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Luau (Chapter 3)
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“I think you’re getting ahead of yourself,” Al muttered as Dana’s hands found their way into her hair, trying to push Alice’s head toward her molten core. “Not yet,” she laughed, her mouth full of hardened nipple.
Dana moaned in protest, her hands finding the special spot on the back of Alice’s neck, trying to entice her to quicken her pace. Tempted as she was, Al managed to keep to her plan, toying with the other nipple before meandering south, leaving a moist trail of butterfly kisses in her wake. Dana’s hips involuntarily moved toward Alice as she drew closer to her destination. Alice loved this, the very moment when Dane’s arousal superceded everything else. She made curlicues along the tender creases where Dana’s outer lips merged with her inner thigh, pressing her fingers into the back of Dana’s knee, knowing full well what this particular combination did to her.
“Baby!” Dana cried, her voice husky, as she fell backwards, surrendering completely to Alice’s ministrations.
Alice plunged her tongue fully into Dana’s wet tunnel, working to capture every drop of her essence. She drew concentric circles around her rigid clit, backing off several times before giving it any attention. When she did, Dana had her first, comparatively gentle, release, her body frozen as the wave passed through her. Alice quickly reversed herself, entering Dana with two fingers and teasing her swollen g-spot while she lapped and nibbled Dana’s hardness. Dana orgasmed again, almost immediately, this one noticeably more intense than the first. Alice felt her g-spot grow again and eased a third finger into Dana as she pulled herself up and suckled Dane’s nipples. Dana met her thrust for thrust, taking charge of their pace. Al lifted her head and studied Dana’s face as she went over the edge, wedging Alice inside of her. Al had expected this and was able to continue stroking Dana’s spot, sustaining her pleasure until Dana thought she could take no more. Sensing this, Al pressed hard into the engorged soft folds and Dana exploded, her juices covering them both, soaking the edge of the bed.
Alice collapsed beside Dana, holding her tightly as she calmed, little after shocks occasionally rippling through her satisfied body. Dana almost always fell asleep after cumming like that, but this time, she felt her energy begin to rebuild. This was a different desire, one that was all about the beautiful blonde whom she knew loved her beyond reason.
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that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next so please post soon great update I love this story
I’ve got to say mama this flows so well, I got snippets but together it just melts so perfectly together. I really can’t believe you were even the least bit worried. One bit of criticism I do have is this…um yeah more sex, I know this was mostly sex but I need more. It was so hot and steamy and I just wanted like 7 to 9 more pages of it, but its ok save it for next time. This was mostly perfect just add in those 7 to 9 pages (I’m thinkin 9 more than 7) and you’ve got a flawless chapter. Maybe a little bob action? You know…you know what I mean a little Bob lab? No? But yeah everything is great and I love the piece at the end very sweet memorable ending. Well there you go I read it even more amazing the 4th time (which is how many times I’ve read it)
YAY! You are back! Great Post! Look fwd to the last chapter as well as anything else you are writing!!! Thank You!
Wow oh wow – another of my favourite authors is back again – yippee !!
I agree with CD,you did a wonderful job writing this chapter. I just love reading ur stories and this chapter was HOT HOT HOT damn it. Please post sooner (i know its been crazy) but i want more.PPS
SammysGirl, I am delighted to be able to write you this comment cause I did not have the opportunity to do so before. I have enjoyed all your Danish stories especially “Life Choice”. “Loose Ends” was heartbreaking. I salute you and all the other dedicated elite Danish writers for keeping this pairing alive. Thank you again.
thank you for updating. I’m bad at leaving commets hehe but this chapter is truly awesome! you rock! I absolutely love it so PPS:D
Hmm, now there’s a honeymoon I wouldn’t mind having! I love that you can write them being so intimate and trusting with each other. And don’t worry about posting infrequently, you know you have a lot of fans who will be happy to read whatever you put up, no matter how much time passes between chapters.
Yay!! I JUST re-read this story the other day in the hope you’d update sometime soon and what an update! Great that you’ve got some storylines in the pipeline too. Looking forward to them as always! Welcome Back :)
hiya!Good seeing you back, very excited about this. Really missed your stories. Lovely update, what can I say more!? :)
I don’t think there are words to adequately describe how excited I was to see your post this morning. I love your writing and loved “Lucky” and am loving “Luau”. News of a sequal to “Lucky” have put a huge grin on my face. This was a great chapter! So much love so much trust and so much humor. Thank you for your continued posting!!
Good to see you back! Your update was magnificient as always. :D I always get drawn into your stories. Whenever I’m reading it, it’s like there is a whole parallel universe where Danish lives forever happily. I love that. Keep it up.