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    Instinct part9

    Story written on June 24, 2008 by adicttosharmen.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=70071
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    We don’t like to believe miracles exist… but they do. Things happen… things we cant explain… we cant control them, but they do happen. Every day…

     

     I said that and went away… The look on her ace said it all…. She was stunned… shocked….  Se didn’t expect all that………..

     

    I had to see Shane… I just had to… this thing is fucking retarded… I hate talking I hate the past… why the hell is it called past if you cant pass shit with time… overcome them… fuck.

     

    I find Izzy in the hall

     

    “Izzy! Wait”

     

    “Hey… I already told you she needs to sleep”

     

    “You don’t understand… I need to talk to her… I need to”

     

    “Carmen… there is a patient here in a hospital who is in a coma… his heart is a perfect match… I am trying to convince the family to sing this form right here…. This is the permit for donating his heart… I have to talk to them to convince them… and if they do, we have a heart… and Shane needs sleep for this operation to work… so would you let her rest?”

     

    “So she is going to get a heart”

     

    “If the patient parents agree yes”

     

    “Can I talk to them?”

     

    “No Carmen I can’t even tell you what I just did… just… go down to the loby drink a coffee and I’ll come to tell you how it did first thing…ok?”

     

    “Ok” so I turned around and looked back to see Izzy turning around… so I followed her… I can’t let Shane’s life rest in a doctors hands… I need to do something… Izzy got in a room and I waited out side listening to what the were saying

     

    “Nice to meet you Dr. Stevens, I’m Sarah…”

     

    “Nice to meet you Sarah… um I wanted to talk to you about something who may be very difficult for you to hear, but I’m a doctor and my job is to save people… and I’m sorry if I offended you in anyway… but I have to try…. Sarah… your son Ronny is in a coma… he is not going to wake up”

     

    “You don’t know that”

     

    “Sarah… his brain is dead…it doesn’t work…he cant think or feel, or move or do anything… Ronny is not there anymore”

     

    “What do you want!… huh? Why in the name of God would you come here and tell me al this… I know all that, I know… but what do you want me do? He’s my son…” this is so fucking sad… I have tears coming down my eyes…. Since I’ve been here that’s all I’ve done… cry…. And this scene right here… is just not helping… poor lady… this is not cool at all, maybe need to walk away…

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    1. your updates make the heart heavier (in a good way of course).. they are laced with so much emotions, it’s so real. i hope carmen will be able to convince shane to go for that operation. it’s .. it’s.. so sad! ):

    5. you made me cry…i love the sincerity, their vulnerability..the pure love that comes from both of them, the silly decisions and thoughts that cloud their judgement because of threats of NOT being able to pick up where they left off…how i wish to see Cramen back in season 6…sigh..please keep on updating!

    7. okay, ima have 2 come back wit a comment bcuz im kina choked up right now, so yeah … but plz make it so dat Shane go thru wit da surgery …. datz all i can say atm….

    9. Holy Sh*t!!!! It’s freaking awesome. I hate to say this but I can understand Shane and Carmen either. Shane has might seen the light already when she got a heart attack badly. I just hope Carmen get won eventually.

    11. wow.. puh.. powerfull indeed! Loving the story!=) I’ve been watching a shot at love.. Brittany has been my favourite from day one! =D Though it sucked that Tila dumped her.. I think she’s better off without her.. she is too good for her! Go Brit! “I don’t want a shot at love, I want the whole damn bar!” lol..^^

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