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If I Fall: Chapter 15
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"Who’s that?" Jenny scrunched up her nose in confusion.
"She’s the #1 player on the women’s circuit right now, not to mention the only other out lesbian player besides our Dana," Bette casually replied.
Dana smiled warmly at her before transferring her attention to Alice. "Thanks for the comparison, Al, but I’d hardly consider myself a "Mauresmo". I wish I had her talent…or her prize money and endorsements for that matter."
"Oh poor Dana, Subaru and Mercedes just aren’t cutting it for you anymore?" Alice took to covering up her very intense thoughts with more sarcasm and teasing as she gave Dana the once over. She was kind of surprised that she was able to effectively mock Dana when all she could think about was how fuckable the athlete looked right now. Her face was glistening, covered with a sheen of sweat, and her body looked taut and muscular in the tank and shorts. And those damn beads of sweat weren’t helping as they slowly dripped down her exposed neck and collar bone.
"Um, you’re forgetting Dasani," Dana wryly replied.
"No shit now Dasani wants a piece of you too? You’re hot right now, Dane." As soon as the words left Alice’s mouth she wanted desperately to pull them back in. She knew Dana wouldn’t think she was hitting on her or anything like that, she genuinely meant that she was hot in the sense of being popular with the sponsors. But the questioning looks she was receiving from the rest of the group at the table over her choice of words made Alice’s face flush with embarrassment. "I mean, uh…Hey!"
Dana looked at her confusedly until she followed Alice’s eyes and realized that Jules was walking towards them.
"Hey baby," Jules bent down greeted her with a peck on the lips. "Hey guys." Alice pulled out the chair next to her and Jules sat down, immediately reaching to take Alice’s hand in her own. "So what’d I miss?"
Alice couldn’t help but steal a look from Dana as Shane looked on and decided to diffuse what could be a rather awkward situation.
"Oh, we were just talking about all of Dana’s many endorsements," Shane answered.
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This is so good. PPS.
Just pure gold. Probably one of the best danish stories ever. PPS!!!
I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx
Welcome back – you have grabbed my interest and enthusiasm for this story once again – pps.
uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.
I’m so happy that you updated this story I just love it
great update!loving the tension between those two.
Oh ive been waiting for so long..eee that was great and totally agree one of the best danish i’ve ever read thank you!!!! :)
i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS
I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.
yay!! you’re back. I love how your stories are always so emotionally saturated…PPS!
Yeah I always look forward to you posting the next chapter of this story and so far you have never let me down. PPS
This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )