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Luau (Chapter 1)
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“Wow, you can clear a room, can’t you?” Alice cajoled with a sweet smile. Shane was having none of it. “Okay, obviously something has happened and you’re dying to talk about it.”
“Quit being such a fucking lesbian, will you?” Shane pushed her sunglasses higher on her nose and sank deeper into her chair.
“Crimeney.” Alice muttered, pouring a cup of coffee and pushing it across the table. “Then you stop being such a drama queen.”
“Fuck off.” Shane was on her feet and to her jeep before Alice could blink. “What the fuck is wrong with me?” Shane pounded the steering wheel before screeching away.
Alice answered her phone on auto-pilot, thinking Shane had snapped back to reality. Instead, she was sucked into an intense conversation with her editor. Though Alice was actually ahead of her deadline, her editor was less than pleased with the pages she’d read in the past couple of weeks. Al knew this was constructive and accurate criticism, but it stung anyway. She’d been keeping so many plates spinning in the past few months that one of them was bound to slip and it killed her that it was this one. Her day went from great to sucky in record speed. Not even Dave’s antics with Angelica lightened her mood, so she actually appreciated that Bette and Tina were running late when they came to collect their daughter and headed off on their honeymoon.
“You know Shane misses you, don’t you?” Dana ventured cautiously into the minefield as the late afternoon gave way to evening.
“I know,” came the wistful answer. “I’ve been pretty tied up, but that’s not an excuse. She’s been going through a lot with Carmen being gone.”
“We’ve been living our lives,” Dana said. “It’s been a really busy time and it’s not like we turned our backs on her. She has to take some responsibility here too.”
Alice nodded her agreement, but being right didn’t make her feel any better. She knew, deep in her bones, that Shane was in trouble and she hadn’t a clue how she could help.
“Baby, don’t worry so much,” Dana stepped closer and wrapped her arms around Al’s waist. “She and Beth have gotten very close. And we’ll figure something out before we go.” Dana pressed her lips into Alice’s pulse point, unable to contain herself any longer.
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SO SO Happy!!! I love where you are taking this…and I see that the DANISH bond is even stronger (if even possible)…Love’d every word!!! Welcome Back! PPS
Ok, you have totally made my week. i was out of town all weekend and i come back to this, needless to say i did a little happy dance in my chair :) I am a big fan of yours and never had a chance to post on your other stories because i found them too late, sad i know!! but i will be posting now. Love the way you write danish, keep it up! and thanks for coming back to us. :)
Wow – welcome back, missed you lots, great to be reading your fic again. Don’t leave it too long to update as this is great.
Yeah we are so happy you’re back !! PPS
Great chapter! Really looking forward to Shane’s breakfast heart to heart with Dana and Alice. PPS!
woohoo!!!! great chapter! i missed you :)
Phew, you’re back! Good, now maybe your fans will ease up on me a little bit. I definitely can’t fill your shoes writing wise (or any other way). I love this as I do everything you write, it’s a great beginning to what I’m sure will be yet another great story.
What a great suprise! I’m thrilled to see you writing again. And I’m glad I could catch the first chapter today, since I’m leaving tomorrow for holiday. Darn, now I gotta wait for weeks to read more from you! Oh well, it will be worth the wait! Great Start!Read & see you in a few weeks!
MAMA B!!!!!!! This was great! And you thought I wouldn’t comment…Also I asked you about the Sheth (Shane/Beth) and you misled me. I’m so shocked that you would do that to me lol Seriously great chapter can’t wait to see what happens in Maui! Also post soon don’t use me as an example for anything you do. :)
Ah, I was so excited to see your name next to a new update that I had to do a double take! I’m so glad you’re back with this story. It’s up there as one of my all-time favorites. This chapter is of course no exception. Can’t wait for more!
You have been missed, SG. I loved this and I’m looking forward to your next post. Cheers!
YAY!!!!!!! You’re back! I was just re-reading Lucky in Love over the weekend and wishing that you would write something new. You are an amazing writer and story-teller. Thanks for this and all your previous writings. PPS!
SAAAMMMMMYYY!!! YAAAAAY!!! …ok. Done shouting now. lol. Ok so…I heard from a little, ClozzyD shaped birdie, that you were cooking something up…and then I see the post…and I think I jumped around like a monkey on crack for a good 3 minutes…and then I felt silly…but still excited :-D haha. Anyways, I haven’t been around these parts for awhile but I am glad I tuned back in! This was amazing as always, your writing abilities are outstanding as always!I loved this chapter and cannot WAIT for the next!!! Don’t keep us hanging!!! And by us I mostly mean me…but I’m sure everyone else is eager for Chap. 2 as well. hehe. Later chica!
Awesome start sammy,loved it and cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!