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Luau (Chapter 2)
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“Ummm…life’s messy?” Alice smiled sweetly.
“That’s what Dr. Lynch says.” Shane was beyond chagrined.
“But it’s, oh, so worth it,” Dana tousled Shane’s hair and sat on her other side. “Soooo, seriously, what can we do to help?”
“You got any spare mileage?” Shane’s misery was clear. “I need to go to New York for a couple of days.”
The ride from the airport to the hotel seemed to take forever, especially when one considered that the island of Maui is, indeed, a finite space. After sleeping through the entire flight, a talent Alice envied beyond words, Dana was in a frisky mood. Alice, who’d spent her time wrapping up a bunch of loose ends so that she could spend the next week concentrating on finishing her book, amused herself by playfully insisting that Dana behave, slapping back straying hands and ducking attempted kisses. They were positively giddy with laughter by the time the car deposited them at the grand entrance, where they were greeted by a gent who identified himself as their personal butler and proceeded to escort them to a beautifully appointed anteroom where their check-in was expedited.
Moments later they were driven to the secluded bungalow, replete with a private beach, that was to be their home away from home for the next two weeks. The upgrade from suite to cottage was but the first surprise Dana was planning. Joseph quickly explained that he and his staff would need to meet with them briefly at eleven tomorrow, that he’d take the liberty of having a light refreshment ready for them, and that dinner would be prepared and served at 7:00, according to Miss Dana’s instructions. Their bags had been unpacked while they were checking in and he, or a member of his staff, was available to them at any hour of the day or night. With that he departed, leaving Alice and Dana alone, quite literally, in paradise.
“This is…unfuckingbelievable,” Alice said as she threw open the doors that led to their beach.
“You like it baby?” Dana grinned her widest grin. She’d been imagining this moment for the better part of two weeks. “I nearly told you so many times.”
Alice ran across the room and literally jumped onto Dana, wrapping her legs tightly around her waist.
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Thank you so much for the new story! I loved Lucky and am loving this one, too. You do a great job writing Danish romance. PPS!
I like you’re proposal I wish mine could be like that (and also the sex but that’s just between me and the brackets) I can’t wait to see about the dolphin swim and I can’t wait to see the ceremony basically I can’t wait so post now (on another note I’m not one to beg for more sex in an already NC-17 story and I do realize that your sex scene is quite long and that this isnt a PWP but can I get a twofer?) Love ya mama b post soon (or give me a snip…actually minus the or GIVE ME A SNIP!!!) :please:
Yay! you’re back – you know how I feel about your writing and how it’s uber exquisite and fanfracking wonderful – fan fic land is so much fuller with you in it – I’ll step away from the fan girl box now – oh yeah – loving the new story :)
WOW!! just wow you are amazing i loved every inch of that post so sweet.. so talented man :)
Awww, what a beautiful proposal! The way you write these two is just incredible. I’m also liking the idea of Shane and Beth. I’ve sort of stopped liking Carmen since she was such a bitch in Season 3, and honestly I think Beth would be better for her. Either way, though, this is great, even if it’s only a “dip your toe back in” kinda story.
Is it me or are these scenes getting steamier and steamier??? What can I say I love, love, love this!!! Very loving, Very romantic…I love the way you write these two!!! PPS!
This is my first comment because English is not my first language so I’m kind of shy writing this…but I guess you deserve it ;). Your stories are great and this one is a perfect example. I really enjoy the way you write Danish (and Dave hihihi!!!)…so please post soon!!!
That was sooooo beauitful and veryyyy romantic WOW!!!! Your such a awesome writer and please continue!!!!!!!!
*sigh* Thank you. I’mnot sure what else I can say. I’ve said it all about 200 times. But yeah…this was fucking amazing! And when it comes to NC-17…Jesus Fucking Christ…yeah…Thanks! (as for the crack monkey thing…lmao. Yeah…I have no idea where that came from…haha.) POST SOON SAMMY!