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    If I Fall: Chapter 16

    Story written on March 25, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Dana and Lara are coming to an end, just as things are heating up with Alice and Jules.

     

    "Well it’s also not as hard as you make it."

     

    "What do you mean?"

     

    "Okay, by no means am I an expert on love and relationships. Hell, I seem to have developed a pattern of picking up Alice Pieszecki’s leftovers. But I do know that in your vain attempts to conceal your true feelings from the rest of the world, you end up making the relationships you do have unbearable."

     

    "So being with me is unbearable now? Great."

     

    "No, God Dana just stop feeling sorry for yourself and listen to me for a minute. Being with you is not the unbearable part. Trying to communicate with you and trying to figure out what the hell is going on in that heart of yours, that’s near impossible. It’s just a lose/lose situation for everyone if you’re going to continue to push down your real feelings in order to put on some pathetically brave front. And I don’t agree with any of the things Alice did to you after the breakup…but damn, at this point, I think I understand the need she had to get some sort of reaction from you. I mean, there’ve been plenty of times in the past month that I’ve found myself resisting the urge to act out just to get you to tell me how you feel. But you’re just too good at repression to do that."

     

    Dana wasn’t sure how to continue. She knew Lara wasn’t trying to be so harsh, but hearing all of that about herself kind of hurt…especially since it was all true. "Wow. That’s…a lot to take in."

     

    "Well, yeah. I guess it is. So, I’ve said my piece, I should be going."

     

    "Lara. I…"

     

    "I know, Dana."

     

    "No, I…I don’t know. I guess this just all feels so final. Would it be okay if I called you in a few days?"

     

    The redhead sighed at the thought of having a friendly phone conversation with this woman anytime soon. "You can call. I just don’t know if I’ll have it in me to pick up."

     

    "I understand. I just…wish we could be friends or something."

     

    "Yeah, that didn’t really work too well the last time, did it? Besides, I’m not sure what good a friendship with me would be if you’re trying to get Alice back."

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    2. Loved it! the break-up was very good..Lara is gone. Next one leaving? Jules (but is it bad that I like her?)I’m glad you liked my last comment, this story is really really great. PPS!!!

    3. I loved Dana’s initial lack of a response when Lara asked if she was still in love with Alice. Thank you for ridding us of the Lara problem. I guess it has been long enough since season 3, so I’m capable of feeling somewhat sorry for her. I was also surprised that Dana was so blunt about Jules in the previous update. Happy writing!

    4. it’s a first step that Dana and Lara broke-up, I mean who was she fooling? poor Lara though…now Dana has to come clean with Alice but I’m worried it’ll be too late :Sand lol can you make the tension thicker? damn! i can’t imagine it but i bet it’ll be a great chapter to read. keep the writing. have a nice week :)

    5. Nice! Interested to see what Dana does, hopefully she puts it all out there, but at the appropriate time! Bring on the angts and sexual tension! PPS

    8. Great breakup. (now THAT sounds strange)I understand why dananalice wished Dana had initiated it- but it’s not surprising that Lara had too… and we already saw that emotionally Dana was there. The fact that still Lara had to pull it from her was emblematic. What did Alice say last chapter? “Don’t know why i thought you might save us the time and energy and just TELL me what your feeling?” :)I’m looking forward to Alice’s reaction to learning that Dana and Lara have broken up. Poor Alice, she’s toast. : )

    9. lara had some great lines and words of wisdom in this installment. i am glad they broke up, but i kind of wish dana would have done it. but i think through the break up lara talked some sense in to her and dana realizes that she needs to grow up. as usual – great update. post soon and i look forward to some cute danish moments.

    10. Sweet, I think I’m first! Loved it as I always do. I’m glad Lara finally put herself first. Hopefully Dana takes her advice. As for Alice and Jules…if you insist on having them do the horizontal bop, could you possibly have Jules yell out “Motherfucker!” at random intervals? Just a thought (it’d make my week). Anyway, great chapter, and I smell a Danish reconciliation on the way. I hope. Because all the suspense is making me nuts.

    11. This is up the top of my list of fav danish fanfic, I do agree with other ppl that jules can’t be that perfect there has got to be something about her and I think Dana should try and find out more about her. Alice and Dana need to get together soon this is killing me I just want to bang there heads together!! Great fanfic PPS

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