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If I Fall: Chapter 24
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The logical part of her knew that the metaphoric ball was in Alice’s court, and regrettably, she was at the mercy of that notion. There was the gradual realization, however, that she too was at the mercy of her fear and confounded frustration, both of which had been having their way with her for three days time. And while each and every muscle in her body ached for the writer, her body silently screaming out from the absolute agony of loneliness, she clung desperately to the tiniest slice of hope that still remained. A hope that willed her to carry on and keep waiting for Alice to come back to her, despite the fact that with every passing hour, that hope seemed to dwindle so far down it could appear non-existent to the untrained eye. But if Dana knew anything for certain in such an ambiguous time, it was that she could do nothing at all but continue waiting. And with that wait came the unbridled hope that this state of confusion and wordless chaos was ephemeral at best.
She was shaken from her reverie by the sound of the doorbell chiming. Quickly throwing on a pair of shorts and an old unwashed T-shirt of Alice’s (which she had taken to keep in her nightstand drawer so it was never too far…the irony of which wasn’t completely lost on Dana), she made her way through the contours of the condominium and opened her front door with a sigh.
"Hey," the greeting began merrily enough until Tina, who was sporting a diaper bag in one arm and Angelica in the other, gave Dana a once over. "What happened? You’re not ready!"
Dana stared blankly at her friend before shaking her head slowly to clear some of the cerebral cobwebs. "Ready? For what?"
"For lunch," she cried in mock exasperation. "Remember? I called you last night to tell you about the issue of Sports Illustrated in the waiting room at the pediatrician’s office. You know, it just happened to be opened to the page with your new Dasani ad on it and Angelica saw the picture of you and said she wanted to see her Aunt Dana." Tina paused to wait for any sign of recognition in Dana’s eyes.
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First of all, welcome back!!! Second of all…. I thought she called Dana!!! Anyway, I love Jules too. OMG I hate to admit but I love this wavering thing. Yes, all the while it pains me to see Alice and Dana suffer, I actually enjoy it. I must be M out of S.M….. Anyway… I am so freaking glad you’re back! I was longing for you and Alice’s “sex” voice. Gah, what an expression. Yes, indeed, I love her voice. Alice needs to get some courage and talk to Dana. Afterall, one she loves is DANA!! :) hee heeeeThank you so much for posting.!! Plz plz post soon!
Ok just so you know i have loved ur story from day one and sorry i havent commented sooner just wanted to be up to date before i did!! Althou not reli tht happy with u right now JULES??? Why she goin to Jules for?? I know its hard for her to go to Dana after everything but after that fucking hot Bathroom scene everyone inc Alice herself knows tht those two are meant to be together and need to start taking steps towards it even if it is slow …. please lol!!! Anyway rant over reli reli love ur story cant wait for ur next update lol!! :) PPS x x
please update again
You really love this whole cliffhanger business, don’t you? I might be a little upset if you didn’t do it so well. I’m really glad you updated, and this isn’t even close to being filler. It’s necessary for the story, if Danish didn’t wallow in some sorta thought bubble for awhile after everything that’s happened, it wouldn’t make any sense. I just hope Jules doesn’t take advantage of Alice’s emotional state. Not that I think she’d do that deliberately or anything, but…yeah. Okay I’ve been rambling for like ever here, but what I want you to take away from this dissertation is that you rule muchly.
8 Pages is not filler, It was pretty damn good…Please get Dana and Alice in the same room…Love how you write your A&D!
OK. So your filler makes my filler look even more like filler. ;-D Seriously — this was a great chapter. I understand that Alice is going through a lot, but, she really should have called Dana. Leaving her hanging wasn’t very nice. I’m glad Dana is committing herself to the relationship in a way she didn’t the first time around. Thank goodness Shane, Tina and Boo were there to help Dana. I love how your articulated both Alice and Dana’s thoughts on the situation. It is interesting how they both are thinking the same way — what Alice needs is what Dana is prepared to give her. But they need to talk to realize that. Argh. Bad Alice! I understand her reasoning, but, what if Dana sees Jules over there? Does Alice know Dana is leaving soon for NY? Can I beg you to PPS?
oh i missed you swiss.. so happy about the update oh yeh..i love reading what u write i could just read it all day lol wat an interesting ending i hope i dnt have to wait another month for an update BUT if that is wat it takes then i will thank you!!!!!!
Whoosh! Ok it’s taken me ohhh-4 months and some odd days to comment but here i am! PLEASE update, i just cannot stand playing out all of the possible scenarios in my head. You have really done an excellent job with this whole adventure. I just have this dying urge to know what happens-how does it go with Jules-with our beloved Danish….what happens? Only you know and i am begging for an update or even a small glimpse of Alice and Dana happy and together. But another couple of months wont bother me if that’s how long it takes for you to post somemore of this beautifully written story. Thanks so much swiss!
This is the first Danish fic I have read and still one of the best. I’ll die if you don’t finish it, lol. I need HAPPY DANISH!!! Please update!!!