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    If I Fall: Chapter 16

    Story written on March 25, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Dana and Lara are coming to an end, just as things are heating up with Alice and Jules.

     

    "She was to funny in Friends. But fine, she’s no Ellen. Whatever, that doesn’t matter because you’re beautiful and don’t act like you don’t know it because everyone does."

     

    "Right…"

     

    "Please, like you don’t notice the way other women, and men, look at you."

     

    "No…I only have eyes for you," Alice whispered in a mock-seductive voice while fervently batting her eyes.

     

    "I hope so," Jules responded sincerely. "I really like you, Alice. And I want you to know that this isn’t just some fling for me. I really hope that this is just the beginning for us. And I know that you may not be ready to completely move on just yet, or maybe you are but you don’t think it should be with me. And that’s okay. I mean, it would suck, but I’d learn to live with it. I just want you to know that you can trust me. I know that it’s difficult for you after the way your last relationship went down, but I’m not Dana. And I would never hurt you like that, you’re too special."

     

    They locked eyes and Alice could see that Jules meant it. And at that moment, she wanted desperately to let this woman in and trust her like she knew she could. She wanted to somehow be able to return the admiration and support, showing her that she wanted this to work out too.

     

    "Jules…"

    "Oh God—Did I say too much? I did, didn’t I? I’m sorry, I know we agreed to take things slow and that little speech didn’t really coincide with that. But I’ve just wanted to say that for so long now that—," Jules’ harried explanation was surprisingly cut off by Alice quickly getting up and placing her mouth over the blonde’s.

     

    "Breathe," Alice mumbled against her lips before she sat back down.

     

    Jules smiled gratefully and sighed. "Okay. I’m better now."

     

    "Good. Now what I was about to say was that I really like you too. And I want you to know that I don’t expect you to wait for me to get over all the emotional shit I’m still dealing with. But please believe that you’ve come to mean so much to me over the past month. I was a big ole mess before you came into my life. You already know most of the gory details, but let me tell you, if it weren’t for you, I’d probably be home right now on my couch popping pills and watching some depressing Lifetime movie by myself."

     

    "Well I’m glad you’re healthier now, Alice, but I didn’t do anything. It was all you."

     

    "Whoever it was…my life was on a downward spiral before you came into it. And I’m really grateful that in spite of all my crazy neurosis and past addictions to all things in capsule form, you’re still here."

     

    Now it was Jules’ turn to lean over the table and initiate a kiss. Except this one lasted longer and felt a bit more urgent to them both. After she managed to effectively suck all of the air from Alice’s lungs, she slowly pulled back and glanced around the restaurant, noticing the ogles and stares coming from the patrons around them. They both nervously cleared their throats and giggled uncontrollably until their check came.

     

    "Let’s get out of here," Alice whispered, standing up and taking Jules’ hand.

     

    Jules grabbed her coat and allowed Alice to lead her out of the restaurant. "I thought you’d never ask."

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    2. Loved it! the break-up was very good..Lara is gone. Next one leaving? Jules (but is it bad that I like her?)I’m glad you liked my last comment, this story is really really great. PPS!!!

    3. I loved Dana’s initial lack of a response when Lara asked if she was still in love with Alice. Thank you for ridding us of the Lara problem. I guess it has been long enough since season 3, so I’m capable of feeling somewhat sorry for her. I was also surprised that Dana was so blunt about Jules in the previous update. Happy writing!

    4. it’s a first step that Dana and Lara broke-up, I mean who was she fooling? poor Lara though…now Dana has to come clean with Alice but I’m worried it’ll be too late :Sand lol can you make the tension thicker? damn! i can’t imagine it but i bet it’ll be a great chapter to read. keep the writing. have a nice week :)

    5. Nice! Interested to see what Dana does, hopefully she puts it all out there, but at the appropriate time! Bring on the angts and sexual tension! PPS

    8. Great breakup. (now THAT sounds strange)I understand why dananalice wished Dana had initiated it- but it’s not surprising that Lara had too… and we already saw that emotionally Dana was there. The fact that still Lara had to pull it from her was emblematic. What did Alice say last chapter? “Don’t know why i thought you might save us the time and energy and just TELL me what your feeling?” :)I’m looking forward to Alice’s reaction to learning that Dana and Lara have broken up. Poor Alice, she’s toast. : )

    9. lara had some great lines and words of wisdom in this installment. i am glad they broke up, but i kind of wish dana would have done it. but i think through the break up lara talked some sense in to her and dana realizes that she needs to grow up. as usual – great update. post soon and i look forward to some cute danish moments.

    10. Sweet, I think I’m first! Loved it as I always do. I’m glad Lara finally put herself first. Hopefully Dana takes her advice. As for Alice and Jules…if you insist on having them do the horizontal bop, could you possibly have Jules yell out “Motherfucker!” at random intervals? Just a thought (it’d make my week). Anyway, great chapter, and I smell a Danish reconciliation on the way. I hope. Because all the suspense is making me nuts.

    11. This is up the top of my list of fav danish fanfic, I do agree with other ppl that jules can’t be that perfect there has got to be something about her and I think Dana should try and find out more about her. Alice and Dana need to get together soon this is killing me I just want to bang there heads together!! Great fanfic PPS

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