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If I Fall: Chapter 24
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"And I asked you and Angelica to lunch this afternoon…," Dana slowly finished the story while recalling their conversation from the previous day.
"Right." The blonde shrugged with a smile and shifted Angelica’s weight in her arms. "So, here we are."
The athlete’s face flushed with embarrassment at forgetting about lunch…especially when she was so honestly touched to hear that Angelica had specifically requested her. She had just been so caught up in her thoughts of Alice to have allowed anything else to register in her mind, even when lunch was her idea in the first place.
"Damn, Tina, I’m so sorry. Come in, come in." She ushered them inside, mumbling another apology and saying hello to Angelica in the process. "Listen, give me five minutes to go get changed and we’ll go, okay?"
"Dana, it’s really okay. If you have something else you were doing, we can just reschedule."
She glanced down at her shabbily clothed body and back up at Tina with a laugh. "Does it really look like I have more pressing matters to attend to right now? I was just…," she trailed off, unsure of how to describe what it was she was doing. Laying in bed agonizing over her best friend? Dialing the first six numbers, careful not to hit the seventh, of the only person in the world who she shouldn’t be calling?
"Drowning in a pool of your own self-pity?" Tina chimed in, noticing the way she caught Dana off-guard, she immediately reassured her with a smile.
‘Well,’ Dana thought, ‘that was one way to look at it.’ She gave a fragile grin in return and sheepishly looked down at the ground. "Yeah…something like that."
"Hey. It’s okay." She felt the blonde’s hand on her shoulder and lifted her head back up slowly. "Really Dana, she’s gonna come back to you. I know Alice, and I know that you’re the most important person in the world to her. She loves you. You just need to remember that."
Dana took a deep breath and nodded slowly. She wasn’t sure how Tina knew, or even what it was that she did know, but she was relieved to hear the words of comfort nonetheless. "Thank you."
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First of all, welcome back!!! Second of all…. I thought she called Dana!!! Anyway, I love Jules too. OMG I hate to admit but I love this wavering thing. Yes, all the while it pains me to see Alice and Dana suffer, I actually enjoy it. I must be M out of S.M….. Anyway… I am so freaking glad you’re back! I was longing for you and Alice’s “sex” voice. Gah, what an expression. Yes, indeed, I love her voice. Alice needs to get some courage and talk to Dana. Afterall, one she loves is DANA!! :) hee heeeeThank you so much for posting.!! Plz plz post soon!
Ok just so you know i have loved ur story from day one and sorry i havent commented sooner just wanted to be up to date before i did!! Althou not reli tht happy with u right now JULES??? Why she goin to Jules for?? I know its hard for her to go to Dana after everything but after that fucking hot Bathroom scene everyone inc Alice herself knows tht those two are meant to be together and need to start taking steps towards it even if it is slow …. please lol!!! Anyway rant over reli reli love ur story cant wait for ur next update lol!! :) PPS x x
please update again
You really love this whole cliffhanger business, don’t you? I might be a little upset if you didn’t do it so well. I’m really glad you updated, and this isn’t even close to being filler. It’s necessary for the story, if Danish didn’t wallow in some sorta thought bubble for awhile after everything that’s happened, it wouldn’t make any sense. I just hope Jules doesn’t take advantage of Alice’s emotional state. Not that I think she’d do that deliberately or anything, but…yeah. Okay I’ve been rambling for like ever here, but what I want you to take away from this dissertation is that you rule muchly.
8 Pages is not filler, It was pretty damn good…Please get Dana and Alice in the same room…Love how you write your A&D!
OK. So your filler makes my filler look even more like filler. ;-D Seriously — this was a great chapter. I understand that Alice is going through a lot, but, she really should have called Dana. Leaving her hanging wasn’t very nice. I’m glad Dana is committing herself to the relationship in a way she didn’t the first time around. Thank goodness Shane, Tina and Boo were there to help Dana. I love how your articulated both Alice and Dana’s thoughts on the situation. It is interesting how they both are thinking the same way — what Alice needs is what Dana is prepared to give her. But they need to talk to realize that. Argh. Bad Alice! I understand her reasoning, but, what if Dana sees Jules over there? Does Alice know Dana is leaving soon for NY? Can I beg you to PPS?
oh i missed you swiss.. so happy about the update oh yeh..i love reading what u write i could just read it all day lol wat an interesting ending i hope i dnt have to wait another month for an update BUT if that is wat it takes then i will thank you!!!!!!
Whoosh! Ok it’s taken me ohhh-4 months and some odd days to comment but here i am! PLEASE update, i just cannot stand playing out all of the possible scenarios in my head. You have really done an excellent job with this whole adventure. I just have this dying urge to know what happens-how does it go with Jules-with our beloved Danish….what happens? Only you know and i am begging for an update or even a small glimpse of Alice and Dana happy and together. But another couple of months wont bother me if that’s how long it takes for you to post somemore of this beautifully written story. Thanks so much swiss!
This is the first Danish fic I have read and still one of the best. I’ll die if you don’t finish it, lol. I need HAPPY DANISH!!! Please update!!!