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The brunette moaned as Tina feasted on her. She held the woman by the back of her neck to keep her close. The build up from delivering a satisfying orgasm for the blonde already had her on the breaking edge. She just needed the smallest amount of encouragement to fall completely over.
And Tina did give her the encouragement. She tentatively pushed two fingers in, feeling the woman tremble, then she started a pace, which she assumed Bette would enjoy.
It wasn’t about the pace, or precision for that matter, just having the blonde exploring was enough for her. The familiarizing process was the most exciting. An accidental graze on the sensitive spongy spot, a brief relief of pain on her clit, were all it took to drive her to the most beautiful euphoria.
But it was not at all enough for Tina. She studied every change in the brunette’s body language and memorized what brought the most dramatic response. She learned, to please Bette, to love Bette. And judging by the louder and louder moans, she was on the track to be an excellent lover.
“T… Tina!” Her stomach fluttered and her thighs tensed. It was her own body giving her the cue that it was the moment. Bette braced herself against the wall and embraced the flooding climax.
Tina wasn’t sure what she was supposed to do, so she just held the brunette, as closely as possible, like Bette did for her.
They stayed that way for a long time, so long that both of their heartbeat returned to normal and the only sound heard in the room was the running water splashing on the tiles. Then Bette relaxed her arms and pulled slightly away from their tight embrace. She stepped out of her pajama pants and undergarments, reached to the small glass platform installed in the cube for some shampoo, gathered a handful of rich bubbles and lathered them to Tina’s hair.
Tina let her wash her hair. She closed her eyes to the careful massage on her scalp. Then she rinsed her hair, the water adding a darker shade to her blondness. And it was her turn. Her hand weaved through the thick brown curls. She enjoyed every moment of washing Bette’s hair. It felt like silk around her fingers.
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Correction: I dedicate this chapter to Pie, my dear friend! Although…it is NC-17 and a teeny tiny bit inappropriate, but it’s a happy chapter, and a reminder for her to come back soon. She texted me this morning saying that she’s doing better, fighting an infection, but I’m sure she’s gonna kick ass!
And the inspiration of the title was from the song “Gold”, by Wake Owl. It is a really good song.
SO to my twitter family and fanfic readers! Stop by any time and leave me some love ;)
Peace :)
So glad there was some happiness for those two after the brutality. Thanks
Nice Chapter – nice dedication.
Pie seems to be recovering now so hopefully she’ll be back posting soon.
I would be pissed off if someone who supposedly cares for me, would allow someone to shoot drugs into me. I don’t care what the consequences are.
Other then that I really enjoy this story.
This was an awesome chapter… I loved the sexiness and them finally being together truly. But what I truly loved about this chapter was the cuteness factor and the verbal back and forth between them.. I just loved their playfulness!!! Great chapter!!
Wow this was awesome, thankyou!
Such a nice contrast to the violence of the last chapter. Beautiful musings of love and adoration.. Thank you, Rob! Again, Pie would be proud!
Wonderful, sweet and hot loving chapter! Just what we needed after that violence chapter.
It is good to hear Pie_Fair is getting better, she sure will kick ass!
It was a sweet and full of love chapter. It was very relaxing to read, an immense difference to the previous violence chapter.
I loved the playful banter between them.
really liked it. Thank you!
The more you get well soon Pie. and come back to us :)
Rob, it was amazing one NC: 17 pure quality,
my God !! was breathtaking, very sensual, very
romantic, wild and gentle at the same time,
all perfeito.elas simply torched this
history, and there is medicine for my poor heart.
ROB! ALL STARS.
Beautiful chapter amid all this terror!
RT,
I have been following this book and I don’t know if I have left a comment on your previous chapters..
But I couldn’t remember leaving a comment so here I am begging u to please hurry with your next chap coz I am really excited for these two ladies.
Command has been missing but I guess it wouldn’t hurt if you will entertain us with your own version of crime/suspense and full of love fan fiction..
Another achievement for you friend bcoz u are able to make us asked for more. (Wink!)
Thanks for this Chap! We are The Lucky One(s) *ooppss!!!
Oh my sweet friend!..Sorry it has taken me so long to catch up with your story but thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me. I continue to improve everyday. You have managed to once again dazzle me with your writing and what a sweet chapter compared to the last one….Can’t wait for the next chapter and thank you for all your love and support.
Luv ya!
Pie
I’m so happy you are my friend because when someone ask one day, hey have you ever read one of Robyn’s amazing books? I can say of course I have, she’s a good friend of mines. lol ok I just had to say that…Seriously Robyn every chapter I am amazed by your writing…gosh you suck! ok not really! But truly you are incredible, fucking incredible! Dedicate your first book to me…something like “To the most beautiful, loving friend I ever known Marq***** oh shit almost let it slip. Anyways I love it…obviously! lol