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If I Fall: Chapter 15
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"Great! It’s such a good cause. Jules volunteers there on Saturdays and I went down there with her last week and you wouldn’t believe what a difference just one person can make in those kids’ lives. Of course, Jules has made the difference of about ten people at this point, but…"
"Actually," Dana interrupted, "I’d like to make a donation if I can. Just let me know who I can make the check out to. Would $1000 be enough?" It was an obvious attempt at competing with St. Jules, but Dana couldn’t help it. Her instinctual competitive nature drove her to blurt out the first thing that came to mind that would take the spotlight off of Alice’s new girlfriend and earn herself some credit in the process. She knew she could probably beat the chirpy blonde at just about every sport she played, but being a full-time humanitarian and part-time martyr, well that wasn’t something Dana was about to let her have either.
Jules was taken aback and raised her eyebrows at Alice, who was busy staring at Dana, mouth completely agape, wondering if she had even heard her right. "Well, Dana, that’s extremely kind of you, but $1000 is a lot of money for just one donation," Jules replied hesitantly.
"So you don’t want my money?"
"Um, no, that’s not what I’m saying at all. Listen, tomorrow night after my first set I’ll come find you and give you all the relevant info, okay?"
"Great," Dana chose to ignore the somewhat dubious look Alice was giving her, instead smiling back as widely as she could at the couple.
"Oh, sweetie, I almost forgot," Jules quickly turned to Alice, her grin just as big as Dana’s. "I was able to get us reservations to the Thai place we went to on our first date. I figured it’d the perfect way to celebrate one month of being together. And I promise I’ll keep the wine in my glass tonight," she teased and brought her lips to meet Alice’s.
The writer was at first caught off guard, too busy stealing glances out of the corner of her eye to see Dana’s reaction. What she noticed was that the once evident grin was replaced by a badly-concealed frown, and that Dana shifted her eyes downward, unable to watch the scene unfolding in front of her. Alice was the first to pull back, clearing her throat and smiling nervously at her girlfriend.
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This is so good. PPS.
Just pure gold. Probably one of the best danish stories ever. PPS!!!
I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx
Welcome back – you have grabbed my interest and enthusiasm for this story once again – pps.
uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.
I’m so happy that you updated this story I just love it
great update!loving the tension between those two.
Oh ive been waiting for so long..eee that was great and totally agree one of the best danish i’ve ever read thank you!!!! :)
i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS
I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.
yay!! you’re back. I love how your stories are always so emotionally saturated…PPS!
Yeah I always look forward to you posting the next chapter of this story and so far you have never let me down. PPS
This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )