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“…..Youuuuknow…..Inever…think..no thought….you reallycare…..Imean WHO….Intheirrightmind….wouldloveme….thereisnome…” She says all matter of fact gazing out the window.
“Carmen….we have been over this…” I say trying to unsuccessfully take the champagne bottle out of her sweaty hand.
“I know…jus…hereme…ok…let me talk for once….ithink…its greeaatt…youloveme….ido….itmakesmefffeeeeellllgood….wowthis….stuff isgooood…nnywayy…iamslucky to haveyouuu…and…idun…wan…..to meesssitup nomoreee….ok?”
“Ok…”
She just keeps on talking and I let her. She needs this. The pilot tells us we will land in an hour. He says it’s the weird Hawaiian weather. We land with no bags to claim and head straight for the rental place to rent a boat to make the short trip to the Island of forgiveness. Carmen throws up over the railing and into the sea. I guess that is what three bottles of champagne will do to you.
It’s raining hard when we dock. And at first glance you would think this place was deserted. But I know better. We follow the trail that leads to the huts. I knock on the shaman’s hut and he opens up and smiles bright when he sees me.
“Young one…..how are you? Please come in…”
“Hey ….you look good,”
“You look pale………………. Who is this?”
“This is my Carmen….the woman I spoke of.”
“A pleasure…”
“Nice to meet…. you….Is she alright?”
“Yes she is just a little sick. Too much bubbly…right honey?”
“Yeahh I wanna lay down…”
“Well she can have your old quarters….if you don’t mind?”
“Not at all. I’ll show her the way then we can catch up….”
“Please young one take your time….very nice to meet you young lady…”
‘Same….here…oh god…” Carmen runs out of the hut and I follow her. She doesn’t make it far and makes a mess on his front porch….hut…porch thingy…
"God ………..Shane…I am so sorry….”
“Its cool the rain will wash it away…..come on let me get you to the hut.”
I help her walk slowly over to the little green hut. I open the door and it’s just the way I left it. I get Carmen some water and unroll the bed roll. I get my travel bag and take some clothes out to help her change. I lie there next to her till she gets sleepy.
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Shane seems to be coming to a realization about herself while Carmen seems to be slightly falling apart. The call to Marco was sweet. Really are happy that you gave us the warning about your stories ending. You’ll def. be missed.
godddddddd yoou are making thing worse by gicing us a great fucking update… haha i willl fucking miss you everyday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but yea lifes like that …. anyways loved the update but i’m scared of whats next…
I know I haven’t written in awhile. Life has been keeping me on my toes and keeping me from your wonderful stories. I’m really sad to hear that you are going to stop soon, but I got to read some of the best writing I’ve seen, and I will be able to keep that forever. I will really miss the world you created, and the hotness that is Sharmen. I’m honored that you call me your original fan, and for telling me that my comment so long ago made you think about this story and finally post it (that truely made me happier than you know). It’s been a wild ride, and for all our sakes, I hope you’ll change your mind and dream up another fantastic Sharmen adventure! I know this isn’t goodbye, and honestly I don’t know why I’m being so melodramatic. Anyway, until next time…
great update. It’s sad to know your stories are going to end :( I’ll miss you
so glad you are back. i’ve not missed any of your stories. actually, i am not good to crit or advise even admire. but you know what you’ve made my day and night. thanks you sweetie!
This is one of the best updates yet! Knowing that it may be close to the last one is hard to swallow, but it has been a joy reading this saga! I hope Carmen and Shane get what they have been fighting for all along; a happy ending with their little boy!
Wowza! What a way to end a chapter, there. I’m still wrapping my head around the fact that this story will end. :( Sad times, sad times. So this update, like your previous one, was bittersweet. Of course it was a great couple chapters, but knowing that they’re one of the last few kind of dampens the spirits. Sad times. But enough of that! I wish you luck on the awards, because you honestly deserve it (you got my vote in a few places).