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    If I Fall: Chapter 16

    Story written on March 25, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Dana and Lara are coming to an end, just as things are heating up with Alice and Jules.

     

    Dana let a small laugh involuntarily slip out at the sound of Lara’s words. "Get Alice back? Right now I’d be happy with getting Alice to talk to me again."

     

    "Well you at least have to try. Don’t let the fear stop you from getting what you want this time, Dana. You have to learn how to fight for what you want and stop taking the easy way out all the time. Life is filled with challenges and obstacles and that makes it all worth it in the end. And you know, you’re not always going to get what you want, but if you don’t try, you’re assured of that. After all, what good is living if you’re not living the life you want?"

     

    And with those parting words of wisdom, she quietly opened the door and walked through it, never once stopping to look back.

     

     

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    "So I can’t believe it’s been a month already."

     

    "I know. Who would have thought you’d be able to deal with me for this long…," Alice laughed, but Jules knew her well enough already to know that part of Alice believed it. She took her hand across the table and looked at her intently.

     

    "Alice, I really wish you could see in yourself what I see."

    Alice leaned in and dropped her voice seductively. "And what’s that?"

     

    "A truly incredible woman, who’s smart and sexy and talented and who makes me laugh harder than anyone I’ve ever known."

     

    "Why does everyone insist that I’m so funny?" she playfully pouted.

     

    "Um, cause you are."

     

    "Yeah, I think that’s just code for ugly."

     

    "Alice!"

     

    "No, think about it! All the women associated with being funny that I know are like, Rosie O’Donnell, or Paula Poundstone or something. Not exactly women you think of in People’s 50 Most Beautiful."

     

    "Okay, what about Tina Fey?"

     

    "Mmm, yeah, good point. Funny and hot."

     

    "Or Jennifer Aniston?"

     

    "Well that’s easy…she’s just not funny."

     

    "Oh come on…"

     

    "Unless you’re talking about Jennifer Aniston pre-Friends in that horror movie The Leprechaun, because watching her get chased around by a midget in a leprechaun costume was fucking hilarious."

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    2. Loved it! the break-up was very good..Lara is gone. Next one leaving? Jules (but is it bad that I like her?)I’m glad you liked my last comment, this story is really really great. PPS!!!

    3. I loved Dana’s initial lack of a response when Lara asked if she was still in love with Alice. Thank you for ridding us of the Lara problem. I guess it has been long enough since season 3, so I’m capable of feeling somewhat sorry for her. I was also surprised that Dana was so blunt about Jules in the previous update. Happy writing!

    4. it’s a first step that Dana and Lara broke-up, I mean who was she fooling? poor Lara though…now Dana has to come clean with Alice but I’m worried it’ll be too late :Sand lol can you make the tension thicker? damn! i can’t imagine it but i bet it’ll be a great chapter to read. keep the writing. have a nice week :)

    5. Nice! Interested to see what Dana does, hopefully she puts it all out there, but at the appropriate time! Bring on the angts and sexual tension! PPS

    8. Great breakup. (now THAT sounds strange)I understand why dananalice wished Dana had initiated it- but it’s not surprising that Lara had too… and we already saw that emotionally Dana was there. The fact that still Lara had to pull it from her was emblematic. What did Alice say last chapter? “Don’t know why i thought you might save us the time and energy and just TELL me what your feeling?” :)I’m looking forward to Alice’s reaction to learning that Dana and Lara have broken up. Poor Alice, she’s toast. : )

    9. lara had some great lines and words of wisdom in this installment. i am glad they broke up, but i kind of wish dana would have done it. but i think through the break up lara talked some sense in to her and dana realizes that she needs to grow up. as usual – great update. post soon and i look forward to some cute danish moments.

    10. Sweet, I think I’m first! Loved it as I always do. I’m glad Lara finally put herself first. Hopefully Dana takes her advice. As for Alice and Jules…if you insist on having them do the horizontal bop, could you possibly have Jules yell out “Motherfucker!” at random intervals? Just a thought (it’d make my week). Anyway, great chapter, and I smell a Danish reconciliation on the way. I hope. Because all the suspense is making me nuts.

    11. This is up the top of my list of fav danish fanfic, I do agree with other ppl that jules can’t be that perfect there has got to be something about her and I think Dana should try and find out more about her. Alice and Dana need to get together soon this is killing me I just want to bang there heads together!! Great fanfic PPS

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