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Luau (Chapter 4) -FINALE-
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“What little surprise are you cooking up for your chef?”
“And how do you know it’s not for the children?” Helena tried to deflect Tina’s keen observation. “Or you, for that matter?”
“You’re forgetting that I know that look,” Tina replied amiably. “And it’s definitely not about the children. Or me.”
“Right.” Helena failed to suppress her amusement. “As it happens, I do think Lara deserves a little something…I’m just at something of a loss as to what…”
“Lara’s not exactly a grand gesture kind of girl…”
“Don’t kid yourself darling,” Helena said with a wicked grin. “Under the right circumstances, we’re all grand gesture girls…but in this case a grand gesture won’t say what I want to say.”
“Which is?” Tina caught herself. “I mean if it’s not too personal?”
“Thank you for loving my children,” Helena answered without hesitation.” Thank you for standing by me, even though you had to push aside your own pain to do it. Thank you for being everything to me”
“Hmm,” Tina wrinkled her brow in thought. “That is tough. Flowers?” Helena rolled her eyes at such a tepid suggestion, unaware Tina was teasing her. “Chocolates?”
“Seriously?”
“No,” Tina chuckled. “I was going for the jewelry next, just to see how long I could keep you going.” Helena returned her smile. “I do have a thought though.”
“Do tell.”
“Ask Jun Ying and Wilson if they’d like to help you show Lara how much you all love her. I’ll bet they come up with the perfect solution to your little dilemma.”
Dave met Dana at the front gate, literally forcing her to have the car stop so he could greet her properly. Dana’s flight got in at 11:10 and she was home at 12:30. By then, the tent was on the patio and the tables were being rolled into place. The caterers had already commandeered the kitchen and were wheeling hot boxes this way and that as the cooks worked with frantic precision on their prep, while a couple of Samoan guys worked their magic in a makeshift fire pit, where the delicious aroma of something slow roasted was beginning to emerge.
Alice was working with Tim, their tech guy and editor extraordinaire to make sure that the speakers were working and that the monitor would be positioned so that it could be seen from all angles. All in all, the controlled chaos meant things were well in hand. Still, Dana hadn’t seen Alice for a week. She stood, in the foyer, Dave at her side, wondering if she could spirit Al away for ten minutes or so. Make that half an hour…she felt Alice’s eyes on her before she managed to refocus.
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Great ending to a lovely story. Can’t wait for your next chapter in the lives of our Danish pair.
A fantastic finale. Thank you for your beautiful post. I absolutely adore Danish and thanks to writers like you who never seize to amaze me your creativity and writing styles. As long as you write, I will comment. Yes, I read almost all the Danish fanfics within 4 months started in late March. I am so very grateful to you all undying dedicated Danish writers. Thanks again SammysGirl from the bottom of my heart. I too am looking forward to your next creation.
this was just the perfect ending…and the writing of it was amazing. i hope this isn’t the last of your danish writing.
hello my friend! Just read through your latest….and loved it! it’s been awhile…hope all is going great for you! as you might suspect, I was a sucker for Helena’s sweetness on Lara!
That was AWESOME ending!!! I cracked up at AL and Dane catching Bette and Tina in the bathroom (flippin funny). Loved the wedding,great writing!!!!! I cant wait untill the next story,PPVS P.S You are amazing at writing Sammy!!! Thank you too. :)~
…to a long and happy life together.” You too ;-) Very sweet.
Great story. I love it. I wish they actually had a long happy life together.
oh man fantastic!!!!! i loved it all so beautiful i don’t want it to end:( did i read somewhere that lucky in love will be back soon oh i hope so so very much if not you have done so well i’ve enjoyed everything you’ve written!!! :)
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks a million for his wonderful story! I’ve enjoyed reading where it went from chapter to chapter. Kissing before they were pronounced married made me laugh :) This is great! thanks again. You’re awesome! I hope this will not be the end of your Danish stories.
hiya,sorry, I think I forgot to comment on your last update on this! So I’m doing it together with this one. Wonderful story and wonderful ending! Amazingly good captured and sweet.Can’t wait for your next ones.
YAY!!! I Love THEM!!!! I Love Dave Too!!Great Story!!! Looking fwd to your next story! Keep Up The Great Work!!!
Woo Hoo! I was beyond excited to see your post. I love your writing and your stories. I am really looking forward to the sequel. You write all the characters so well and really amazing Danish. Loved Alice and Dana catching Bette and Tina — it usually seems to be the other way around. And the vows were beautiful. Great. Great. Great. Thank you so much for the story!