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Meanwhile Bette squeezed a generous amount of body wash for them both. She started a bit below Tina’s ears and made sure her hand roamed the scented foam to every inch of the pale skin.
They washed themselves in silence because there was no need for words. They exchanged loving caresses, sensual kisses and intense stares.
The smell of her own shampoo on Tina gave her a great sense of completeness. She felt her heart was whole again. This completeness was so rare that it meant no sense to her before she met the blonde and got to have her. It could only mean one thing. “I love you.”
Tina temporarily paused hearing it. The sentence was spoken so gingerly and softly, like a breeze on the spring water, ripples everywhere, that it seemed surreal.
“I don’t want you to panic, and I don’t expect you to say it back, T, I just want you to know.” Bette whispered in her ear to soothe her.
“I love you too.” It wasn’t that she was not ready, it was because she wanted to take it all in. But the insecurity in Bette’s voice broke her heart. She got to know, Bette got to know that she was feeling exactly the same way.
“You do?” The big doe eyes smiled, points of light dancing in her pupils, and fireflies in her night.
Bette should smile more, because that kind of light in the electrifying brown orbs really suited her better than a stone cold stare, once people saw them, they’d get sucked into them and want to dance with the lights and fireflies, there’d be no return. Tina thought to herself, and brought her arms around the taller woman’s neck to affirm her confession.
And again, the kiss started it all. All the brunette wanted to do was to make sweet, passionate love to her all the time. Tina yelped as she felt Bette speedily kissing down her body, sucking her skin every once in a while and leaving red marks all the way. In no time, the mop of brown hair arrived on her lower belly and the tension made the blonde grab on to the shower handle. It instantly turned cold and she screamed while Bette shouted in laughter to turn it off.
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Correction: I dedicate this chapter to Pie, my dear friend! Although…it is NC-17 and a teeny tiny bit inappropriate, but it’s a happy chapter, and a reminder for her to come back soon. She texted me this morning saying that she’s doing better, fighting an infection, but I’m sure she’s gonna kick ass!
And the inspiration of the title was from the song “Gold”, by Wake Owl. It is a really good song.
SO to my twitter family and fanfic readers! Stop by any time and leave me some love ;)
Peace :)
So glad there was some happiness for those two after the brutality. Thanks
Nice Chapter – nice dedication.
Pie seems to be recovering now so hopefully she’ll be back posting soon.
I would be pissed off if someone who supposedly cares for me, would allow someone to shoot drugs into me. I don’t care what the consequences are.
Other then that I really enjoy this story.
This was an awesome chapter… I loved the sexiness and them finally being together truly. But what I truly loved about this chapter was the cuteness factor and the verbal back and forth between them.. I just loved their playfulness!!! Great chapter!!
Wow this was awesome, thankyou!
Such a nice contrast to the violence of the last chapter. Beautiful musings of love and adoration.. Thank you, Rob! Again, Pie would be proud!
Wonderful, sweet and hot loving chapter! Just what we needed after that violence chapter.
It is good to hear Pie_Fair is getting better, she sure will kick ass!
It was a sweet and full of love chapter. It was very relaxing to read, an immense difference to the previous violence chapter.
I loved the playful banter between them.
really liked it. Thank you!
The more you get well soon Pie. and come back to us :)
Rob, it was amazing one NC: 17 pure quality,
my God !! was breathtaking, very sensual, very
romantic, wild and gentle at the same time,
all perfeito.elas simply torched this
history, and there is medicine for my poor heart.
ROB! ALL STARS.
Beautiful chapter amid all this terror!
RT,
I have been following this book and I don’t know if I have left a comment on your previous chapters..
But I couldn’t remember leaving a comment so here I am begging u to please hurry with your next chap coz I am really excited for these two ladies.
Command has been missing but I guess it wouldn’t hurt if you will entertain us with your own version of crime/suspense and full of love fan fiction..
Another achievement for you friend bcoz u are able to make us asked for more. (Wink!)
Thanks for this Chap! We are The Lucky One(s) *ooppss!!!
Oh my sweet friend!..Sorry it has taken me so long to catch up with your story but thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me. I continue to improve everyday. You have managed to once again dazzle me with your writing and what a sweet chapter compared to the last one….Can’t wait for the next chapter and thank you for all your love and support.
Luv ya!
Pie
I’m so happy you are my friend because when someone ask one day, hey have you ever read one of Robyn’s amazing books? I can say of course I have, she’s a good friend of mines. lol ok I just had to say that…Seriously Robyn every chapter I am amazed by your writing…gosh you suck! ok not really! But truly you are incredible, fucking incredible! Dedicate your first book to me…something like “To the most beautiful, loving friend I ever known Marq***** oh shit almost let it slip. Anyways I love it…obviously! lol