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More Than a Feeling
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I like your room. Its beautiful. She walked over to one of the watercolors by Bettes bed. It was of the town at night, a favorite subject of Bettes, Tina assumed. Did you paint this?
Bette nodded. Yeah. I told you I cant get the town quite right though.
No, I think you got it. Tina said, smiling. She looked around some more, noticing a small painting over the lamp table. She walked to it. It didnt look like all the others. It was a picture of a little dark toddler in a pink dress, running through some high grass, her black curls blowing in the wind. That looks like Bette.
Bette walked up behind Tina. My mother painted that.
Is that you?
Uh hmm. Bette wrapped her arm around Tinas waist, resting her chin on her shoulder.
Its amazing. Tina whispered, closing her eyes. She could see a little two-year-old Bette in her soft pink dress, trying her best to run around in the high grass while her low dexterity barely permitted it. It mustve been windy that day, but not to the point of chilly. She could see a woman sitting on the stool with one eye on her daughter and one eye on the canvas, choosing this simple moment to record for eternity.
Are you all right? Bette asked as Tina leaned into her body without saying anything for the longest time.
Tina opened her eyes and inhaled deeply. Im fine. I really like your room. She looked down at the picture on Bettes lamp table. Picking it up, she saw that it was a woman with wavy brown hair and big brown eyes that seemed to twinkle, even in the photograph. She resembled Bette, only she was lighter. Is this your mother?
Yeah. Maxine. The last syllable was drawn out in a sigh as if Bette hadnt said that name in a while.
Shes beautiful.
Thank you.
You kinda look like her.
Do I? Bette kissed Tinas neck. Does that make me beautiful too?
No. That makes you gorgeous. Tina said, spinning in Bettes arm, turning to face her, catching her lips.
Suddenly, Melvin called from downstairs. Girls, dinner is ready!
Bette pulled back at the sound of her fathers voice. Groaning, she let go of Tinas waist and grabbed her hand instead. Ready?
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Manda, you do know that you rock don’t you? Don’t worry about the lack of TiBette NC-17s. Anyone who tortured themself with S3 should be used to that…once again, and with more, sarcasm, thank you Ilene. Thank you very much! But, I’m all for TiBette having heavy make out sessions. Afterall, there’s a lot that can be done without, umm, “going for the gold.” In fact, that would make this Good Friday an Excellent Friday…sorry, my hormones got the best of me there.
I forgot to ask you to post soon…so, please post soon!
Yes.. lets head to bette’s room ;).. STUDIES need to be done.. hahaha. Fab chapter!.. Poor Tina… having to go thro the melvin test.. shes a trooper tho… she made it.. hopefully now they can play:).. Post soon! PLEEEASE!
Hot make out sessions will do for now, nothing to heavy … I gotta tell you, every tibette NC17 I have read, has helped me, forget s3 almost, I felt so DEPRIVED of tibette love making this season lol .. thank god for fanfiction right!, but take ur time no need to rush!
It is nice to see two young women who care for one another get to know each other before jumping into a sexual relationship. Being friends and girlfriends first can lead to a longer adult relationship. I like how Tina held her own with Melvin. I am not sure that I could have held up under those circumstances.
this was great…love tina’s struggle with clothes…wonderful story
haha yes i do believe sum anatomy shuld b studied
Great chapter. I think you are so right about them not rushing into having sex. Truthfully, they’re just starting to get to know each other. However, when the time comes, there are quite a few writers that write fabulous NC-17s that you may be able to persuade to help you. Chasemenow, giasony, flairforthedramatic, allyemmerson, just to name a few–hehe. Great chapter, thanks Manda.
Well well, happy studying! These girls are so young and they need to take their time, so let them have it. Your story doesn’t need to be spiced up with NC-17s, so just keep on going like you had in mind. Thanks a lot for this chapter!
If your NC-17s are anything like every other chapter you’ve written, they won’t suck. So, just keep that opinion in mind. :) So Tina hates steak huh? I’m one of those people where sometimes I’m like, “Meh I’ll eat it anyway” so I probably wouldn’t have had any problems there. lol So they are off to “study” now? Hope they don’t get interrupted because that really kills the “study” atmosphere. ;)
I forgot to add something earlier because I had just woken up and my brain still thought it was sleepy time. Well mostly it’s just a repeat of what I had said a few chapters ago. I agree that B&T shouldn’t have sex yet. Chances are they haven’t even thought that far ahead. But “studying” is just about right. They can take the “test” later. :)
heavy make out session to follow….lol!!!
Don’t worry about the sex part, too soon. Your writing is great, as is the story – just the way it is.
Tina is naughty. I love it.
Tina did good wiht Melvin! i like it, and i am agree with you they are not ready yet to have sex and but eventually they will get there and i thing you and they will be so ready! continue post a like so much this story
Good chapter. Wow Melvin have a lots of question to ask. Ok now let see some make out. Ok post soon please, thanks!