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More Than a Feeling
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Bette smiled at Tina before shouting. Yes Daddy. Were here.
Melvin emerged from the kitchen, dressed to impress, as he usually did. He always dressed for company, no matter if it was just a friend from school. Guests were guests, and a Porter never looked anything but their best in front of guests. Ah, this must be Tina. He asserted, extending his hand, his mustache curving as he smiled. Pleased to meet you.
Tina took it, offering Melvin a nervous but kind smile. Nice to meet you too sir.
I hope you like steak.
I hate steak. I do, Mr. Porter.
Excellent.
I hope you like it smothered in homemade barbeque sauce. Bette added, rolling her eyes.
Tina only nodded, smiling shyly.
Figuring Tina needed a quick break, Bette said, Im gonna go show Tee my room.
Melvin nodded, heading back toward the kitchen. Dinner is going to be ready soon.
Okay. Bette grabbed Tinas hand and began to pull her up the stairs.
They walked up the stairs and down another gallery-like hallway before reaching Bettes room. Bette opened the door and allowed Tina to enter first. Tina stepped in and looked around in awe. The room was cozy and full of warmth the rest of the house lacked. In the center of the room, against the wall, was Bettes full-sized bed, covered in a beautiful black comforter with gold embroidered ends. On one side there was a lamp table that held a picture, a lamp, and an alarm clock. A few inches from that was a full-length mirror, next to what Tina assumed was the closet. Directly to Tinas left was a large dresser, and a few ways off was an easel and stool, almost right in front of the room window. Watercolors and Oil paintings hung from all four walls, which Tina knew could only belong to Bette or someone close to her. They looked like nothing downstairs.
Tina walked further in. Right beside the dresser was Bettes desk, a whole lot neater than Tinas was, and a nice dark mahogany wood. Tina walks over to the easel and runs her hand across the paint-splattered base, picking up a paintbrush. This is Bette. Right herethis is all her.
Bette watched Tina silently move around the room with a curious confusion. What is she doing? She sat down on her bed, watching Tina explore. Finally, after a few minutes, Tina turned.
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Manda, you do know that you rock don’t you? Don’t worry about the lack of TiBette NC-17s. Anyone who tortured themself with S3 should be used to that…once again, and with more, sarcasm, thank you Ilene. Thank you very much! But, I’m all for TiBette having heavy make out sessions. Afterall, there’s a lot that can be done without, umm, “going for the gold.” In fact, that would make this Good Friday an Excellent Friday…sorry, my hormones got the best of me there.
I forgot to ask you to post soon…so, please post soon!
Yes.. lets head to bette’s room ;).. STUDIES need to be done.. hahaha. Fab chapter!.. Poor Tina… having to go thro the melvin test.. shes a trooper tho… she made it.. hopefully now they can play:).. Post soon! PLEEEASE!
Hot make out sessions will do for now, nothing to heavy … I gotta tell you, every tibette NC17 I have read, has helped me, forget s3 almost, I felt so DEPRIVED of tibette love making this season lol .. thank god for fanfiction right!, but take ur time no need to rush!
It is nice to see two young women who care for one another get to know each other before jumping into a sexual relationship. Being friends and girlfriends first can lead to a longer adult relationship. I like how Tina held her own with Melvin. I am not sure that I could have held up under those circumstances.
this was great…love tina’s struggle with clothes…wonderful story
haha yes i do believe sum anatomy shuld b studied
Great chapter. I think you are so right about them not rushing into having sex. Truthfully, they’re just starting to get to know each other. However, when the time comes, there are quite a few writers that write fabulous NC-17s that you may be able to persuade to help you. Chasemenow, giasony, flairforthedramatic, allyemmerson, just to name a few–hehe. Great chapter, thanks Manda.
Well well, happy studying! These girls are so young and they need to take their time, so let them have it. Your story doesn’t need to be spiced up with NC-17s, so just keep on going like you had in mind. Thanks a lot for this chapter!
If your NC-17s are anything like every other chapter you’ve written, they won’t suck. So, just keep that opinion in mind. :) So Tina hates steak huh? I’m one of those people where sometimes I’m like, “Meh I’ll eat it anyway” so I probably wouldn’t have had any problems there. lol So they are off to “study” now? Hope they don’t get interrupted because that really kills the “study” atmosphere. ;)
I forgot to add something earlier because I had just woken up and my brain still thought it was sleepy time. Well mostly it’s just a repeat of what I had said a few chapters ago. I agree that B&T shouldn’t have sex yet. Chances are they haven’t even thought that far ahead. But “studying” is just about right. They can take the “test” later. :)
heavy make out session to follow….lol!!!
Don’t worry about the sex part, too soon. Your writing is great, as is the story – just the way it is.
Tina is naughty. I love it.
Tina did good wiht Melvin! i like it, and i am agree with you they are not ready yet to have sex and but eventually they will get there and i thing you and they will be so ready! continue post a like so much this story
Good chapter. Wow Melvin have a lots of question to ask. Ok now let see some make out. Ok post soon please, thanks!