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Luau (Chapter 1)
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“Are you ever sorry that we didn’t have a proper wedding in front of all of our friends?” Dana tried to sound casual as she and Alice sat with their juice and coffee on the patio, watching Dave and Angelica play with abandon.
For a moment Alice didn’t believe she’d heard the question. She thought nothing in the world could make her feel more married and assumed Dana felt the same. She turned to meet Dana’s eyes and realized Dana’s question had nothing to do with that, so she moved as close as she could before answering.
Absolutely not Dane,” her voice was gentle, but firm. “Even as a kid I never dreamed of a big wedding. My ideal wedding was always pretty much what we did.”
“Really?” Dana arched her brow, a crooked smile briefly crossing her lips. “I think this may be the one thing in the universe that we’ve never talked about.”
“Well, then, you go first.”
“I can honestly say I never gave it much thought. I mean my Mom used to talk about it once in a while, but I always knew that it wasn’t going to happen that way.” Dana smiled slyly. “The white dress? Maybe. The man? Never.” She leaned in and kissed Alice tenderly. “What about you?”
“I always wanted it to be just to two of us, maybe on a beach somewhere. And afterwards, we’d throw a party for our friends that would end up being our reception once we told them.” Alice kissed Dana this time. “And that’s practically what we did, without you even knowing. How perfect is that?”
Dana’s heart nearly exploded with the overwhelming love she felt for this woman. Her wife. Her raison d’etre. She pulled Alice into a bear hug as she fought the urge to cry her happiness.
“I love you too baby,” Alice murmured. “More than I can ever say.”
“Do you two mind?” Shane plopped herself at the table. “Some of us are trying to recover.”
Dana giggled, unable to find sympathy for Shane’s surliness. The moment had been too perfect. Not even Shane’s hangover could ruin it.
“And good fucking morning to you too, sunshine,” Alice said.
Dana was suddenly struck with an idea she knew she had to make into reality. She fumbled some lame excuse and made a beeline for her office.
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SO SO Happy!!! I love where you are taking this…and I see that the DANISH bond is even stronger (if even possible)…Love’d every word!!! Welcome Back! PPS
Ok, you have totally made my week. i was out of town all weekend and i come back to this, needless to say i did a little happy dance in my chair :) I am a big fan of yours and never had a chance to post on your other stories because i found them too late, sad i know!! but i will be posting now. Love the way you write danish, keep it up! and thanks for coming back to us. :)
Wow – welcome back, missed you lots, great to be reading your fic again. Don’t leave it too long to update as this is great.
Yeah we are so happy you’re back !! PPS
Great chapter! Really looking forward to Shane’s breakfast heart to heart with Dana and Alice. PPS!
woohoo!!!! great chapter! i missed you :)
Phew, you’re back! Good, now maybe your fans will ease up on me a little bit. I definitely can’t fill your shoes writing wise (or any other way). I love this as I do everything you write, it’s a great beginning to what I’m sure will be yet another great story.
What a great suprise! I’m thrilled to see you writing again. And I’m glad I could catch the first chapter today, since I’m leaving tomorrow for holiday. Darn, now I gotta wait for weeks to read more from you! Oh well, it will be worth the wait! Great Start!Read & see you in a few weeks!
MAMA B!!!!!!! This was great! And you thought I wouldn’t comment…Also I asked you about the Sheth (Shane/Beth) and you misled me. I’m so shocked that you would do that to me lol Seriously great chapter can’t wait to see what happens in Maui! Also post soon don’t use me as an example for anything you do. :)
Ah, I was so excited to see your name next to a new update that I had to do a double take! I’m so glad you’re back with this story. It’s up there as one of my all-time favorites. This chapter is of course no exception. Can’t wait for more!
You have been missed, SG. I loved this and I’m looking forward to your next post. Cheers!
YAY!!!!!!! You’re back! I was just re-reading Lucky in Love over the weekend and wishing that you would write something new. You are an amazing writer and story-teller. Thanks for this and all your previous writings. PPS!
SAAAMMMMMYYY!!! YAAAAAY!!! …ok. Done shouting now. lol. Ok so…I heard from a little, ClozzyD shaped birdie, that you were cooking something up…and then I see the post…and I think I jumped around like a monkey on crack for a good 3 minutes…and then I felt silly…but still excited :-D haha. Anyways, I haven’t been around these parts for awhile but I am glad I tuned back in! This was amazing as always, your writing abilities are outstanding as always!I loved this chapter and cannot WAIT for the next!!! Don’t keep us hanging!!! And by us I mostly mean me…but I’m sure everyone else is eager for Chap. 2 as well. hehe. Later chica!
Awesome start sammy,loved it and cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!