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    Lost In The Darkness

    I looked through all the cd’s and tapes she had. It’s like she’d never left. I couldn’t believe all the things that were here. I smiled to myself as I saw the Backstreet Boys posters hanging on the walls. She loved them so much, but I was more edgier, I was into more rock then pop. She danced around to BSB and Britney Spears while I rocked out to Bush and Garbage.

    ”You remember that show?”

    ”How could I forget,” I replied and smiled.

    ”You hated pop music so much, but humored me and went to the Backstreet Boys concert. But you ended up having a great time.”

    ”That I did, oh Angel, I miss you so much.”

    ”I miss you too, but I’ve been watching and I am so glad that you’re finally happy.”

    ”I am, we were about to find out whether or not I was pregnant,” I said rubbing my stomach, when the room went black again. I looked around and heard voices, I shouted out to Bette but no one could hear me.

    I walked around trying to find the voices. If I find the voices, I find my way out, right? I shouted again, and got no answer. I was hoping Bette would hear me and pull me out of the abyss. Soon the voices were clear, so clear it brought tears to my eyes.

    ”Momma B, why is she sleeping so much,” I heard my boy sob, ”why won’t she wake up?”

    ”She’s trying to get better, so she has to sleep a lot buddy.”

    ”Will she wake up momma?”

    ”I don’t know babe, she’s sleeping real good.”

    ”I’m scared B.”

    ”I know baby, me too,” I heard, and Jackson started crying.

    Oh my God, my baby. I can hear him crying, and I shout for him. I continue shouting but, he doesn’t respond. I can hear his crying fading off and I fall to my knees crying. How do I get out of here? I opened my eyes and I was in Angelica’s room again and she was sitting on the bed.

    ”Ang, how do I get out? I want to go home.”

    ”I know you do sis, but you have to figure out what you need to let go of in order to get out.”

    Comments

    1. Wow OliviaKelly,

      You did a amazing job to upload the chapters so fast. And you posted a new chapter. Truly amazing!

      At first i thought it was Bette who was in a coma, but you had Tina living between dead and life.

      I am very happy that you let her wake in this chapter, many writers would have tortured us by letting her waking up after a couple of more chapters ????

      I am so happy you are back and I hope you will update 50 Shades of Bette Porter soon.

      Thanks again for coming back!

      • Thank you gorgeous!! I will absolutely update 50 Shades. I’ll do what I did here and put them all in one book and update with a new chapter.

        I appreciate your kind words. <3

        ~OK

    2. OK,
      I so enjoyed this story first time round but loved how you posted these together, so quickly and added a Chapter. Thanks really great and look forward to you doing it with another of your stories.
      Also glad to see 50 Shades may be updated.
      Nice to have you back and look forward to more of your entertaining writing.
      SG

    3. I have enjoyed this story, don’t think I read it in the past. Hope that their accident was truly an accident and not caused by nadia or eric. nadia is one crazy fool and I fear for them while she is out of jail because I don’t think she will go away, quietly or otherwise. You have done a great job writing this one. Now i will go back and find your other stories to read. Patiently waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for posting the story.

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