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Original of the Species
The brunette was brought back from her reverie by a knock at her door. She quickly got up and opened the door fearing it was her annoying landlady again. Bette’s heart skipped more than one beat when she saw the woman she had been daydreaming about standing right there, at the entrance of that beach house.
“Hi” The blonde shyly said fearing this was actually not such a good idea, since Bette was showing signs of anything actually.
“Hi” Bette said realizing this wasn’t a dream; that this marvelous creature was indeed standing there. If her smile would have been bigger it wouldn’t have fit in her face anymore.
Tina went back to breathing and melting as she saw the smile appear so brightly on the brunette’s beautiful features.
“I thought that you would be exhausted to cook for yourself and we did mention the word date so… here I am, I hope I’m not disturbing you” Tina shyly said, also smiling.
“Please come in, you could never disturb me” Bette politely said as she invited the blonde to step inside. The house wasn’t that big but it was really warm, with wooden floors and matching furniture. There was an open kitchen that looked quite modern, a living room/dinning room with an incredible view of the beach and the ocean and a very comfortable looking couch. No TV, just a huge stereo. There was a wooden stair that probably lead to bedrooms and the bathroom.
“Wow Bette, this is beautiful… and you were not kidding, this place is actually on the beach” Tina said mesmerized at the view of the ocean.
“Thanks, it was the most quiet and secluded one I could find” The brunette said still not believing Tina was there. Oh my god she looks so damn beautiful in those white linen pants, oh and that deep blue tank top Bette thought as she ogled the blonde.
“As I was saying I figured you were probably not in the mood for cooking, and I remembered that you said that some chefs enjoy more eating healthier and simpler food… so I brought us some sandwiches and a few other snacks from a very good organic store I frequently go to” Tina said lifting a couple of bags she was carrying with her. “I hope you don’t mind me invading you like this, but I didn’t know if I could wait until Wednesday to see you again” The blonde shyly admitted.
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ttscorpio29 says
Omg, you can’t leave off there !!!! This is getting good please post soon
AmandaMG says
love this… so glad tina made that trip back… did i say i loved this… pps
Vixien00 says
Love it! I’m so into this story!!!!11 ;) PPS
mariam says
yes, this is going very well, like it should. PPVS
Dainty says
Awwwwww, new love is so exciting. So happy Tina went back to be with her. They are going slowly and learning things about each other. Hope Tina can stay the whole time if Bette wants her to. Loved the update and hope in the next chapter they will continue their dance, etc. Thanks for posting. PPVS
didi1956 says
Amazing as always.Thank you.
MSFS says
I’m feeling the next chapter will be even more exciting.
ut says
That was wonderful and glad Tina come to see Bette, now let see more of them, thanks!
pekegal says
I think my mum and Tina’s mum are related. LOL! Well done again…you may have had a harder time writing this one…but I thought it flowed well from the 2 girlfriends moment (T & K), the parents + Tina moment, and then the 1st date. Oh, so sweet!!!!
lodeerca says
This story unravels so smoothly! It’s like watching a movie. I like the choises you make of the moments you give us dialogues.
ayesha23 says
this is shaping up to be an excellent first ‘real’ date. hmmm how will this one end?
pattifloatn says
So romantic, Tina is really make this first non-date special.
chelseagal says
Well if you had problem writing this , well it really did not show. You did a greta job of framing the scene and I really just love this version of Bette and Tina. Thank you and PPVS
wkm says
Really enjoyed this chapter but come on leaving us hanging like that…
cvu says
Ok this habit of yours must put to a stop before it became a regular habit? but may i say, aww, here they’re come, and it’s going to be a long night ahead of them.
Nanc says
Lovely – more date please!
akalittlered says
So Wonderful and Amazing!!!! What a Great frist date!!! Thank you PPVS
celchic says
this keeps on getting better. next post soon please
monrazz says
Thanks for the great update! The progression here seems just right for these 2. PPS
favcouple says
Oh just excellent aboslutely freakin excellent. Thank you.
OliviaKelly says
Wow that was a very sexy last paragraph and statement. It’s gettin really juicy! PPS!
OneStorm1 says
Tina is just too cute. PPS
lilla= says
finally I caught up with your story, and all I can say: continue please!!!!!!
Sharod says
Getting to know you, getting to know all about you. Go Tina, make Bette, your girl. Dancing in the moon light, can’t get much better than that.