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    Luau (Chapter 3)

    Story written on October 20, 2007 by SammysGirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=67251
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    Dana and Alice, the honeymoon. In paradise. Need I say more?

    “Do you think we can claim squatter’s rights or something?” Al’s playfulness was contagious. “Seriously, I think we should stay right here forever.”

    “Hey, I’m game,” Dana moved further up the bed and Alice followed, “but I think the people who have reservations for tomorrow night will be totally pissed.”

    “Not our problem,” Al shook her head with conviction. “This place is a part of us now.”

    “You’re right,” Dana rolled onto her side and began running her fingertips lightly across every available millimeter of Alice, “but you wouldn’t want to miss out on the little surprise we have planned would you? How about if we come back for our anniversary?”

    She was rewarded with a dazzling smile. Alice opened her legs, an invitation for Dana to continue her intimate explorations.

    “I love you Dane,” she whispered as Dana moved into place and took a moment to scan Alice’s luscious body from head to toe and back again with abject admiration.

    It was a familiar gesture, one that would have embarrassed Alice had anyone else done it, one that would have made her conscious of every flaw, every imperfection. Yet she knew that Dana didn’t see them, let alone care about them. Alice was liberated, bathed in the deep security of Dana’s loving adoration. She laughed softly and was rewarded with the trademark grin that lit up her heart.

    “I love you.”

    Dana lowered herself and began a slow tease of Alice’s already hard nipples, alternating warm licks and nips with cool breaths, marking her territory with goose bumps. Alice’s breaths came faster as Dana neared the spot between her bellybutton and the top of her mound, where she paused briefly to scoot back. The scent of Al’s arousal was as clear as her own and Dana nearly lost control. Instead she began to attend to Alice’s needs, mimicking the same pattern she’d used moments before. She entered Al with two fingers and pressed her tongue firmly into Alice’s pulsating clit, pushing her into cumming before crossing her fingers and working Alice’s distended g-spot with her knuckle, Alice’s hips rose high off the bed as another surge flooded through her. Dana quickly added a third finger and slowed the pace, unfolding her frame along Al, who wrapped her arms around Dana’s shoulders and fought to open her eyes. She tried to speak but couldn’t quite form the word.

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    2. I’ve got to say mama this flows so well, I got snippets but together it just melts so perfectly together. I really can’t believe you were even the least bit worried. One bit of criticism I do have is this…um yeah more sex, I know this was mostly sex but I need more. It was so hot and steamy and I just wanted like 7 to 9 more pages of it, but its ok save it for next time. This was mostly perfect just add in those 7 to 9 pages (I’m thinkin 9 more than 7) and you’ve got a flawless chapter. Maybe a little bob action? You know…you know what I mean a little Bob lab? No? But yeah everything is great and I love the piece at the end very sweet memorable ending. Well there you go I read it even more amazing the 4th time (which is how many times I’ve read it)

    5. I agree with CD,you did a wonderful job writing this chapter. I just love reading ur stories and this chapter was HOT HOT HOT damn it. Please post sooner (i know its been crazy) but i want more.PPS

    6. SammysGirl, I am delighted to be able to write you this comment cause I did not have the opportunity to do so before. I have enjoyed all your Danish stories especially “Life Choice”. “Loose Ends” was heartbreaking. I salute you and all the other dedicated elite Danish writers for keeping this pairing alive. Thank you again.

    8. Hmm, now there’s a honeymoon I wouldn’t mind having! I love that you can write them being so intimate and trusting with each other. And don’t worry about posting infrequently, you know you have a lot of fans who will be happy to read whatever you put up, no matter how much time passes between chapters.

    9. Yay!! I JUST re-read this story the other day in the hope you’d update sometime soon and what an update! Great that you’ve got some storylines in the pipeline too. Looking forward to them as always! Welcome Back :)

    11. I don’t think there are words to adequately describe how excited I was to see your post this morning. I love your writing and loved “Lucky” and am loving “Luau”. News of a sequal to “Lucky” have put a huge grin on my face. This was a great chapter! So much love so much trust and so much humor. Thank you for your continued posting!!

    12. Good to see you back! Your update was magnificient as always. :D I always get drawn into your stories. Whenever I’m reading it, it’s like there is a whole parallel universe where Danish lives forever happily. I love that. Keep it up.

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