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Luau (Chapter 4) -FINALE-
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“Dana!” Alice ran to meet her, throwing her arms around her and kissing her hard. “I missed you so much.” Another kiss, this one more urgent.
“Baby, I missed you too,” Dana’s hands roamed freely under Alice’s loose blouse before she remembered that the house was full of people.
“Everyone but the caterers will be gone in a couple of hours,” whispered Alice, causing a shiver to run through Dana. “We’ll have time.”
"We will?" Dana was skeptical. "Promise?"
“Yeah,” Al’s voice was ragged with longing. “In the meantime, I have something to show you.”
“Yeah?” Dana arched a brow and grinned hopefully.
“Come on silly.” Al led Dana to a curtained off area at the back of the patio where the bakers were putting the finishing touches on assembling their wedding cake. “Ta-da!”
True to her word, Alice saw to it that the crowd had thinned considerably by four. The tables were beautifully set on Hawaiian print table cloths, the votive candles, set in coconut shells and hollow pineapples were ready to be lit, the lighting and sound had been tested, and the heater was running to keep the tent at a perfect 72 degrees Fahrenheit. The house was impeccable, with tropical flowers accenting nearly every room, the grounds neatly manicured, and the pool and spa ready for use. Alice had seen to every detail. This luau would be one to remember.
Dana had the shower running and was hanging the last of her suits when Alice entered their bedroom, locking the door behind her. She quickly dropped her clothes and did a little pirouette. Dana threw her head back with a delighted laugh, as Alice swaggered towards her with a wink and took her in her arms.
“A week,” she said sincerely, tracing Dana’s lips with her index finger, “is way too long to be apart. I can’t sleep when you’re not next to me.”
“Me either,” Dana murmured before smothering Alice’s lips with her own. “Are you sure we have time?”
“For a proper welcome home?” Alice smiled impishly. “Not even close. But we do have time for a naughty shower. Shane is keeping an eye on things for us while we…ummmm…get dressed.”
“Why Alice, whatever do you mean?” Dana didn’t get the entire sentence out before Al guided her gently to her wet core, eliciting a throaty moan from them both as Dana’s fingers found her swollen folds already wet.
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Great ending to a lovely story. Can’t wait for your next chapter in the lives of our Danish pair.
A fantastic finale. Thank you for your beautiful post. I absolutely adore Danish and thanks to writers like you who never seize to amaze me your creativity and writing styles. As long as you write, I will comment. Yes, I read almost all the Danish fanfics within 4 months started in late March. I am so very grateful to you all undying dedicated Danish writers. Thanks again SammysGirl from the bottom of my heart. I too am looking forward to your next creation.
this was just the perfect ending…and the writing of it was amazing. i hope this isn’t the last of your danish writing.
hello my friend! Just read through your latest….and loved it! it’s been awhile…hope all is going great for you! as you might suspect, I was a sucker for Helena’s sweetness on Lara!
That was AWESOME ending!!! I cracked up at AL and Dane catching Bette and Tina in the bathroom (flippin funny). Loved the wedding,great writing!!!!! I cant wait untill the next story,PPVS P.S You are amazing at writing Sammy!!! Thank you too. :)~
…to a long and happy life together.” You too ;-) Very sweet.
Great story. I love it. I wish they actually had a long happy life together.
oh man fantastic!!!!! i loved it all so beautiful i don’t want it to end:( did i read somewhere that lucky in love will be back soon oh i hope so so very much if not you have done so well i’ve enjoyed everything you’ve written!!! :)
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks a million for his wonderful story! I’ve enjoyed reading where it went from chapter to chapter. Kissing before they were pronounced married made me laugh :) This is great! thanks again. You’re awesome! I hope this will not be the end of your Danish stories.
hiya,sorry, I think I forgot to comment on your last update on this! So I’m doing it together with this one. Wonderful story and wonderful ending! Amazingly good captured and sweet.Can’t wait for your next ones.
YAY!!! I Love THEM!!!! I Love Dave Too!!Great Story!!! Looking fwd to your next story! Keep Up The Great Work!!!
Woo Hoo! I was beyond excited to see your post. I love your writing and your stories. I am really looking forward to the sequel. You write all the characters so well and really amazing Danish. Loved Alice and Dana catching Bette and Tina — it usually seems to be the other way around. And the vows were beautiful. Great. Great. Great. Thank you so much for the story!