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If I Fall: Chapter 16
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Although, she wasn’t sure what else she could have done to prevent the scene that unfolded. She wasn’t ready to break down and have their talk transpire into some love confession, there was just too much at stake. Hell, she hadn’t even broken up with Lara yet. Lara. Thinking about that situation just added more fuel to the already stoked fire of frustration and confusion inside the athlete. This thing with Lara had gradually turned from an enjoyable distraction into a convoluted predicament that needed a resolution…immediately, if not sooner.
It was time.
For her part, Lara had waited, rather patiently under the circumstances, for Dana to return home from practice for the last half hour. She was typically a tolerant woman, but for Dana to make her wait tonight of all nights just reconfirmed the reason she was there waiting in the first place.
She had pulled up to the darkened condo 2 minutes before their agreed meeting time, after discovering that staring at the clock in her own apartment seemed to make her go crazy. She hoped that if she showed up early Dana would be there waiting for her so she could just get this over with…the sooner the better. Yet, as she threw the car into park and walked up the stairs to the front door, it was clear that this was just one more time she was to be let down by the athlete, and hopefully the last.
Through text message, Dana assured her that she’d be done with practice and home by 6. It was now 6:37 and Lara’s cool resolve was quickly melting. Dana had known that they needed to talk, Lara told her that directly. She didn’t want to get into it earlier at The Planet, but if Dana used half the sense she was born with, she would have realized how serious the redhead was in her plea. The least she could do was have enough decency to show up on time. But now, after an unbearably long, arduous, thirty-seven minutes, Lara realized that was not the case. To her, this seemed to be just another sign that she was ultimately in this relationship by herself.
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I guess Alice and Jules will be getting down with the get down. I’m truly digging this story to the nth. Yay!
Loved it! the break-up was very good..Lara is gone. Next one leaving? Jules (but is it bad that I like her?)I’m glad you liked my last comment, this story is really really great. PPS!!!
I loved Dana’s initial lack of a response when Lara asked if she was still in love with Alice. Thank you for ridding us of the Lara problem. I guess it has been long enough since season 3, so I’m capable of feeling somewhat sorry for her. I was also surprised that Dana was so blunt about Jules in the previous update. Happy writing!
it’s a first step that Dana and Lara broke-up, I mean who was she fooling? poor Lara though…now Dana has to come clean with Alice but I’m worried it’ll be too late :Sand lol can you make the tension thicker? damn! i can’t imagine it but i bet it’ll be a great chapter to read. keep the writing. have a nice week :)
Nice! Interested to see what Dana does, hopefully she puts it all out there, but at the appropriate time! Bring on the angts and sexual tension! PPS
I can’t wait to see how Dana is going to win Alice back
Cool. Loved the update. I am hoping Dana gets the nerve to win her back. PPS.
Great breakup. (now THAT sounds strange)I understand why dananalice wished Dana had initiated it- but it’s not surprising that Lara had too… and we already saw that emotionally Dana was there. The fact that still Lara had to pull it from her was emblematic. What did Alice say last chapter? “Don’t know why i thought you might save us the time and energy and just TELL me what your feeling?” :)I’m looking forward to Alice’s reaction to learning that Dana and Lara have broken up. Poor Alice, she’s toast. : )
lara had some great lines and words of wisdom in this installment. i am glad they broke up, but i kind of wish dana would have done it. but i think through the break up lara talked some sense in to her and dana realizes that she needs to grow up. as usual – great update. post soon and i look forward to some cute danish moments.
Sweet, I think I’m first! Loved it as I always do. I’m glad Lara finally put herself first. Hopefully Dana takes her advice. As for Alice and Jules…if you insist on having them do the horizontal bop, could you possibly have Jules yell out “Motherfucker!” at random intervals? Just a thought (it’d make my week). Anyway, great chapter, and I smell a Danish reconciliation on the way. I hope. Because all the suspense is making me nuts.
This is up the top of my list of fav danish fanfic, I do agree with other ppl that jules can’t be that perfect there has got to be something about her and I think Dana should try and find out more about her. Alice and Dana need to get together soon this is killing me I just want to bang there heads together!! Great fanfic PPS