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Luau (Chapter 1)
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“Go where?” Alice pulled her hair back and lifted her chin, elongating her beautiful neck for Dana’s pleasure.
“Maui.” Alice could barely hear Dana’s muffled response. “You’re coming with me. I made the arrangements this morning.”
“Wait a minute, Dane, it’s an incredibly romantic gesture, but you’re going for work and I have so much to do here.”
“I’ll give the speech and make the appearances while you’ll finish the book, then we’ll have a week or so just for us.” Dana lifted her head and took Alice’s face gently into her hands. “Everything else can wait for a little while. This’ll be the honeymoon we never got to take.”
Alice pulled Dana into a searing kiss that left them both reeling with passion and the lack of oxygen. She began to unbutton her blouse when Dana stopped her.
“Not now, I want us to make love tonight…really take our time.” Dana offered a shy smile.
“But it’s been so long,” Alice protested weakly. She knew what Dana meant. They’d been so wrapped up in work, moving and the wedding that exhaustion had won out over passion for nearly three weeks. And for weeks before that they’d only enjoyed occasional, albeit intense, encounters, whenever they could both steal a moment and summon the energy. “We have time now…”
“First supper, then the lovin’,” Dana said. “I promise it’ll be worth the wait.” Her grin lit a fire in Alice’s heart. “Come with me.” Dana led Alice to their master bathroom, where she’d drawn a bath, poured a chilled glass of Pinot Grigio and neatly stacked some of Alice’s magazines on the bath tray. “I want you to relax while I see to dinner.”
“Ah, so you’ve got a whole seduction thing working.” Alice teased, even as she shucked off her clothes.
“Damn right,” Dana laughed, handing Alice the remote for the stereo. “So go with it, will you?”
“Absofuckinglutely Dane.” Al sank into the lilac scented water as Dana suppressed the impulse to jump in with her, fully clothed.
“We need to talk.” Beth literally heard Shane cringe on the other end of the line. “Seriously, Shane, I’m not mad.”
“Then what are you?”
“Confused. And I think you are too, so let’s just figure this out.” Beth held her breath while Shane thought.
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SO SO Happy!!! I love where you are taking this…and I see that the DANISH bond is even stronger (if even possible)…Love’d every word!!! Welcome Back! PPS
Ok, you have totally made my week. i was out of town all weekend and i come back to this, needless to say i did a little happy dance in my chair :) I am a big fan of yours and never had a chance to post on your other stories because i found them too late, sad i know!! but i will be posting now. Love the way you write danish, keep it up! and thanks for coming back to us. :)
Wow – welcome back, missed you lots, great to be reading your fic again. Don’t leave it too long to update as this is great.
Yeah we are so happy you’re back !! PPS
Great chapter! Really looking forward to Shane’s breakfast heart to heart with Dana and Alice. PPS!
woohoo!!!! great chapter! i missed you :)
Phew, you’re back! Good, now maybe your fans will ease up on me a little bit. I definitely can’t fill your shoes writing wise (or any other way). I love this as I do everything you write, it’s a great beginning to what I’m sure will be yet another great story.
What a great suprise! I’m thrilled to see you writing again. And I’m glad I could catch the first chapter today, since I’m leaving tomorrow for holiday. Darn, now I gotta wait for weeks to read more from you! Oh well, it will be worth the wait! Great Start!Read & see you in a few weeks!
MAMA B!!!!!!! This was great! And you thought I wouldn’t comment…Also I asked you about the Sheth (Shane/Beth) and you misled me. I’m so shocked that you would do that to me lol Seriously great chapter can’t wait to see what happens in Maui! Also post soon don’t use me as an example for anything you do. :)
Ah, I was so excited to see your name next to a new update that I had to do a double take! I’m so glad you’re back with this story. It’s up there as one of my all-time favorites. This chapter is of course no exception. Can’t wait for more!
You have been missed, SG. I loved this and I’m looking forward to your next post. Cheers!
YAY!!!!!!! You’re back! I was just re-reading Lucky in Love over the weekend and wishing that you would write something new. You are an amazing writer and story-teller. Thanks for this and all your previous writings. PPS!
SAAAMMMMMYYY!!! YAAAAAY!!! …ok. Done shouting now. lol. Ok so…I heard from a little, ClozzyD shaped birdie, that you were cooking something up…and then I see the post…and I think I jumped around like a monkey on crack for a good 3 minutes…and then I felt silly…but still excited :-D haha. Anyways, I haven’t been around these parts for awhile but I am glad I tuned back in! This was amazing as always, your writing abilities are outstanding as always!I loved this chapter and cannot WAIT for the next!!! Don’t keep us hanging!!! And by us I mostly mean me…but I’m sure everyone else is eager for Chap. 2 as well. hehe. Later chica!
Awesome start sammy,loved it and cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!