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    Missing. 8

    Story written on February 4, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Author Notes:

    Closer….no hesitation.

     

    “Yes I do. It is the most perfect thing about you. The way it makes me feel….I love it…I love you.”

     

     

    “I love you too….god I was worried.”

     

     

    “I know Carm…I know…and I am sorry. It wasn’t my fault…they came out of nowhere…didn’t even see them.”

     

     

    “I know……………… So are you excited about going home?”

     

     

    “Yeah….I just need to make that side trip….you don’t mind coming along with me do you?”

     

     

    “Never…I would love to see Hawaii not chasing a lunatic down.”

     

     

    “Me too….it will be good for us and then it’s a short flight to L.A.”

     

     

    We walk some more as it gets chilly and starts to mist. I stop and kiss her. One hand on my I.V thingy…the other hand on Carmen.

     

     

    “I love kissing you….and when I get better we are going to make up for lost time.”

     

     

    “Shane,” She says, breathless and panting. “I don’t want to waste anymore time….life is too short.”

     

     

    “Too damn short” I say to her as she turns away from me.

     

     

    “Come on its starting to rain a little harder…don’t want you getting sick….well  more sick than you are.” She says halfway back to the entrance of the hospital.

     

     

    She walks me back to my room and then heads back to her room at the inn a mile or so down the road. I watch her from the window as she walks back alone. She is scared. I know it. I know her. We head back to our regular scheduled lives tomorrow. We will talk. I will make her feel better. I am not worried in anyway.

     

     

    The nurse… Brunhilda comes in with papers for me to sign. She takes the I.V out of my arm and marvels how I don’t wince….at least I think she does I don’t speak German. I see Peggy Peabody’s name on the paperwork and I wonder what exactly did Jimmie do to piss her off. It can’t be good.

     

     

     

     

     

    The flight back to the states is delayed. Carmen is going nuts. She is drunk. Carmen never gets drunk. She is making a drunken I love you speech. It’s cute.

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    1. Shane seems to be coming to a realization about herself while Carmen seems to be slightly falling apart. The call to Marco was sweet. Really are happy that you gave us the warning about your stories ending. You’ll def. be missed.

    2. godddddddd yoou are making thing worse by gicing us a great fucking update… haha i willl fucking miss you everyday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but yea lifes like that …. anyways loved the update but i’m scared of whats next…

    3. I know I haven’t written in awhile. Life has been keeping me on my toes and keeping me from your wonderful stories. I’m really sad to hear that you are going to stop soon, but I got to read some of the best writing I’ve seen, and I will be able to keep that forever. I will really miss the world you created, and the hotness that is Sharmen. I’m honored that you call me your original fan, and for telling me that my comment so long ago made you think about this story and finally post it (that truely made me happier than you know). It’s been a wild ride, and for all our sakes, I hope you’ll change your mind and dream up another fantastic Sharmen adventure! I know this isn’t goodbye, and honestly I don’t know why I’m being so melodramatic. Anyway, until next time…

    5. so glad you are back. i’ve not missed any of your stories. actually, i am not good to crit or advise even admire. but you know what you’ve made my day and night. thanks you sweetie!

    6. This is one of the best updates yet! Knowing that it may be close to the last one is hard to swallow, but it has been a joy reading this saga! I hope Carmen and Shane get what they have been fighting for all along; a happy ending with their little boy!

    7. Wowza! What a way to end a chapter, there. I’m still wrapping my head around the fact that this story will end. :( Sad times, sad times. So this update, like your previous one, was bittersweet. Of course it was a great couple chapters, but knowing that they’re one of the last few kind of dampens the spirits. Sad times. But enough of that! I wish you luck on the awards, because you honestly deserve it (you got my vote in a few places).

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