonderful comments and for encouraging me to keep writing! I really appreciate all of your support on my work!
You are a very good writer. We are fortunate to have you on this site! Keep blessing us with your work!
You never cease to amaze me with your ideas. This story is one I cannot forget. Please don’t stop posting.
It’s been awhile without a new chapter of this story…please…please…please….give us happiness with a progress of Bette and Tina’s relationship…thank you a bunch for sharing the story with us..????