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Luau (Chapter 4) -FINALE-
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“I was able to wrap things up and take a flight today,” Al responded kindly. “There’s a lot to do to get ready for tomorrow night so I thought I’d get a jump on things and then you and I would maybe hang tonight. I was going to call as soon as I got settled and checked the mail.”
“Oh,” came the glum reply. It was a perfectly reasonable plan, but Shane still felt like a 14 year old caught playing hooky in the neighbor’s house. “I’ll get out of your way…”
“Hey,” Alice said quickly, “I’m not asking you to leave. Give me an hour or so to take care of some things, and then we’ll wallow together.”
“Wallow in what, Alice?”
“Beth Kenyon.” Al grabbed the remote and hit a button. A nanosecond later Beth appeared on the screen, frozen in perfect movie-star expression, where Shane had paused the movie before passing out. The frame was nothing short of a classical master’s portrait on a digital canvas.
Helena was having trouble concentrating. She and Tina were prepping their investors’ presentation, but all she could think about was Lara. Winnie appeared to be sticking to her end of the bargain and Gail Guthrie was still defanged if not declawed, so the only part of that mess looming in the foreseeable future had to do with Dana and Alice’s lawsuits against the tabloids. She noticed the date on the calendar and realized that it had taken her three months to let down her guard even a little. And still Lara had been there through the whole ugly mess. On some level Helena felt completely unworthy while the rest of her wondered how she ever got so lucky.
“I think we should wrap it up for the day,” Tina said. She’d noticed that she’d lost Helena a few minutes back, but it was good to see her lost in happy thoughts. “We’re ready.”
“God, Tina, I’m sorry,” Helena snapped back to the present.
“It’s fine. We really are ready.” Tina smiled broadly. “You know that.”
“We are, aren’t we?” Helena had known from the beginning that Tina was the right choice for a business partner creatively, but was still delighted that Tina had blossomed on the finance side as well. Together, they were a formidable force in a town that didn’t give up power easily.
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Great ending to a lovely story. Can’t wait for your next chapter in the lives of our Danish pair.
A fantastic finale. Thank you for your beautiful post. I absolutely adore Danish and thanks to writers like you who never seize to amaze me your creativity and writing styles. As long as you write, I will comment. Yes, I read almost all the Danish fanfics within 4 months started in late March. I am so very grateful to you all undying dedicated Danish writers. Thanks again SammysGirl from the bottom of my heart. I too am looking forward to your next creation.
this was just the perfect ending…and the writing of it was amazing. i hope this isn’t the last of your danish writing.
hello my friend! Just read through your latest….and loved it! it’s been awhile…hope all is going great for you! as you might suspect, I was a sucker for Helena’s sweetness on Lara!
That was AWESOME ending!!! I cracked up at AL and Dane catching Bette and Tina in the bathroom (flippin funny). Loved the wedding,great writing!!!!! I cant wait untill the next story,PPVS P.S You are amazing at writing Sammy!!! Thank you too. :)~
…to a long and happy life together.” You too ;-) Very sweet.
Great story. I love it. I wish they actually had a long happy life together.
oh man fantastic!!!!! i loved it all so beautiful i don’t want it to end:( did i read somewhere that lucky in love will be back soon oh i hope so so very much if not you have done so well i’ve enjoyed everything you’ve written!!! :)
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks a million for his wonderful story! I’ve enjoyed reading where it went from chapter to chapter. Kissing before they were pronounced married made me laugh :) This is great! thanks again. You’re awesome! I hope this will not be the end of your Danish stories.
hiya,sorry, I think I forgot to comment on your last update on this! So I’m doing it together with this one. Wonderful story and wonderful ending! Amazingly good captured and sweet.Can’t wait for your next ones.
YAY!!! I Love THEM!!!! I Love Dave Too!!Great Story!!! Looking fwd to your next story! Keep Up The Great Work!!!
Woo Hoo! I was beyond excited to see your post. I love your writing and your stories. I am really looking forward to the sequel. You write all the characters so well and really amazing Danish. Loved Alice and Dana catching Bette and Tina — it usually seems to be the other way around. And the vows were beautiful. Great. Great. Great. Thank you so much for the story!