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If I Fall: Chapter 15
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"Try three, Shane."
"Still Dana, that’s really great." Jules smiled sweetly at Dana and the athlete begrudgingly returned it. Yet it didn’t take a rocket scientist to figure out how phony the whole scene was as the two shared a knowing look before Alice cleared her throat and broke in.
"Oh, Jules, I meant to tell you, I spoke to Kit and she said that we’re all set for tomorrow night."
"What’s tomorrow night?" Tina asked.
"Tee, don’t you remember? Jules’ band is playing here," Alice sighed with exasperation.
"Oh that’s right, sorry Al. I totally forgot I have to fly up to Vancouver for the weekend to meet with this new producer for a documentary Helena and I are possibly bidding on."
"Hey, it’s no problem."
"So Jules, is all the money going to the Urban Education Partnership?" inquired Carmen.
"Yeah, it is. I somehow managed to convince Keith and the rest of the band to donate all of tomorrow night’s earnings to the cause. And Alice here will also be walking around with a donations box, or jar, or whatever, trying to garner up as much sympathy for LA City Schools as she can," Jules squeezed Alice’s hand as she finished explaining.
Dana sat back and wondered who the hell this woman was. She seemed too good to be true. And maybe all her saint jokes really had some truth behind them. Was this just an act for Alice and their friends, or was she actually genuine? It wasn’t like she doubted Alice’s capabilities of finding someone as selfless and giving as Jules acted, but to Dana, the blonde seemed almost too perfect.
"Yes dear," Alice agreed. "I plan to help as much as possible. Hey Dane, you and Lara should stop by tomorrow night too. Jules puts on a killer show."
‘Yeah, sure. That’s exactly how I want to spend my night. Watching Jules bask in the spotlight of Alice ‘s admiration,’ Dana thought. She realized that she hadn’t responded to Alice’s invitation and quickly stammered out the first reply she could come up with. "Uh, yeah, great. I’ll have to check with Lara, but I’d definitely like to come…and you know, show my support."
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This is so good. PPS.
Just pure gold. Probably one of the best danish stories ever. PPS!!!
I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx
Welcome back – you have grabbed my interest and enthusiasm for this story once again – pps.
uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.
I’m so happy that you updated this story I just love it
great update!loving the tension between those two.
Oh ive been waiting for so long..eee that was great and totally agree one of the best danish i’ve ever read thank you!!!! :)
i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS
I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.
yay!! you’re back. I love how your stories are always so emotionally saturated…PPS!
Yeah I always look forward to you posting the next chapter of this story and so far you have never let me down. PPS
This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )