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    If I Fall: Chapter 15

    Story written on March 19, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Danish, Danish and more Danish. Yay, I’m back.

     

    Yet, the athlete’s behavioral pattern definitely wasn’t lost on her, and her naturally inquisitive nature left her all the more curious about it. Dana seemed to be more herself around her without getting tripped up on her words or guilt, and the two seemed to be sharing a companionable comfort that they had lacked since the breakup. But then out of nowhere Dana would just tense up and run away from her. And Alice had also noticed that it was almost a reflection of how Dana metaphorically handled every uncomfortable situation in her life. Except, Alice couldn’t figure out the impetus that sent Dana running for the hills every time they were together and finally seemed to be putting the past behind them. It was just like the other day when they sat together at The Planet and had a great conversation, and then all of a sudden Dana would have moved heaven and earth to get away from her once Jules showed up. And then just now was the same thing.

     

    It was abundantly clear that every time Jules shows up, Dana leaves. But Alice couldn’t really figure out why. It wasn’t as if Dana was in any position to judge who Alice spent her time with now, considering she gave up that right when she left her. Plus, she was so exuberant when Alice finally decided to stop giving her the silent treatment, she was hardly in any position to pick and choose when she would be Alice’s friend. It wasn’t like Dana to get all weirded out and run if she felt the least bit uncomfortable, but why did Jules’ presence invite such a reaction from the athlete? They two barely had a conversation and Jules never did anything to outwardly offend Dana or any of the rest of the group. Unless it was that Dana couldn’t handle being around Alice and Jules together.

    Alice imagined that it wasn’t the easiest situation, being friends with your ex and watching her with her new girlfriend. But hell, Dana was the one that broke up with Alice, leaving her to meet other people and possibly even future girlfriends. It wasn’t like Alice had asked for any of this, or found it especially enjoyable watching Dana and Lara together. But after all these months, she had made peace with most of it and didn’t want to scratch her own eyes out to avoid seeing them together. So why was Dana having such a hard time with it after all this time and her whole speech about how they both needed to move on?

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    3. I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx

    5. uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.

    9. i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS

    10. I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.

    13. This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )

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