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If I Fall: Chapter 16
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Dana’s downcast stare reluctantly lifted from the floor to meet Lara’s before she nodded, giving the chef a silent assent and the liberty to go on. And Lara did just that, after taking a deep breath and squeezing her eyes shut.
"Good. So…are you…still in love with Alice?"
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Across town Alice and Jules were sharing a meal at the same Thai restaurant they went to on their first date. It was Jules’ way of celebrating one month of being together, and while Alice found it adorably romantic, a part of her stiffened at the thought of being in something so serious again. It wasn’t that she didn’t genuinely like being with Jules. She enjoyed her company, she was wildly attracted to her, and had no qualms about trusting her or opening herself up to being vulnerable again. She knew she could trust this woman and desperately wanted to allow herself to fall in love.
But that was near impossible because that heart of hers had a mind of its own. Try as she may, she just could not stop its steady beating for the sake of one woman and one woman only. The most pig-headed, stubborn, emotionally-retarded, self-centered woman she ever met. Almost as badly as she wanted to not be in love with Dana Fairbanks, she wished even more so that she could just be angry at her for all the messed up things she said to her that afternoon. After all, anger would be a welcome relief from all the yearning and desiring she was used to. And it was true, a part of her was pretty pissed. But the other part? The other part was unable to stop picturing how hot she looked in her little tennis outfit, glistening and sweaty, with the veins on her chest popping out all over the place. Alice wanted to yell and scream at her…and then hike her skirt up and take her right there on the tennis court. She hated it. She hated herself for feeling that way. She hated Dana for being the cause of it. But most of all, she hated the fact that after everything Dana did, Alice could find a way to forgive her and still be passionately, head-over-heals in love.
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I guess Alice and Jules will be getting down with the get down. I’m truly digging this story to the nth. Yay!
Loved it! the break-up was very good..Lara is gone. Next one leaving? Jules (but is it bad that I like her?)I’m glad you liked my last comment, this story is really really great. PPS!!!
I loved Dana’s initial lack of a response when Lara asked if she was still in love with Alice. Thank you for ridding us of the Lara problem. I guess it has been long enough since season 3, so I’m capable of feeling somewhat sorry for her. I was also surprised that Dana was so blunt about Jules in the previous update. Happy writing!
it’s a first step that Dana and Lara broke-up, I mean who was she fooling? poor Lara though…now Dana has to come clean with Alice but I’m worried it’ll be too late :Sand lol can you make the tension thicker? damn! i can’t imagine it but i bet it’ll be a great chapter to read. keep the writing. have a nice week :)
Nice! Interested to see what Dana does, hopefully she puts it all out there, but at the appropriate time! Bring on the angts and sexual tension! PPS
I can’t wait to see how Dana is going to win Alice back
Cool. Loved the update. I am hoping Dana gets the nerve to win her back. PPS.
Great breakup. (now THAT sounds strange)I understand why dananalice wished Dana had initiated it- but it’s not surprising that Lara had too… and we already saw that emotionally Dana was there. The fact that still Lara had to pull it from her was emblematic. What did Alice say last chapter? “Don’t know why i thought you might save us the time and energy and just TELL me what your feeling?” :)I’m looking forward to Alice’s reaction to learning that Dana and Lara have broken up. Poor Alice, she’s toast. : )
lara had some great lines and words of wisdom in this installment. i am glad they broke up, but i kind of wish dana would have done it. but i think through the break up lara talked some sense in to her and dana realizes that she needs to grow up. as usual – great update. post soon and i look forward to some cute danish moments.
Sweet, I think I’m first! Loved it as I always do. I’m glad Lara finally put herself first. Hopefully Dana takes her advice. As for Alice and Jules…if you insist on having them do the horizontal bop, could you possibly have Jules yell out “Motherfucker!” at random intervals? Just a thought (it’d make my week). Anyway, great chapter, and I smell a Danish reconciliation on the way. I hope. Because all the suspense is making me nuts.
This is up the top of my list of fav danish fanfic, I do agree with other ppl that jules can’t be that perfect there has got to be something about her and I think Dana should try and find out more about her. Alice and Dana need to get together soon this is killing me I just want to bang there heads together!! Great fanfic PPS