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By booking a flight back to Honolulu it was the last place……..no….by going to Florida….I get up from the death grip of my son….My baby so much like Shane it was weird…..I creep to the phone and book a flight for the place that I can’t seem to get away from.
Miami Florida.
Ch 5
I met Joni in Rio. I was sitting on my balcony looking out into the night sky looking at all sailboats flooding the harbor. It was some kind of race. And the girl who picked me up was taking a shower in the bathroom. I look over and see this guy with a huge grin on his face. This guy was the tallest fucking dude I have ever seen… at least close to 7 feet tall. Anyways he is smirking at me. So I nod and point my bottle of Patron in his direction. He leaned in with his glass so I poured him one.
“Hello and thanks for the gift of your drink yeah….”
For some reason Joni always says yeah at the end of every sentence.
“Yeah man no problem….nice night for a race huh?”
“Nice yeah…..so if I may….your woman she is vocal yeah?”
“She is not my woman.”
“But you give her pleasure yeah?”
“Yeah….. I gave her pleasure…..wait… you heard her?”
“Oh yes I did she is quite loud yeah?”
“Yeah….sorry some girls are like that right?’
“I don’t know I have never had the option….”
“Shit….”
“It is not sin where you come from to have relations with the females?”
“I never really thought about it but maybe to some people who don’t have anything better to do than worry about where I put my tongue….I guess….where are you from?”
“I am from Finland a small town called Tamper. It is nice…but quiet. And you where are you from…..what is your name?”
“Shane…my name is Shane. I am from America a big ol’ state called Texas…”
“Yeah…Texas….they make cowboys in Texas yeah?”
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…….. the drama…. im like at your feet lol
Yeah Carmen! Go get your woman! I am glad she is finally admitting she can’t live without her. The list was heartbreaking! Can’t wait to see what you have in store for us next.
I’ve been reading this series from the start and just have to say….your writing is just flat out genius. Thanks so much for sharing your gift.
I’m completely captivated by your fics.I must say I like that they are apart because we get to see the yearning they have for eachother. I especially love reading about their love from Carmen’s point of view.So looking forward to the next update!:)
Better late than never Carmen, but I do wonder how long it will take for her to find Shane in the big ol world. When she does find her it will definitley be interesting!
“But give the kid a break. He is a little boy who lost something close to him.” Not to mention he was kidnapped by some loon and probably saw his grandparents’ violent murder. To say the little guy has experienced some traumatic events would be an understatement. I totally get that. It’s just that the whole situation made me think about parents, the way parents raise their kids, the way the kids react to the world around them, character, etc. It was my first and honest reaction to what I read, and, for the most part, it still is (just tryin’ to be honest here). Now, I may not like certain behaviors (in any character of any story — it’s just bound to happen SOMEtime), but if they *make sense* for the character and *make sense* for the story, who am I to argue, right? And, in this case, they totally make sense for both. Anywho, the story makes me think, react, and reflect (as you may already know. LOL!), and it always makes for good discussion (whether it’s dissecting a character, discussing dynamics, or deciphering lyrics). I’m always excited to read things like that. It’s not just some ho hum read that I’ll forget as soon as I’m finished with it. I look forward to whatever you bring to your adoring audience (which most certainly includes me).