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Let it Ride- Chapter 5
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Dana followed Alice into the house and reeled at what she saw. She had been to a few parties in high school but nothing could have prepared her for the sights and sounds of her first real college party.
The few surfaces suitable for sitting were jammed with students. There was more alcohol than Dana had ever seen in one place. Most people were walking around with red or blue plastic cups like the kind her parents used at cookouts or block parties.
Glancing in one that was discarded on a ledge, Dana saw a pink liquid that would have looked suspiciously like pink lemonade if it weren’t for the clumps of soaked, floating fruit inside it.
One girl was coming out of the kitchen carrying a flat piece of cardboard laden with small, plastic containers. Grinning as she passed Alice and Dana, Alice smoothly grabbed a handful and distributed them between herself and the tennis player.
Looking down, Dana eyed the contents warily. It looked just like jello and she wondered if it was possible for it to simply be jell-o. Alice grinned down at hers and then to Dana’s surprise, she simply tossed it down her throat and swallowed.
Smiling triumphantly, Alice opened her eyes to look at Dana to see if she’d taken hers yet. Suddenly uneasy, Dana leaned closer to Alice and asked, "It’s not acid, is it?"
Grinning, Alice couldn’t fight the bark of laughter that escaped her. She said comfortingly, "It’s just a shot, Dane. They pour the alcohol into the jell-o mix. It’s probably everclear or vodka."
Dana relaxed a little and considered Alice’s smiling face for a moment. She wasn’t used to this kind of atmosphere but she felt sure of herself with Alice. Taking her own container she said gamely, "You’re only young once, right?"
Alice laughed and said, "If you do it right."
Dana threw back the shot, shuddering a little as she felt it slow almost to a complete stop before she forced it down.
Blinking, she was surprised to find that she could hardly taste the alcohol. "You’re sure that was a shot," she asked Alice.
Alice threw her arm around Dana and said, "Boy, I’m gonna have to keep an eye on you tonight."
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i cant say enough how much i love this story it just keeps getting better and better and the ending in the words of alice “hot hot hot!” lol please post again soon you rule!!
Great Update! Looking fwd to seeing how they work out Dana not being out! Loved that you posted so soon! Keep up the good work!
Don’t be so hard on yourself; the chapter was far from silly and unfulfilling, you are nicely building the tension. Love how Dana is getting more confident in the relationship, albeit fuelled by the shots. I think they should skip 3rd base and go straight for the home run! Impatient? just a little. Oh and Shane as the Fonz – LOL. Looking forward to the next instalment….
All I can say is- I Love Dana!! She is so sexy when she’s…Oh she’s sexy all the time!!
The end was very hot and sexy. I liked how Dana told that chick off. I so thought that Alice was going to snap or something, but didn’t. I can’t wait for more. PPS
Fripster,I was about to shut down my pc but I did one last check, there it was, your latest post. What are you talking about? Boring? No way, this is another fun filled chapter. Thank you very much. “Shane’s eyes widened at the daring display from the normally conservative Dana” My view precisely. Dana is really getting bold. I like it. I swear A & D seemed to be able to communicate telepathically. Both commented on Shane as “Fonzie” just like on the show about “Ariana Huffington is 50.” They were definitely meant to be together, period. It is great to see the three of them hanging out and looking out for each other too. “It’s not acid, is it”, what a geek? Bodyguard, is she forever so dorky. And finally, I love your “nice surprise” mini cliffhanger. Can’t wait to read more. Again I can’t believe a very bold Dana. It’s good! This is another successful post and the story just keeps getting better. Thank you for this night cap!!!
wow you post so quickly i like it, i like it alot!! loving the story:)
Sure did like the ending, that was hot and Dana was still alert, after all that alcohol,LOL. Great chapter
Another good one, fripster! I did have flashbacks to some of my college parties — that punch is a killer. Thanks again for the frequent posts and great storyline. I look forward to what’s next — even if it does get angsty. Thanks!