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Only Ever You – Chapter 4
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Now as she looked at Dana’s heartbroken expression, Alice couldn’t help but feel saddened for her best friend. She opened her mouth to offer comfort to the hurting brunette but was met with a slap to the chest that instantly silenced her and made her jump.
“Shit, they’re coming this way!”
Dana turned and jumped onto the couch, hopping over the back in an attempt to hide. Alice glanced at Lara who appeared to be walking the woman to a car that seemed to be in their direction before following Dana’s lead, both of them stealthily peeking out from behind the back of the couch. They ducked down when the pair approached the sidewalk.
“Who just leaves a couch like that in the middle of a doorway?”
Alice and Dana looked at each other with panic as they listened to the unfamiliar voice that no doubt belonged to the mystery woman. They sat quietly on the floor, their backs resting against the couch.
“I’m honestly surprised. The people in this town are usually more considerate than that”
Alice took offense to Lara’s words and opened her mouth to say something in response but was silenced when Dana slapped a hand over her mouth.
“So I’ll see you next week then?”
Dana’s eyes widened in fear at the sound of the mystery woman’s words and she held her breath as she waited for Lara’s response.
“Definitely, same place?”
Dana’s heart sank and she felt Alice’s eyes on her even as she refused to look at her best friend, her gaze instead focused on a spot on the floor.
“Sure, it can be our spot” The woman chuckled and Dana felt her heart break a little more, “What are you going to tell your girlfriend?”
Dana immediately lifted her head, unintentionally holding her breath once more. She silently prayed for an answer that proved Lara wasn’t who Dana had suspected her to be, wanting nothing more than for her girlfriend to be the loving faithful woman she had always thought she was.
“That I’m going shopping with my mom. Dana hates shopping so she won’t question it or want to come along”
Just like that, Dana felt all hope shatter as the world seemed to fall out from under her. Everything she knew felt like a lie and she found herself questioning it all. Those countless late nights, last minute business trips, meetings with clients. How long had Lara been cheating?
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I don’t remember if i already said it – but so far i really don’t like Bette in this story. Even Brenda sounds more human than she.
Waiting for the next!
P.S. I really don’t care in any other chracters in stories besides Bette and Tina (and their childs), but i must say i never understood Danice in the show. For me they always were too “forcefully”. Dana with Lara seems more natural for me.
Hi !
I understand your frustrations but I’m sure you’ll come to love Bette eventually .. I hope ????
As for Dana .. I’ve always loved her with Lara too. My favorites will always be Bette and Tina but I decided to try something a little different with this story and give everyone a bigger role considering they all grew up together and they’ll be featured in a lot of scenes. Promise to always keep B & T as the main focus ????
Yeah, i still have hope in this Bette)
Thanks.
Hey, LxD:
Great chapter, poor Tina sacrificed herself all those years to take care of her mother and at the end, the old lady is dying.
Here is when we reflect on how selfish we are some times, and that is part of our growth as persons, and we see it in Bette’s ways to deal with her feelings for Tina, well you live and you learn.
I think, again Tina feels abandoned by Bette as it was in the past when Bette left her without seeing behind and Tina had to face all the sadness and work to take care of her mother, now again she feels desolated and misunderstood for the only person for who she has deep feelings, the one that is in her heart as the love of her life.
I hope Bette could find Tina and apologize and talk to her because she is the only one who can really console and love her, the only one who Tina wants and is waiting for.
I also hope that Dana will face Lara and perhaps Alice may have some chance with her.
About Shane and Carmen, well hopefully the brunette will realize that is time to get mature and stop going from bed to bed and from girl to girl and decide to settle with Carmen.
Thanks again for the chapter and PPS.
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Hey P.
I agree with everything you said!!!
Thanks for posting!
Oh dear I really don’t like Bette just against all my wanting to ! Please change her as soon as, please!
Don’t like Brenda and happy about that!
Enjoying getting involved with your take on the characters in the story and have faith in you being a B & T lover at heart :-)
SG
Thank you for the new part!
Like many others don’t like this Bette so far, but i trust you to make her better)
I understand Bette shes been in the dark all these years.. shes going off what she sees no ones telling her anything.. and Brenda’s like a bad penny. Touching Tina and her not pulling away untill Bette shows up.. Bette not know it’s more of a consoling touch. Even though deep down Brenda wished it was more.
It’s sad that this has gone on and no one has told Bette. Knowing she was blaming Tina for splitting up. See two of their closes friends hurting.i mean i undestand not wanting Bette to mess up her college path but after college filling her in.. easing both their pains.. but that just life when we need someone to but in their no where to be found.. but when you dont wish for meddling their they are.. destroying you..
I love the story and its very believable. Please post again soon. And thank you.
Very much enjoying your story.
Here we are coming to the end of August…..what happened? Bette has been searching for almost a month..did she find Tina? What about Tina’s mom? Is she still hanging on? As much as I am against any physical violence I want to smack Brenda up against the wall and hope her brain rattles enough to forget who she is as well as never remembering Tina! Please help and post again soon before I go out searching for anyone named Brenda!! LOL…now that I got that out of my system I love this please post again SOON!