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If I Fall: Chapter 24
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As far as Dana could tell, no one but Shane had any inkling as to what had happened between them after Helena’s party. And luckily no one had asked Dana if she’d heard from Alice since it appeared to the outsider that they were still in that awkward friendship phase that didn’t include informing each other of their whereabouts. So Dana sat idly by, listening intently to her friends’ theories on what was happening with Alice and why she had suddenly dropped out of sight again. Of course there was the all-too ironic comment that Bette had made, purely in jest and not realizing what a cord she had struck when she remarked jokingly to the athlete, "The last time Alice cut off contact with everyone was after your breakup, Dana. You guys didn’t break up again did you?" The knot in Dana’s stomach tightened, and it took every ounce of determination left in her to force a small smile on her face before turning away and letting the tears fall.
So it was on this Wednesday afternoon that Dana found herself alone in bed, failing miserably at her futile attempts to coax herself to sleep. With her harrowing training schedule that began every morning at 5am, coupled with the fact that when she did allow herself time to sleep all she could think about was Alice and what this silence meant for their future, Dana hadn’t allowed herself more than ten hours of shuteye over the past four days.
Sighing heavily she extended her arm across the bed and grabbed her phone to check the time, although only to herself would she admit that this was just another way to feed into her compulsion of making sure she hadn’t missed a call…despite the fact that the phone hadn’t rung all afternoon. Eight whole minutes had past since the last glance at the face of the phone, and as expected, Dana hadn’t overlooked a single call. Without any real reason besides assured boredom, she scrolled to her contacts list and glanced at the very first name: Alice. Just seeing the name in black and white before her forced Dana to profusely blink back the tears that threatened to rip at her heart strings. She wasn’t sure how much longer this communication embargo would carry on, and had become even less sure of how much longer she could continue to sit idly by and do nothing.
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First of all, welcome back!!! Second of all…. I thought she called Dana!!! Anyway, I love Jules too. OMG I hate to admit but I love this wavering thing. Yes, all the while it pains me to see Alice and Dana suffer, I actually enjoy it. I must be M out of S.M….. Anyway… I am so freaking glad you’re back! I was longing for you and Alice’s “sex” voice. Gah, what an expression. Yes, indeed, I love her voice. Alice needs to get some courage and talk to Dana. Afterall, one she loves is DANA!! :) hee heeeeThank you so much for posting.!! Plz plz post soon!
Ok just so you know i have loved ur story from day one and sorry i havent commented sooner just wanted to be up to date before i did!! Althou not reli tht happy with u right now JULES??? Why she goin to Jules for?? I know its hard for her to go to Dana after everything but after that fucking hot Bathroom scene everyone inc Alice herself knows tht those two are meant to be together and need to start taking steps towards it even if it is slow …. please lol!!! Anyway rant over reli reli love ur story cant wait for ur next update lol!! :) PPS x x
please update again
You really love this whole cliffhanger business, don’t you? I might be a little upset if you didn’t do it so well. I’m really glad you updated, and this isn’t even close to being filler. It’s necessary for the story, if Danish didn’t wallow in some sorta thought bubble for awhile after everything that’s happened, it wouldn’t make any sense. I just hope Jules doesn’t take advantage of Alice’s emotional state. Not that I think she’d do that deliberately or anything, but…yeah. Okay I’ve been rambling for like ever here, but what I want you to take away from this dissertation is that you rule muchly.
8 Pages is not filler, It was pretty damn good…Please get Dana and Alice in the same room…Love how you write your A&D!
OK. So your filler makes my filler look even more like filler. ;-D Seriously — this was a great chapter. I understand that Alice is going through a lot, but, she really should have called Dana. Leaving her hanging wasn’t very nice. I’m glad Dana is committing herself to the relationship in a way she didn’t the first time around. Thank goodness Shane, Tina and Boo were there to help Dana. I love how your articulated both Alice and Dana’s thoughts on the situation. It is interesting how they both are thinking the same way — what Alice needs is what Dana is prepared to give her. But they need to talk to realize that. Argh. Bad Alice! I understand her reasoning, but, what if Dana sees Jules over there? Does Alice know Dana is leaving soon for NY? Can I beg you to PPS?
oh i missed you swiss.. so happy about the update oh yeh..i love reading what u write i could just read it all day lol wat an interesting ending i hope i dnt have to wait another month for an update BUT if that is wat it takes then i will thank you!!!!!!
Whoosh! Ok it’s taken me ohhh-4 months and some odd days to comment but here i am! PLEASE update, i just cannot stand playing out all of the possible scenarios in my head. You have really done an excellent job with this whole adventure. I just have this dying urge to know what happens-how does it go with Jules-with our beloved Danish….what happens? Only you know and i am begging for an update or even a small glimpse of Alice and Dana happy and together. But another couple of months wont bother me if that’s how long it takes for you to post somemore of this beautifully written story. Thanks so much swiss!
This is the first Danish fic I have read and still one of the best. I’ll die if you don’t finish it, lol. I need HAPPY DANISH!!! Please update!!!