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    Missing. 8

    Story written on February 4, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Closer….no hesitation.

     

     

    “I want us to make love. So bad. So bad….I want to kiss your shoulders. I want to work my way down. I want to kiss your toes. And I want to work my way up…….goodnight Carmen……goodnight.”

     

     

    I lean my head on her shoulder. She moans in her sleep. It makes me weak on the inside. She wraps her arms around me. Everything fades to black as I fall asleep.

     

     

     

     

    Ch 17

     

     

    I wake the next day to ocean air. To the sound of nature all around me. To the sound of Carmen crying. She is trying hard to not let me know she is crying. I walk over to her and sit down next to her. She leans over on me her head on my shoulder. I don’t say anything to her. Sometimes it is better if you let someone get it out of their system. The wind has picked up a bit. Slicing into the hut mixing with the sounds of the waves crashing on the shore.

     

     

     

    “…..Should I feel bad about I what I did?”

     

     

     

    “What do mean?”

     

     

    “Shane…I mean Conrad….should I feel bad about it?”

     

     

    “No…..it was self defense….and I know you don’t feel bad about it….there isn’t anything wrong with it…he killed our friends….took our son….hell he killed Marina’s husband…..I don’t know maybe the act its self but not for the man…..this isn’t what is bugging you so what gives?”

     

     

    “Shane everything you said last night….the guilt you had…and me I feel nothing I didn’t give a second thought…”

     

     

    “So why start now? Don’t cry about him. Don’t cry about me and the choice I made……it was the example I was taught….it kept me alive…..but the bottom line is; its done. It can’t be undone. I don’t want to dwell there…you know? I don’t want that to define me anymore than it already has. Don’t cry…..please…..come on…..you are tired and hungry…..maybe even a little stressed out……lets take a walk around and visit my friend….”

     

     

    We get cleaned up change and make the short walk to the shaman’s hut. Walking with Carmen’s hand in mine it burns in me that need again to be with her. Not just with her in voice or speech but to be with her. This burning need I have to feel her heat that beat by beat. Its driving me nuts. We get to the hut and I knock. No answer.

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    1. Shane seems to be coming to a realization about herself while Carmen seems to be slightly falling apart. The call to Marco was sweet. Really are happy that you gave us the warning about your stories ending. You’ll def. be missed.

    2. godddddddd yoou are making thing worse by gicing us a great fucking update… haha i willl fucking miss you everyday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but yea lifes like that …. anyways loved the update but i’m scared of whats next…

    3. I know I haven’t written in awhile. Life has been keeping me on my toes and keeping me from your wonderful stories. I’m really sad to hear that you are going to stop soon, but I got to read some of the best writing I’ve seen, and I will be able to keep that forever. I will really miss the world you created, and the hotness that is Sharmen. I’m honored that you call me your original fan, and for telling me that my comment so long ago made you think about this story and finally post it (that truely made me happier than you know). It’s been a wild ride, and for all our sakes, I hope you’ll change your mind and dream up another fantastic Sharmen adventure! I know this isn’t goodbye, and honestly I don’t know why I’m being so melodramatic. Anyway, until next time…

    5. so glad you are back. i’ve not missed any of your stories. actually, i am not good to crit or advise even admire. but you know what you’ve made my day and night. thanks you sweetie!

    6. This is one of the best updates yet! Knowing that it may be close to the last one is hard to swallow, but it has been a joy reading this saga! I hope Carmen and Shane get what they have been fighting for all along; a happy ending with their little boy!

    7. Wowza! What a way to end a chapter, there. I’m still wrapping my head around the fact that this story will end. :( Sad times, sad times. So this update, like your previous one, was bittersweet. Of course it was a great couple chapters, but knowing that they’re one of the last few kind of dampens the spirits. Sad times. But enough of that! I wish you luck on the awards, because you honestly deserve it (you got my vote in a few places).

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