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Only Ever You – Chapter 4
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Not long ago Dana had a conversation with Bette about her rocky relationship and after taking some well offered advice, Dana truly felt that she and Lara were on the path to mending things between them. Clearly she had been wrong.
After the women said their goodbyes Alice shifted to stand but when Dana remained glued in place, the blonde decided to stay where she was. They sat in silence for what felt like a lifetime, neither quite knowing what to say.
Alice was the first one who found her voice to speak, her tone soft. “Dana ..”
“Not now, Al” Dana sighed as she rested her head against the back of the couch, her eyes glossy. “I’m not in the mood for one of your jokes right now”
“I wasn’t going to joke” Alice replied a little more forcefully than intended. She couldn’t help but take offense to her friend’s words. Did Dana not think she was capable of being serious?
“Can we just do this later?” Dana glanced at the saddened Alice before getting to her feet. She didn’t bother to wait for a response before walking off, leaving Alice alone on the floor.
“Sure” The blonde said softly, the answer more for herself than anything.
Despite their differences, Alice had always felt like Dana could and would go to her with any problems. She knew the brunette probably needed to process the situation but couldn’t deny the hurt she felt that Dana chose to walk away rather than to seek comfort with her.
She rationalized that Dana just needed some time alone and that once the brunette had a clear head, she would come around.
Alice sighed as she grabbed a handful of grass that had grown between two slabs of concrete, tugging it free. As she let the blades slip from her fingers, Alice wondered if it was wrong of her to feel even the slightest bit of satisfaction despite Dana’s pain.
Her best friend was hurting but Alice couldn’t help but feel a sense of hope of knowing that when Dana finally decided to come around, she would be there to make it all better.
She smiled with the possibility of things to come despite the fact that at the same time, she felt like the worst type of person in the world.
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I don’t remember if i already said it – but so far i really don’t like Bette in this story. Even Brenda sounds more human than she.
Waiting for the next!
P.S. I really don’t care in any other chracters in stories besides Bette and Tina (and their childs), but i must say i never understood Danice in the show. For me they always were too “forcefully”. Dana with Lara seems more natural for me.
Hi !
I understand your frustrations but I’m sure you’ll come to love Bette eventually .. I hope ????
As for Dana .. I’ve always loved her with Lara too. My favorites will always be Bette and Tina but I decided to try something a little different with this story and give everyone a bigger role considering they all grew up together and they’ll be featured in a lot of scenes. Promise to always keep B & T as the main focus ????
Yeah, i still have hope in this Bette)
Thanks.
Hey, LxD:
Great chapter, poor Tina sacrificed herself all those years to take care of her mother and at the end, the old lady is dying.
Here is when we reflect on how selfish we are some times, and that is part of our growth as persons, and we see it in Bette’s ways to deal with her feelings for Tina, well you live and you learn.
I think, again Tina feels abandoned by Bette as it was in the past when Bette left her without seeing behind and Tina had to face all the sadness and work to take care of her mother, now again she feels desolated and misunderstood for the only person for who she has deep feelings, the one that is in her heart as the love of her life.
I hope Bette could find Tina and apologize and talk to her because she is the only one who can really console and love her, the only one who Tina wants and is waiting for.
I also hope that Dana will face Lara and perhaps Alice may have some chance with her.
About Shane and Carmen, well hopefully the brunette will realize that is time to get mature and stop going from bed to bed and from girl to girl and decide to settle with Carmen.
Thanks again for the chapter and PPS.
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Hey P.
I agree with everything you said!!!
Thanks for posting!
Oh dear I really don’t like Bette just against all my wanting to ! Please change her as soon as, please!
Don’t like Brenda and happy about that!
Enjoying getting involved with your take on the characters in the story and have faith in you being a B & T lover at heart :-)
SG
Thank you for the new part!
Like many others don’t like this Bette so far, but i trust you to make her better)
I understand Bette shes been in the dark all these years.. shes going off what she sees no ones telling her anything.. and Brenda’s like a bad penny. Touching Tina and her not pulling away untill Bette shows up.. Bette not know it’s more of a consoling touch. Even though deep down Brenda wished it was more.
It’s sad that this has gone on and no one has told Bette. Knowing she was blaming Tina for splitting up. See two of their closes friends hurting.i mean i undestand not wanting Bette to mess up her college path but after college filling her in.. easing both their pains.. but that just life when we need someone to but in their no where to be found.. but when you dont wish for meddling their they are.. destroying you..
I love the story and its very believable. Please post again soon. And thank you.
Very much enjoying your story.
Here we are coming to the end of August…..what happened? Bette has been searching for almost a month..did she find Tina? What about Tina’s mom? Is she still hanging on? As much as I am against any physical violence I want to smack Brenda up against the wall and hope her brain rattles enough to forget who she is as well as never remembering Tina! Please help and post again soon before I go out searching for anyone named Brenda!! LOL…now that I got that out of my system I love this please post again SOON!