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    Luau (Chapter 3)

    Story written on October 20, 2007 by SammysGirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=67251
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    Dana and Alice, the honeymoon. In paradise. Need I say more?

    Alice righted herself and emerged from the sparkling sea, one unknowingly sultry step at a time. She moved quickly to the outdoor shower to rinse the salt from her hair, tipping her head back and enjoying the stream of cool water. She opened her eyes to see Dana watching her, a goddess wrapped loosely in a sheet, her left breast fully exposed, hair blowing in the breeze. Alice’s heart skipped a beat. Dana’s smile grew larger as their eyes met. Their desire for one another was not diminishing with time and familiarity. It was, in fact, growing with each passing hour. And, in his very moment, it was overtaking them.

    Alice didn’t remember picking up her robe or running back into the bungalow. Dana had no memory of scampering through the cottage to meet Al just inside the doors to the lanai. They kissed urgently, their bodies pressed hard into one another. Alice tried to walk Dana back into the bedroom without breaking the kiss. Unfortunately she stumbled over the edge of the sisal rug and ended up on her hands and knees.

    “Shit!” She was embarrassed, not hurt.

    “Graceful,” Dana teased, unable to suppress a laugh. She extended her hand to help Alice up.

    “I know, right?”

    Dana’s amusement was infectious.  She pulled Alice right into her arms, and they kissed between giggles. This time, Alice led Dana into the bedroom and sat her on the edge of the bed. Dropping to her knees, on purpose this time, Alice tilted her head up and pulled Dana’s face to hers. She traced Dana’s lips with her tongue before turning her attention to Dana’s lower lip. Gentle nips grew more fervent, yet Alice remained in total control, occasionally dipping her tongue into Dana’s mouth, now slack with longing. Al slowly traced her fingers across Dana’s jaw line, reveling in the in the velvet softness of her skin.

    A warm breeze wafted through the room, carrying the sound of the surf with it, caressing them with the sweet scent of the island.  Alice made her way along Dana’s shoulders before dropping one hand to the top of her breast, while the other went to work on the outside of Dana’s perfectly defined thigh. She nuzzled Dana’s pulse point, and smiled when she felt just how fast Dana’s heart was pounding.

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    2. I’ve got to say mama this flows so well, I got snippets but together it just melts so perfectly together. I really can’t believe you were even the least bit worried. One bit of criticism I do have is this…um yeah more sex, I know this was mostly sex but I need more. It was so hot and steamy and I just wanted like 7 to 9 more pages of it, but its ok save it for next time. This was mostly perfect just add in those 7 to 9 pages (I’m thinkin 9 more than 7) and you’ve got a flawless chapter. Maybe a little bob action? You know…you know what I mean a little Bob lab? No? But yeah everything is great and I love the piece at the end very sweet memorable ending. Well there you go I read it even more amazing the 4th time (which is how many times I’ve read it)

    5. I agree with CD,you did a wonderful job writing this chapter. I just love reading ur stories and this chapter was HOT HOT HOT damn it. Please post sooner (i know its been crazy) but i want more.PPS

    6. SammysGirl, I am delighted to be able to write you this comment cause I did not have the opportunity to do so before. I have enjoyed all your Danish stories especially “Life Choice”. “Loose Ends” was heartbreaking. I salute you and all the other dedicated elite Danish writers for keeping this pairing alive. Thank you again.

    8. Hmm, now there’s a honeymoon I wouldn’t mind having! I love that you can write them being so intimate and trusting with each other. And don’t worry about posting infrequently, you know you have a lot of fans who will be happy to read whatever you put up, no matter how much time passes between chapters.

    9. Yay!! I JUST re-read this story the other day in the hope you’d update sometime soon and what an update! Great that you’ve got some storylines in the pipeline too. Looking forward to them as always! Welcome Back :)

    11. I don’t think there are words to adequately describe how excited I was to see your post this morning. I love your writing and loved “Lucky” and am loving “Luau”. News of a sequal to “Lucky” have put a huge grin on my face. This was a great chapter! So much love so much trust and so much humor. Thank you for your continued posting!!

    12. Good to see you back! Your update was magnificient as always. :D I always get drawn into your stories. Whenever I’m reading it, it’s like there is a whole parallel universe where Danish lives forever happily. I love that. Keep it up.

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