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Lest I Forget (5b)
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“I still remember how the sun looked when it set. It sorta reflected back to us off the glaciers. Do you remember, Al?” I asked, my voice shaking a little more than I was comfortable with. But she understood; I could feel it in the slight pressure she was able to exert against my hand, which was still grasping hers as if I’d die without it.
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It had taken us a little while to get ready to go, even after we emerged from the bathroom fully dressed. I was struck immediately by the silence; there wasn’t even any noise from the TV. Alice looked at me and shrugged, shaking her head. Our suitcases were sitting closed on the bed, and she made a show of walking over to them with shampoo and soap in her hand, leaving me responsible for seeing what the hell had happened to our friends.
“Bette? Shane? Come on, you guys, this isn’t a good trick!” I called into the living room, remembering a night not too long ago when we’d had poker at Alice’s. Everyone had gotten the great idea to hide behind her furniture while I went on a beer run. The resulting near heart attack had made them laugh, but they’d all sworn never to do that again. And not long after, I’d gotten sick, so they hadn’t tried anything since. Still, promises with these guys usually lasted until the next good prank opportunity, so I was wary as I walked into the room. Nothing. Nobody was there. I checked the kitchen…same deal, but there was a note on the counter.
You guys are sick. We’re going to get breakfast from a place where our friends don’t subject us to the sounds of them fucking. The only reason I’m letting it slide is because it’s technically your honeymoon, but payback’s still a bitch.
We got your bags packed, so you two get your passports and cameras and whatever else you might need. We’ll get you some muffins for breakfast, but we don’t really want to come back up, so be ready to go when I call, okay?
–Bette (and Shane)
I laughed and meandered back to the bedroom. “Look, Al…we grossed them out,” I told her, handing her the note. She scanned it briefly and grinned.
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AWESOME! I love how you have Dana being so in-love with Alice, just utterely and completely. That is how I saw it happening on the real show ‘if’ that ding dong IC didn’t knock TV Dana off…ugh it still bugs me, why, okay I can rant on that one forever…back to your story…I truly love this story, so well written you can actually visualize the scenes. And yeah nice touch with the shower, I love it! Nice work!
No, you can’t let her slip away yet, there are years and years of stories to be told … and you must tell it as wonderfully as you have up to now.
I forgot to add this to my comment last night. After watching the Afterellen’s vlog: Worst Lesbian TV Moments where Killing Dana was the #1, I was really bumped out all over again. Then your post came along in the early hours in the morning made me feel a whole lot better. I just wanted you to know that. Honestly, it is this alternative universe of fanfics which gives me a little comfort and plenty of laughs. I cannot stress enough just how much miss DF on the show. Thanks MT and all you Danish writers again.
gasp. But I know you will get Alice back, I just know it. And I love how much in love they were back in the days and still are of course. It’s wonderfully desribed by you. Great.
I agree with MaGoose, this chapter really was a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the whole interaction with Shane and Bette . And then the kiss Alice gave to Dana right before she slipped back in her coma. Poor Dana. :( I hope Alice will come by for a little while. *keeps fingers crossed*
“So fucking cute”, and Shane was sooo effin’ right! I agree with ACH21, there’s no doubt in my mind that Dana would be consummed body and soul with her love for Alice. It’s very touching, *sigh*. I also have to add that the humor in this story is cracking me up, spot on there MT! I am anxiously waiting to hear more about their life together…
Running out of hot water, fantastic. Bette & Shane’s note was even better. Keeping the passport with the sex toys, LMAO! How the hell do you eat crabs legs with one hand? Ha-ha-haa. S was a real good friend getting D her 3 boxes of seasickness pills. The sunrise scene was perfect. I think this Alaskan honeymoon cruise was just what the doctor ordered. And just when I was having fun reading this update, A might have slipped back into a coma. My heart goes out to D and thank god Charlie and S showed up at the right time. Please let A stay for a little bit longer. Thank you MT for another awesome update. I hope you will be able to post another one before your trip if you have the time.
noooooooooooooooooooooo :'(
Incredible chapter, MT! I started to cut and paste my favorite lines to comment on. However, I realized that it was most of the chapter. What a roller coaster of humor, drama, sadness, romance, sex… I’ve said it before and I will keep saying it: You rock at writing Danish. I trust that Alice will be back from the coma — I know you have a lot more to say about their years together. Thanks so much for the update!!
at last I get a chance to read some stories and I headed straight for yours. This story is fantastic you write so well and are developing the long happy life together that we know this pair could have had beautifully. I expectantly await the next chapter!!!!!